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We Are Our OCs

It's ok,most people are just using the interest check as a sign up thread

We Are Our OCs

Guys,I'll be closin sign ups when another charecter joins

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Lost Cause said
Well, here's a little something I dug out of my back-catalogue of fanfic OCs.Name: KazéAge: 14Gender : MaleAppearance: Personality: Rendered slightly reclusive after some of his experiences, but still light hearted and jocular.Equipment / Abilities: Has a black Keyblade he dubbed the "Raven's wing" purely on the basis of its design; the blade, head and hilt guards all bear some manner of wing-like motif. He also has access to basic magic, in particular fire, blizzard, thunder and cure spells.Extra: Taifu: Kazé's “evil” half, the result of his blood being tainted by Heartless matter. Eschews the Keyblade for more powerful magic. Typically released if Kazé is knocked out during battle. Otherwise he's just a voice in the teen's head.Backstory: Born and raised on the Destiny Islands, Kazé managed to miss its destruction by the Heartless and reconstruction, but only because he'd been kidnapped some time before and locked inside of a virtual world by Organisation XIII as part of an experiment.Following his release, but still operating under a fabricated identity, he helped Sora and his friends halt a resurgent Heartless threat and undo the damage caused, and in the process regained his old memories.However, one of the battles he fought during this time left him tainted; darkness released by a recently destroyed Heartless entered an open wound on his arm, slowly corrupting him, and causing him to leave his home again and go wandering the worlds in search of a solution...

Psyga315 said
And here's my character.Name: Nicholas SantosAge: 19Gender: MaleLooks: Personality: Nicholas is an excitable kid, though with very low self esteem. He found himself at a low when he couldn't find the nerve to confess his feelings to a girl he liked. His solution is to try to become a hero like he'd read about in his stories, though the problem is that with it comes the lack of actual intellect. Thus, you have someone who rushes head first into battle, will more than not want to befriend the people that try to kill him instead of actually shooting them in the face (regardless of what they do to him), and spout hot-blooded speeches.Abilities: He lacks a lot of abilities, but what he makes up for is an alarming amount of speed. Although he can't outrun fast things like cheetahs and formula-1 drivers, or even break the sound barrier, he is still pretty fast. However, if he uses his speed too much, he begins to feel overloaded and slow down, eventually passing out. Unbeknownst to him, his body was altered to have this power by the Scheherazade Foundation, as part of a test to see how well nanomachines can fare in the travel to alternate universes.Equipement: At this moment in time, Nicholas lacks any special equipment save for that was given to him by Jiro Yuuki, a master swordsman who told him that the sword belonged to a fellow person who also desired to be a hero, saying that it "suits him". It doesn't really do anything special, save for creating multiples of itself.

Both of ya ,interesting,and I like em,accepted both of ya

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Max Shadow said
just looked over it and in my opinion, i feel that he is over loaded as far as explosives go. it's nothing to do with hammerspace being the issue (seeing as my character's bag uses basically the same thing to house his swords) i feel it's more he has an unnecessary amount of differing explosives. and with no clear (if any at all) mention of a cooldown time on how ofter he can pull things out and if he only has one of each thing in there it's hard to make a clear call on if it's to much or not. if there is only one of each then the amount of varying things doesn't seem as badif there is no limit to the amount then i recommend a clear cooldown time for each thing and taking a few things off the list that are to similar to really matter other than cheating the cooldown.i.e. *pineapple grenade or Chinese stick grenadeif i'm thinking of the right things then these two are essentially the same but are designed differently.*C4 or tnt sticks. they'd do the same things but the tnt would be more diverse to useother notes*bombagranite(a bomb the explodes into donzens of smaller bombs) ((like a cluster bomb?))*a boombox ((the only thing i can think off that this could be that doesn't belong in the explosive's list is an old radio from the 70s-80s.......is there any way that this makes sense in a fight? anyone?))*a water gun (that shoots ten gallons of water per shot) ((okay, i'm guessing you only get one shot and it's more a hope you hit. since you made no mention of greater than human strength it means he would have to handle the weapon as a normal person would. so, with the weight of the weapon, the gauntlets and the water in the weapon......just a sec.....10Gallons= 37.854118kilograms (i'm australian so it's what i'm used to working with, i'll convert it back at the end)lets say that the gun would add, roughly 5 or more kg due to the size it would need to be (since you made no mention of it holding water any special way.)and another 4-6 minimum for the gauntlets. so all up, as a rough estimate he'd be trying to aim 46 or more kilograms ((101.413 pounds)) of weight before trying to hold it in place to fire all the water at once.oh...and you spelt durability wrong, second last sentence before the list of stuff he has in hammerspace......

Oops,fix that righ away,and the boom box is just there for in battle music

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Alright,but put it the actual OCC thread

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Schradinger said
Also: what is a bombagranite?Edit: Nevermind. I went back to your CS and looked it up, though I don't remember it being part of the original equipment edit.

I added a few hours later because I forgot about it

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Sorry then

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Derpestein said
'who was fighting the angel'?...The angel was killed in page one...

That's why I said was

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Psyga315 said
Yeah. Still, it's a thread discussing your RPG, so I figured it'd be good if you guys knew.

Thbak you for caring

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Psyga315 said
Yeah, probably having second thoughts about this RPG.I'm still making a sheet in case I still wanna join, though.

Shit,well,it won't be bad if its moved