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    1. ShadowRaeper 12 yrs ago

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[/b]Jake Starling[/b]


Still stuck on his spot, he kept observing the surroundings. Everywhere were decomposing humans running after students... Teachers and students almost looked like they were dead... And they were hunting each other... Just for the lacks of blood and human flesh...
Jake slowly crawled a bit back as he took out his notebook, he never imagined he would get into an adventure like this... Let alone be a loner as always... In a dangerous enviroment like this...
As he took out his pencil he started to write everything he saw about the decomposing humans... Every single aspect that he could find on them, and even made a small sketch of them... For this information could be usefull one day, if he even makes it out alive...
It woudn't suprise Jake that no one would even care that he is alive or death, he doesn't even have any friends who would think about saving Jake's ass... And yet Jake had to be strong for the time being... But his knees were shacking like hell... He coudn't even stand on them... Let alone run for it...
As he crawled a bit back... He made a stupid move... The small rocks that were on the roof, he accidentely made a few fall down... As a reaction from the Stalkers that Jake started to call them, they suddenly turned around and started to move towards where Jake was... Luckly for him he was to high to get grabbed or eaten by them, for they coudn't reach him.
Why was he such a loner... Why was his study more inmportant to him than having friends... Now he would surelly die a lonely death with none who would even care...
And yet... Jake just found a new clue to these Stalkers, they react to sound wich means their eyesight must be blurred... Again Jake grabbed his notebook and started to write in it, these kind of informations are valuable in these desperate times... Information would be everything...
Mad Scarlet said
It would probably end up being in a Mystery Dungeon type of world, but where we don't necessarily have teams? You could FORM teams, if you'd like, but maybe there won't be a limit to how many people can join?Or it could be more like a guild as a whole--if we thought that teams would not include everyone.


I think it's quite handy to create it like a guild kind of thing, for then you keep the mystery dungeon kind of type in the RP itself :)
Aldo... then you do need certain ranks within the guild, or would it then more likely be a guild like King Arthur and his round table where everyone is equal?
Jake Sterling


As he sat there in the shadows on the roof, he slowly started to pack up his things and wantedt to go down stairs... Untill he heard something strange, a crack made him rethink his option of going down there...
Something has happened... Something that isn't quite right... Jake turned around and started to walk for the other door, aldo something in the back of his mind told him to find a spot safe enough... High enough... and out of sight...
Should he listen to his subconcious or would he just start to walk downstairs... And get back to class?...
His subconcious won and so he started to walk even higher, up the stairs of the electricity building, making sure that he wans't followed... Making sure he would be safe for what might come... Or it was just his mind playing wicked games with him...
As he got at the top of the stairs he grabbed the rooftop and climbed untop of it, making sure he could see the entire roof, but also stayed low... From here he could see what was going on, if something was going on and he would be able to stay safe from any harm aslong as he won't be spotted...
So as Jake made sure not to be spotted... He remained quiet and remained on his stomach... Laying down untill everything would be safe... in his eyes...
You got my interest :)
Windreda said
ShadowRaeper...I can't accept this. If this was a casual OOC you could probably get away with a sheet like this, but this is just bad. Many words are misspelled, her personality and background are way too vague, and you don't even include all of the bullets I wanted you to in my Character Template. Other things I would like you to address are your powers, while fine by itself the tiers are a little TOO specific than I'd like. How do you judge what's 75 feet away and what's 25 feet away in text. I would like to see more of how powerful her magic is, not necessarily how far away she can lift things. Rather than give a specific number, simply allude to the fact that her range has increased. Another issue you need to address is how powerful this magic is, multiple objects are good but what of the weight of the object, the duration of the lift, etc, etc.I also don't really understand the less clothes comment, does she wear armor or is the difference between clothing that covers her body THAT much related to her speed? I would address the spelling errors, reevaluate her magic, be a bit more specific with her personality(You vaguely hint at a darkness inside her, but to me that feels too much like "Main Character Syndrome"), and MUCH more specific with her background. In a city that assigns roles, how did she become a librarian, her reaction to magic, etc. etc.


