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    1. Valeric 12 yrs ago

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Nah. All we need are Mission Tabs 1-5, and only one active mission in each tab. Done!
Can't wait for custom tabs to be implemented. This RP would benefit from it so much... I don't have to hunt for my own mission posts.
"Stingy kid…" Sasha griped but did not push the matter. She wondered if she could seduce the boy into spilling some more information, but she had a feeling that it wouldn't work. Ren had not paying any attention to her in the least.

This was getting crazier and crazier, but the point of no return had long been passed. When the group party invitation appeared in her vision, Sasha stabbed the accept button without a shred of hesitation. She was very eager to get to bashing Imps to a pulp… and gain more skills. This is shaping to be the best game she had ever played.

"C'mon, let's do this!" she screamed at the group.
Eh what I was the last poster before Omnial, not including you. Fine, I guess I need to stab that button in.
I think there's a reason that most books do it. It takes a bit of rereading to be sure of who's talking.
Devin's grinned stretched even wider after Red's reply. The greatest benefit of coming to the Guild was the sheer variety of girls that graced the place. Red's accent was just so charming. Any further attempts to converse were cut short by a series of events. A great big ape lumbered towards them, carrying the struggling form of a man over its back. Ellie appeared shortly, and commanded it to put the man down. The ape abided and planted him on a chair, who turned out to be Jack. He drew back to avoid his breath. Devin had nothing against the man but he was utterly intolerable when drunk.

Ellie led them to a table where Snow, who had joined them as well, laid out several items. Devin's eyes immediately darted to the quiver of arrows. He wasn't surprised when it was pushed towards him. Each of them were receiving some equipment to aid them in the upcoming equipment. Devin snatched it up and pulled one of the arrows out. It was beautifully crafted, better than anything he had ever made, and was tipped with a razor sharp arrowhead that gleamed brightly. Devin tested the edge with his finger and examined it closely. Realization dawned on him.

"Silver arrows… I've never been able to afford more than a couple of them. Always kept them for the worst. This will be very useful," Devin muttered. Beside him Jack continued his drunken drawl. Devin ignored the man and leaned in closer to the girls. Eulalie, the woman he saw enter the brothel was here, and it didn't look like she was just an informant. Snow had given her an item too, which meant that she was a recruit. The woman was speaking French, that much he could figure out.

"Hello, I don't believe we've met. Name's Devin, and it's a pleasure to meet you, miss," Devin said, trying to sound as friendly as possible. Never would he pass up an opportunity to get to know a woman better.
Oh, Azena. I was wondering why I kept getting confused whether Snow or Ellie was talking in your posts, and I just figured out why. You don't actually use "....said Snow/Ellie", or any variant of it. Don't you think it would be better to include them? I know your dialogue is usually followed by the actions of the person who said it, but it's not as clear, especially when you're handling multiple characters.
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I mean, spells can take all sorts of forms. If the Bishop summons a hail of magic arrows and your shield blocks a couple, does that count? Also, what koka said isn't entirely true:most spells still cause physical effects so your normal shield would block them anyway, wouldn't it?
You could just very loosely base it off something. Even just the name would be cool.
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