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Tyki said
i understand your want for creativity and honestly i do tend to have ocs but i just think that the char i have in mind would be well suited to a battle like this. i may throw an oc or two in there for good measure though :3


It's fine man, there are few rules here. Do you what you want, I was only sharing my opinion :)
Tyki said
question, is there magic in this? if so i'd love to bring in someone whom a few of you may recognize *looks at my current avatar*


Freeform is freeform dude, do what you want. Although I always encourage people to be creative, rather than copy and paste someone else's work. Still, I can see the appeal in it.
Chad looked at his friends gathered in the lobby; Jackie at least looked content now the speaker docks were in play, but Manse was looking edgy. Leah was speaking to him in hushed tones, but he could tell the conversation was about the hospital's creepy feel. Truth be told, the more Chad was there, the less he felt intimidated by the whole place. It was just an old building, with a colourful history and a great deal of partying potential. Though, that partying potential weren't going to materialise in the lobby - the place was a dump. The cafeteria looked like a shore fire idea.

"Yo, Wallace, wait up," yelled Chad, his echo bouncing around the hospital's empty depths. As he went to head off, he stopped and looked at Jackie. "Any trouble shows up, gimme a hollah and we'll come back."

Wallace had moved on down the corridor. His flash light was wavering across the decapitated walls, and Chad could see him clearly silhouetted by its strong rebounding rays. Starting at a mild jog, he quickly caught up with him - before painfully forgetting he'd left his crate of bud behind. Ah well, I can come back for it once we find somewhere worth staying. Wallace turned to face Chad, and it was obvious something was troubling him. Chad guessed what.

"Look man, it's just some clown playing around with me. You know how many guys and gals have got it in for me for all the shit I did to them? Remember that Steve Holloway kid? When I filled his locker with dog crap because ... well I can't remember why I did it, but that's just an example. Trust me dude, just someone trying to rile us."

A crude map was slanted on the wall next to them, and Chad tapped it with a smile. "Visitor's Cafeteria, see? That's our cookie, let's go man!"

Tokki said
Kinda feel bad for those who've got a lot to read now when they catch up.


There were a lot of players on sign up, so the post flow was bound to be rather rapid. You always get those who drop out, or lag behind. The ones that bother to catch up are the ones worth keeping, in my opinion.
Trinton heard an earth shattering roar as he made for the gate, and turned to see a horrific monstrosity in the form of a massive barbarian surge into his men. Bloodied screams took to the air, as the spear wall folded, and the giant's comrades drove forwards into the breaches. He'd left his men for five seconds, and already his absence was wrecking Rivergate's chances of survival. Realising that the gate's mechanisms would have to be left to whoever was there to do something about them, he trotted back towards the melee.

Casually, he raised his whistle to his lip, and fired shrieks into the air repeatedly. Again and again, he emptied the contents of his lungs into the now-moist mouth piece. Exhausted from the fighting, as he was, the weight of his armour was heavy on his shoulders, but a cool summer breeze revived him as it washed over his exposed perspiring face.

"To me, to me!" He shouted. Soldiers who had been descending from the eastern and western wall, and the south eastern and south western towers, ran towards him. He was the only captain in Rivergate's roster, Lord Polvark's second in command in the grand scheme of things. His word was practically the Emperor's. "Rally to me!"

Ten, then twenty, then fifty, and then eighty miss-matched men-at-arms, peasant militia and disgraced legionnaires assembled behind him. He cast down his hatchet, exchanging it for a longsword and a towershield brought forwards by one of Rivergate's quartermasters. A young squire bearing the coat-of-arms Trinton did not recognised, presented him with a simple skull cap and a damp rag. He used the rag to wipe the vomit from his face, and then planted the bowl-shaped helmet on his head. The screams of the faltering defenders at the gate reached their peak, and Trinton Ironspike, loyal Captain of the Empire, and stalwart defender of the Emperor's claims, pointed his sword towards the throng of bodies.

"For the Emperor!"

The Imperial defenders stormed onto the flanks of the barbarians from the east - reinforcing the bulging line, and then forcing it backwards.

"Cut them off, cut through them!" Shouted Trinton, blasting his whistle between words. "Make safe the gateway!"

The Captain and his men cut a bloody swathe through the barbarians, slicing through the narrowest part of the choke point. One of the savages swung a mace at him, but he easily caught it with his shield, sprung his knees forwards and struck the man in the neck with his sword point. Not stopping to admire his prowess, he barged the barbarian out of the way with his shield, and hacked at the arm of another as he stood strangling one of the Emperor's men. His abrupt plan was working, if they could secure the gateway with sturdy shields and iron hearts, then the savages caught in the courtyard would be cut off and dealt with.

