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One Piece RP: Along For The Ride

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One Piece RP: Along For The Ride

G3njii said
Nooo im sorry :(

fffffffffff ahhh no haha. I stumbled upon the thread and was so excited when reading it all i had the perfect character in mind. Give me a chance, let me write up a CS right now and maybe you could reconsider? /:

One Piece RP: Along For The Ride

please please please tell me you're still accepting.

One Piece: The New Crew

You guys mind if I jump in?

Stalwart University

TaliPaendrag said
@sam: Don't worry about making the mistake. I'm not upset with it. :3 However, I will have to say that I'm not going to accept lycanthropy as a power. Not that I mind werewolves. It's just that, as Mizuho said, I tend to avoid blending the mystical/magical into a roleplay where people have powers, especially one like this where the setting is more or less realistic. There are powers that can simulate lycanthropy, such as shapeshiting or canine mimicry, but you'll have to get rid of the magical background, like Frank and curses. Again, it's not that your character is bad. It's actually pretty well-written. It's just that it doesn't fit into this roleplay is all.@Mizuho: No worries. :D Thanks for taking some initiative there while I was asleep. I definitely appreciate your help. :3 I would have responded earlier, but I was at , so I didn't have the time to read over everything and formulate a response.@Hylian: Thanks for the heads up! :D

Thank you so much :) i understand completely, i guess i'll just save Lucas for some other thread or something because i was really looking forward to see where it would go but i see what you're going for. If it's okay do you think i could write up a completely new CS?

Another "End of the World" Role-play [ReLoAdEd]

You think I can reserve a spot? I'm tired as hell but just stumbled upon this and it looks freaking awesome, i can get my CS up around 8 tomorrow, if that's not too much trouble?

Kingdom Hearts: Darkness Reborn

hi

Name: Kasus



Age: 16

Gender: Male

History: Kasus has spent his whole life on Lunaris. He doesn't remember much about his parents, and for reasons unknown to him, he can't help but picture them wearing white robes. Around the time Kasus was 5 years old, his parents left home without explaining why, and have never returned. He was told that his parents had gone missing, and were presumed deceased, forcing Kasus to live in an orphanage for a few years. The only thing connecting him and his parents is his fathers Blade of Valor, which he left for Kasus. Eventually, a merchant by the name of Fargo adopted Kasus, taking him in and teaching him the merchants trade. Fargo owned a shop called "Lunar Goods", Which sold various trinkets and mementos from other worlds. This required Kasus to encounter many people from many worlds, and sparked his longing for adventure.

Kasus has lived with Fargo for ten years, and from time to time would head out to the beach, practicing with his Blade of Valor on rocks, boxes, and junk that the shop never sold. A wizard once arrived to the shop, and took a liking to Kasus, giving him a book of titled "Fire". After a year of practice, Kasus was able to teach himself the Fire spell.

According to Fargo, Kasus is to inherit Lunar Goods, and carry on its "Legacy," unbeknownst to Fargo, Kasus plans to save up enough money and eventually sell the shop to purchase his very own gummi ship, and go off into the universe, living his dream and exploring the universe, uncovering the secrets and mystery's it has to offer. Unfortunately, this day has yet to come, and so Kasus waits.

Skills:
Heightened speed, Hand to Hand, Trading, Alchemy, One-handed weapons

Magic:
Fire

Summon:

Abilities:

Minor

High Jump: Kasus may jump higher and farther than the average person at will.

Major

Hummingbird: Dart in to rain countless blows upon the enemy

Stalwart University

Mizuho said
If you want an example, just click on someone's CS to get a better understanding. All the links are in the second post of the OOC.

Will do [:

Stalwart University

Mizuho said
There actually isn't a "delete post" feature on the new Guild yet. Just go to "edit" and replace your post with a period or something, then re-edit that post with your post once your char has been formally accepted.I said post so many times. Post post post...I'm not saying your character is bad per se, I just don't know if he'll be a good fit for this roleplay specifically. Which is why CS evaluation is important. I actually think you might've gotten the wrong idea of what this roleplay is about, but I could be wrong.But don't take my words to heart, I have absolutely no authority to say any of this XD I'm just offering you tips as a seasoned roleplayer.

Done. My post has transformed into a nice ripe period which is probably confused why its not at the end of a sentence. And sorry about that, I saw the reservation list and assumed I just needed a solid word for the ability, and as for the swords and enchantments they were a weakness to the werewolf state and merely added for character depth. But thanks for clearing that up! I can see why that would be confusing.

ugh that's a shame! I was wondering why I didn't see any kind of fairies or vampires or anything. I really hope my guy is approved but I understand why he wouldn't be. And yeah I see where everything is supposed to be going, i guess i was just excited to start writing. all in all my bad. rookie mistakes everywhere. i'll fix up the CS and i guess draft up another ability. thank you very much for the help Mizuho!

Delete this post pretty please please

I jumped right into a thread without first giving a CS and being approved by the GM, could you delete my post? it's the most recent one in the thread.

http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/13061/posts/ic?page=4#post-628155