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Rune_Alchemist said
And the pirate ship of your character is like some multi-dimensional transporter thing!that, or Connie could build you one and attach it to the ship :DHonestly though, I was a bit hesitant about giving Connie a whole 'steampunk' feel. I'm honestly not too familiar with wonderland type things xD


That would be something wouldn't it? Well if Closet Nerds plans don't get totally ruined from the idea, or likes the concept to much to ignore than I think my ship basically being that transporter I guess wouldn't be that bad of an idea. I was more or less thinking of tears in 'space in time' kind of thing, but your idea works too. As for the steam punk I like the idea (even though my opinion means nothing T_T)
Closet Nerd said
Optimist: Thanks for the update there. No need to change the setting, I'm glad you included one actually. Abigail is accepted! Also I'm not English, I just think colour looks correct phonetically. And it's fancy xDToaw: Yeah, it'd be 2014. I don't really see much of a reason to go back or forward since it'd likely be a maximum of a two decade difference. I'm curious about Joseph's age though. If he had a child whilst in the navy I'd assume he had that child in his twenties. I just want to know how old do you think the protagonist was when he died? Another question is are you going to use that narrator thing as a pirate? It'd be cool to have a pirate narrator simply because it's delightfully unfitting. No sarcasm. I don't see much reason to hold him back though, he's really fleshed out and clearly well thought out so Joseph is accepted! And yes, I must always have an exclamation point when a character is accepted.


I would say that he has been dead for a few years, and you are correct that he had a child in his twenties, or even early thirties I just didn't want to stump anyone who would want to play the mother, and to limit them that much. I'm a very conservative person when it comes to these things, but I should probably go back and mention that he has been deceased for the past few years in my CS? No? Either way thank you, I wasn't entirely sure about him towards the end, at least during the Bio. As for the narrator part I don't know, I was more or less thinking about abandoning the idea, and playing as someone who she meets a long the way, in some random or crazy encounter. Maybe I'm the first person she meets, and I whisk her away on the start of her new adventure? Either way I've typed a lot, and I don't like typing a lot when I'm not writing an awesome story, and RP stuff so I think I'm going to stop now XD. Also one last thing, are we going to be able to have our own little world of sort that she stumbles onto. Considering that the characters are so different I think it would fit the story. Maybe as she travels through these worlds she brings these characters along as the big bad destroys their worlds slowly one by one. (I know it is a bit cliche, but hey why not). Ok so I'm really done now I promise. Unless I think of something...nope ok you're good.

Edit: I'm pretty sure there is plenty of room :D
The Alexandrian stared at the creature with slight distaste, and the Victorians surrounding him started to huddle around the Alexandrians legs begging for him to stop the ungodly sight telepathically. "Shut up" The Alexandrian shouted at the top of his lungs at the Victorians. He then realized that he probably looked completely rude in front of the Aliens. "I'm sorry, the Victorians can only speak telepathically with other Victorians and Alexanders, and let's just leave it at that." He then straightened his suit around the legs as he fought off the incoming Victorians. "Now as for satisfaction I would have to say yes, but you look nothing like the creatures in the ruins we have found. They where pale creatures, who had hair on their head, and they certainly didn't have teeth as sharp as yours. May I ask what are you, and what happened to you?" The Alexandrians face was clearly trying to look at the hideous sight that laid before him.
My next post is everyone's chance to make contact with the Alexanders if they wish. So don't be afraid to detect it, also I wouldn't dare not ask one of the Supremes to remove their robe!
Supreme Ship
The Alexandrian laughed slightly, and looked at the robed man with an ambitious glare. "While it isn't rude nor customary for one to not remove their robe within our culture, I do find it necessary so that I can't see who I'm truly speaking too." He then looked at the small Victorians standing with their hands near the holsters of their weapons, and spoke to them telepathically. Put your weapons down who ever these men are, I would rather not go through the painful process of getting ten more Victorians. The Victorians followed his commands, and stood silently, and started bowing towards the Surpremes as if they where gods. "Ignore the Victorian slaves, they are simple minded,creatures and believe that you are related to the first Alexander to unite our planet, also known as the Master of the Masters to the Victorians."