A double bladed lance caught Trinton across the face, gorging his left cheek and gauging his eye. The force of the attack sent the man spinning on the spot, and he fell to his knees. His vision had halved, and what remained was a reddish haze. His face was on fire, as if someone had thrown boiling water on it.

"On your feet, little Iron Man," grumbled a deep voice behind him in broken common tongue.

Trinton, despite his grievous injury, stood and turned. He looked up at the gigantic monster before him, and not for the first time that day, his heart sunk to his stomach. Even with both eyes, and twenty years taken off him, this opponent was well beyond his skill. Still, if Trinton was anything, it was that he was the Emperor's man, one who would not cower, and one who would do his duty to his dying breath. Besides, he was old, and his busted knee was driving him to an undignified retirement.

"Alright, you tall bastard, let's have at yer!" He shouted, and ran forwards.

The lance swept at him, and he raised his shield - not that it did him much good. He stumbled wildly to the left with the weapon's impact, and he was barely able to recover as it came at him again. He brought his sword up to meet it, but the weapon shattered at the hilt and a spectacular display of shimmering metal shards. There was nothing for it. Trinton ran forwards with everything his troublesome knee would give, and held his shield in front of his mass. He collided with his enemy, throwing his weight into the attack, but the hulking giant barely moved. Trinton looked up at snarling teeth.

The line of bodies felt soft as he hit them, but the ground was as unforgivably hard as he struck it and rolled several feet. A pain seared his chest, and he knew a rib or two had been cracked. Struggling to his feet, he drew his dagger, and pointed it limply towards his doom. If Trinton Ironspike was to die, then it would be fighting - not cowering, no, never cowering.

"Again," he wheezed, spitting a blood through broken teeth. He stalked forwards, preparing to strike low even as his opponent brought down that dreaded lance from above.
"It is time," said Lord Jacques Polvark calmly. "We go to the gate."

"Right you are my Lord," replied Polvark's Seargeant-At-Arms. "Alright men, it's time to get into this war!"

The sergeant's words were met with enthusiastic cheers from Polvark's personal guard - a hundred strong assortment of hardened warriors. Together, they turned from the keep's crenelations, and started to descend the stairs that would take them to the courtyard. Lord Polvark was at their head - a tall man, in beautiful ornate steel, flanked by a billowing blue cape and grasping the regal sceptre of his House. He was not a stupid man, as he no doubt suspected the defenders often thought him. Quite the opposite, he was a thinker. His men were the best of the best, as far as Rivergate went, and he was not about to waste them so early in the fight.

"How long since you sent the runner?" He asked to his sergeant.

"Six hours ago sir. Bastion La Tour de Garde should have received news by now, and surely, Lord Grimhelm is on his way," replied the sergeant gleefully.

"We can but hope," said Lord Polvark.
"Musics in the SUV," said Chad, hoping to lift Jackie's spirits. He liked that girl, but no more than any other 18 year old male liked attractive tail. "I'll be back in a beat."

Ducking back outside, Chad noticed that the sun had completely receded. The dark sky was dotted with a few stars, but the moon was obscured, and finding his way back without his torch was a no go. Or was it? He wondered how far he'd make it if he just sprinted blind. Sounded like fun to him, and so off he went. He didn't make thirty paces before his boots caught something on the concrete, and he tumbled over in a laugh-riddled roll. Getting back up, he flicked his flash light back on to see what'd taken him down.

"That's fucked up," were the first words to escape his mouth. He was looking upon a badly burnt doll, with a tattered and soiled dress, and a smouldered face. He leant forwards and picked it up to study it. The first thing that sent alarm bells off in his little brain was the thick smell of putrid meat. He held it closer, and sniffed, and then recoiled. "Fuck me," he choked.

Discarding the doll, he shrugged it off as a previous gathering's strange antics. Probably full of bacon or something, who knew what got into the minds of booze fuelled kids. He shone the light across the to the parked cars, for a slight second thinking they wouldn't be there - but he didn't know why - though, there they were. Not wanting to be outside by himself for too much longer, having found a burnt doll that smelled of rotten meat, I mean that was a horror cliche right there, he sprinted. Getting to the SUV, he fumbled for the keys and unlocked it.

"Hello, Mr. Bingham."

Chad spun on the spot, his eyes wide in terror. Nothing. He shone the light all over the place, scanning the trees. "Who the fucks out there? That ain't funny man."

Normally the prankster, Chad realised he was being had, and ignored what he had heard. There was no telling what dicks had invited themselves to his little shindig, and if they thought they were getting a raise out of him, they had another thing coming. Cracking open the boot, he grabbed a large battery operated pair of speaker docks - and whilst he was at it, he stuffed a bottle of red into his jeans. There was plenty of other stuff in there too, namely food, but he couldn't carry everything and nor was he all that hungry. If someone wanted a snack, they could come out here themselves and play ghosts with whatever fuckwod was out there. Probably Steve, that prick..