Thanks for the tip :) I didn't really knew how you truelly wanted it, so now i can create it into a CS you wanted :)
For my english... sorry... It isn't my main languedge...
Looks like a nice rp :)
Count me in, love pokemon ^^

Aldo... If you truelly want to do it as Pokemon Mystery Dungeon, then how much will you allow?
Because each team in those "games" excisted out of 3 pokemons :/ xD
Name:

Maya Tersan

Gender:

Female

Age:

21

Appearance:



Maya her blue hair is quite long, it is something she is proud of, she has a normal body build and her lenght is average like any other girl.
She always tries to wear as les clothes as possible so that she can move more freely in them, as her clothes also give enough room for her to move quite fast if she has to.

Magic(If applicable):

Telekinese

Tier 1: Maya is able to move an object within 5 meters away.

Tier 2: Maya is able to move an object within 15 meters away.

Tier 3: Maya is able to move two objects at the same time.

Tier 4: Maya is able to move objects within 35 meters away.

Tier 5: Maya is able to move objects within 45 meters away.

Tier 6: Maya is able to move three objects at the same time.

Tier 7: Maya is able to move objects within 55 meters away.

Tier 8: Maya is able to move objects within 65 meters away.

Tier 9: Maya is able to move four objects at the same time.

Tier 10: Maya is able to move objects within 75 meters away.

Etc Etc....

Personality:

Maya is a girl who is quite sweet and nice, or thats just how she seems to be on the outside.
Maya actually is one who wants to purge the world of evil, thinking of any possible way to do so, aldo justice is done by the police as most people say, Maya thinks that justice can come in different ways.
There for she holds her secret hidden away, for her darkness that dwelms within her will come out eventually once the time is right.
Maya also sometimes feels lost, aldo she barelly makes it seeable, for she feels like her life is meaningless and doesn't has a purpose for anyone.

Background:

Maya comes from a family who barelly came around, aldo she didn't care much for money. Aslong as they had a roof above their heads and food to feed them, she was fine with it. She didn't had any siblings, for the one who would have been her sibling died with birth.
Her father works as a plumber, aldo its not the best job, it feeded them and gave them their house. Her mother worked in a shop for clothes, it was something she did few times a week, just so that they had some extra money.
Once Maya got out of the house, she started to find her own place and started to work in the library, books always fascinated her for so she found it suitable to work with them.
After she got accepted with her work, she found a small house just outside of the rich district, where she started to life her small but certain life.
Day in day out she goes to the library, read the books as she looks at the customers coming in to give their rented books back or take books with them.

Theme:

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Jake Sterling


As Jake placed back the books, he still was quite looking around, aldo he wasn't bullied in this school. Once he placed back all the books he took from the stacks, placed his ipad back in his back and removed his earbuds, he started to walk for the door of the library to leave it.
Once out of the library he looked at his watch, to see how late it was... Lunch time, he walked towards the stairs to go to the roof, he had a spot there wich wasn't that crowded.
As he ascended the stairs, he still looked around him, to see if he was followed or if anyone was even walking behind him, it was something he always did.
As he came to the roof he looked around, it was quite crowded, but his spot was still empty, no one ever sat at the spot he picked out, because it was quite dark and the sun barelly touched it. As he walked for his spot, he took out his lunch, Jake knew how to cook so it wasn't that hard to make a lunch for himself.
As he sat down against the fence, he opened his lunchbox and slowly started to eat the sandwiches that were inside it. Still observing his surrounding, aldo his body was quite relaxed...
Jake Sterling


As always Jake was sitting in the library, stacks of books were surrounding him. Barelly making him visible towards those who are aswell in the library.
As Jake scrolled trough his ipad, lostening to his music from his ipod and changing the page's of the book he is reading, he also always checked his surrounding. It was something he learned from his old school, something that slipped inside his mind for the bullies that always chased. As he took of his glasses to clean them he coudnt see much, just some blurred books infront of him and people walking by , he placed his glasses back on his head as he kept changing his pages. He already read this book for quite some times and always kept a notebook with important information in his small bag that was hanging on his belt.
But for this book there wasn't anything interesting anynore to write about in his notebook, so he closed it. Stood up and started to slowly place back the books he took from their shelves, keeping his eyes on his surrounding.
Soul, is my character accepted? :)
then i can join the RP ^^
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