Planet Tula, Large Research Planet tasked with the discovery of Alien threats
"Sir, we have recently sent out the information broadcast by the scouting ship to the Head Royal Council" an Alexandrian shouted to a fairly small Alexandrian in comparison. The Alexandrian only stood at 5'10", but had many decorated symbols etched onto him showing that he has owner, or still owns around two hundred Victorians. His lab coat was a sleek bright purple signifying that he was the head of research in the entire Alexandrian Empire.

"Good now task the research team with figuring out if their are any other Alien life forms nearby, send it on all frequencies in the language of English, in our best attempt at making contact, we are most likely not the only ones who have detected this." He pointed the man out the door, and continued looking at the small holographic screen showing different numbers, and symbols that came back after they first received the signal from the Supremes. "What are they, and how would we be able to stop them."


Universal Supreme Collective Contact
Ten Victorians, and the commanding Alexander walked out of the space shuttle, as the other two scouting ships remained outside, in order to keep the ground force in contact with the rest of the Empire. The Alexander had many scares in the shape of ten different symbols, each one representing that he was the master of the ten Victorians accommodating him. He then let out a low snarl trying to keep his guard up. Existence not guaranteed? What could possibly happen if I stepped out? He then turned towards the three probes and shouted "I am the commander of this ship, Decorated officer of Alexandrian Empire, and Decedent of Alexander. Let yourself be known so that we may discuss things with each other as you would say, face to face." He then turned his head towards the Victorians giving them a light signal to prepare their weapons in case of a surprise attack.
TehAlphaGamer said
Four days later and my app never got accepted? D:


Actually your app was accepted, pretty much two or three posts after you posted it....
Universal Supreme Collective Contact
The commander sat idly by waiting for a response to their message. Soon the Victorian that had originally informed him of contact had returned. Sir we have just received a message back, this race calls themselves the Universal Supreme Collective, and from what I can understand they are thousands of times more powerful than our Empire. The commanders face went grim with a slight distaste in the situation. Sir they wish for a face to face meeting with us, shall I arrange it? The other two Victorians have already successfully tracked down their location, and if we go at max speed we should be their within thirty or so minutes. "If they wish to meet us so be it, but inform the nearest colony to keep their guards up, and that we may have a dire situation if things with this Universal Supreme Collective get ugly" he then starts to mumble about how no one is stronger than those who are descended from Alexander himself. The Victorian immediately rushed over to the comms, and sent out another message: "We have located destination of craft you're located on, we come immediately, and shall speak" he then looked at a fellow Victorian, and gave a slight sigh.

Head Royal Council
"Sir" a fairly large Alexandrian dressed in Scarlet red robes ran into the meeting between the Royal family, and their advisers. He quickly bowed, and payed his respects to them before continuing. "Forgive me, but we have just received word from our colony Tula that around ten minutes ago they had made contact with an unknown alien species, that can speak the language of the ancients. The most important thing of note though, is that they claim to be thousands of times more powerful than us, and we have a scouting ship heading towards them for a meeting between the two.

"I didn't authorize this" the Emperor Alexander the Headstrong shouted at the Royal guard. "But even though my name gives me every right to deny this, and to demand the execution of every living thing on those scouting ships, I am curious what exactly these aliens have to offer." He then turned towards the rest of the royal family, and let out a great yell, "today we make either the greatest ally The Alexandrian Empire has ever seen, or the greatest enemy, either way I shall go down in history as an Alexandrian who poked gods temple with a simple stick, and told him that I'm worthy of his greatness." He then let out a simple smile, and told the man to leave the conference room immediately, so that they could discuss other matters of importance.
I have a quick question where exactly does the protagonist live in the world? Just curious because part of my characters bio is going to include him being in a past war, and knowing where we are would help. Also I take it that the current year is 2014?

Edit: Never mind, I think I'm going to exclude the war, and have decided to go with something else, but knowing her exact location in the world would still be nice, unless it was already mentioned the just point me the right way.
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