The way back the hospital was harder than it was on the way out. His lungs, though trained and tested on the track, were straining with effort, and his feet felt heavier than usual. What was this? Was he scared?.

"Naw, I aint scared," he reassured himself; his light caught a glimpse of the discarded doll but he looked away quickly.

Reaching the lobby, Chad put down the speaker dock and the bottle of wine, and heaved the dank air into his lungs as he recovered from his sprint. After a few seconds, he looked up at his friends.

"There's some guy playing ghost out there by the cars, don't know who, but thought I'd let you guys know in case the prick tried to give you a heart attack," he panted. "Anyway, here's the music. Go crazy."
Chad walked around the lobby, polishing off the first of his beers with practised ease. The circular glow of his torch darted one way, and then that, as he started to read the innate graffiti left behind from previous gatherings. Most of it was just jumbled nonsense, or pornographic absurdities concerning a 'Rose' and 'Dave'. As his light crawled over the eastern wall though, a large ugly black scribble caught his eye. Walking up to it, he read the words aloud slowly.

"You're already dead," he said, and then laughed. "Well, looks like that's it folks, we're goners. Make peace with God and all that."

A slow rumble emanated from deep in the structure, sounding oddly like expanding metal. Chad almost jumped at its suddenness, but then settled. He'd been around old buildings before, his mom was in the property business and he'd accompanied her on several tours. It was just some of the pipework, straining with age.

"Alright, let's say we go find somewhere a little less crack den, and a little more party pad?" He proposed.
The lobby was a trashed wreck. Paint hung off the walls in clumps, ceiling panels had eroded from the damp and heavily rusted waiting benches were strewn about the place. Chad started to doubt whether his idea was really that awesome; hanging around at an abandoned hospital sounded great in his mind, but the party premises of the Gods was shabbier than shabby. Still, the show had to go on.

Walking up to one of the benches, he threw down the crate of bud he'd been cradling under his arm. He quickly tore a bottle free from its cardboard prison, and flipped the cap off. The cold liquid felt good going down, and offered a brief distraction from his surroundings. Pulling the bottle away, he finally lit the cigarette that'd been perching precariously in the corner of his mouth. He spluttered as the first drag went down, but quickly mastered himself. C'mon man, there's chicks here, can't be doin' none of this amateur crap.

Chad smiled as he heard Fuyu battering at Chel with her ruler. Those were two weird kids, not that he'd ever go on to say as much.

"Why don't you two just go find a room and get it on already?" He said grinning.
Chad was happily throwing himself over stacks of pallets, weaving between rusted drums and peering up at the oppressing mass of the structure when he heard Chel utter something downright bizarre. He stopped, and frowned at him in a state of deep confusion.

"Doesn't that question answer itself, dude?" He asked.

Something rattled ahead; the sound of metal clattering against metal. Chad shot a glance towards the hospital, and fumbled for his flash light. With a click, a bright white beam cast itself from the lens and illuminated the several glass windows of St. Helen's lobby. The two large doors were rattling against the chain that held them together. For the first time, Chad felt a feeling of unease, and a shiver climbed its way up his spine. With a slight tremble, he shone the torch from left to right, and studied the menacing shadows. Not wanting to lose face, he promptly shrugged.

"Sure is creepy, this is gonna be fun," he half lied, and walked steadily towards the rattling doors. "Odd, I don't feel a breeze strong enough to be moving these fellahs."

Just as he went to place his hand on them, they abruptly stopped moving. He was jolted by their inaction, and then released a long sighing whistle. "Alright, now that was a little creepy, must've been er a current or something coming from inside."

Though the door had been firmly locked by the chains, the panes in the woodwork had been smashed through long ago. With feigned courage, he ducked low and entered.
"Well Wallace, buddy ole pal, I was so sick of us hanging out in your mom's uterus that I thought we'd try somewhere a little nicer," said Chad with a smirk. "Besides, how often is it that you get to spend the night in an abandoned hospital?"

Turning to Jackie, Chad wanted to tell her that he believed strongly she shouldn't be let near a car, but then he always found it hard to be mean to girls. Instead he cocked a smile, "you sure did girly, you sure did. Just remember the car in front can't see shit when you've got your full beams on from about two yards away."

Chad looked at his "army" as it started to assemble. It was quite a varied group, and though he was not close friends with all of them, he knew most of their names. Word must've got out pretty quickly after he had made a few initial calls about tonight's plans.

"Alright, last one inside is a raging gay lord!" Chad said with emphasised stupidity, and then leaped one of the concrete blocks and made a sprint for what he thought was the hospital's lobby.
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