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Sekirei - The Beauty of Truth

My characters revised power is acceptable correct?

Bleach: The Hollowing

Kanashii Piero

Kanashii Piero

Alias: Jester
Age Appearance: Late twenties.

Born to house Usagi, given name Raizel, he was a good child. Focused on living up to the expectations of both his parents and the peers. Never would he question his elders and he would never dare to question the teachings of his grandfather’s techniques.
Entering into the academy, he strived to continue the name of his noble house. Being one of the exceptional students he tried to make a name for himself, but all he could do was find himself constantly compared to another, or in constant competition with ghost of students past. But when they put him at odds with a student, not his family, he found himself able to compete with more than just numbers on paper.
Getting older, he found himself lacking any more interest in anything that wasn't doable with hilt in hand. His grades began to reflect it, though he was not in jeopardy in the other fields of study, he was no longer competing to be the best in them. More he was doing them to get them out of his way. Training with his own sword knowing that his name matters more than the Usagi. He was him not “They”!
His sparring partners grew more and more timid. One incident where his rival had the idea to use banter to throw him off his game ended with Raizel removing both his jaw and tongue in one swing. He was reprimanded for lack of restraint, and this limiter was placed back on him, where an Usagi should not need to be told such.
A teacher, Akimoto, constantly tried to dull his blade, never in the young Usagis life had he met someone so foolish. Restraint, looking after the weaker ones, protection....Such childish notions, but he could not deny the man’s skills. It wasn't just experience, it was like he could read him. He understood something about Usagi that he didn't understand himself.
Akimoto never got his true point across, but his constant lessons did serve to teach that the best way to win was to understand. Empathy became something of a skill and also helped open his mind to the weeping of his blade. The three Ladies that form the spirit in his blade helped him truly understand what his reflection was. Not of the Raizel Usagi, but of Kanashii Piero!
The mistress in his blade showed him the sword style he had learned was obsolete, that the House Usagi was obsolete. The academies teachings where dated! It was all a relic of a bygone era! He struggled with their voices flooding his mind, with their conflicting ideas, opinions on his allies and his rivals. It seemed as though he was to snap at any moment. But on the surface he looked calm and ready, only Akimoto seemed to notice his internal struggles.
Much to Akimoto's dismay, he was sent out to do field studies. On the first mission, he and his group where surrounded, something that would send most students into a panic. It sent Piero into a paradise. A sparring partner in which he would show no restraint, a partner whom he could show up and not be ridiculed for lack of compassion. He at last had an enemy. His squad mentioned how in a 7 slashes he had killed 10 hollows. Piero would remember it as the truest reflection of his self.
After setting a record for number of hollows cleansed in a night and one of the few to cleanse a Menos. But his squad mates noted that he would use them as bait and or even worse leave them behind while he would "Hunt." The Menos altercation left his comrades corpses and he returned with a rather satisfied smile. "It is in our moments closest to death we see our soul reflected upon our swords."
He went on to join the 11th division despite its captain being very vocal of the sub-rate family he comes from. Piero took it for almost a decade but plenty of ridicule and fighting with the captain helped him achieve his Bankai. A quick and clear lesson to the Captain: He is not an Usagi. He Is Kanashii Piero!

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2: 2, 2
5: 5, 4, 2
0: 4, 0, 2
0: 2, 4
4: 3
(Well format tomorrow I had forgotten this was still pending)

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Element is Light. His weapon is based on Mirrors and the reflection of light.

His weapon the Wareta Kagami prior to release is a tri bladed weapon. Two short swords and a single hidden blade in his right boot. The hilts on the blades are bound with a dark red cloth, rather than the fine leather that most have, the hidden blade for those that have seen it, note that it is long enough that if its going to do more than hurt.
When the blade releases into Shikai, it takes the form of twin Crimson swords connected by a onyx chain. The blade that was once in his shoe becomes a freely moving 3 foot Gullitotine that freely moves along the chain.
The first ability of the Shikai is called "Distorted reflection." All three of the blades begin to refract light making it appear as if the blades are shifting in both size and shape. The Guitine itself appears much smaller than it actually is, making it seem as if they are being cut by thin air. The second ability is much more Direct. "Hindrance" The blades being releasing flashes of bright light attempting to blind the enemy.

The second release, or Bankai is named Shin'ni han'ei (true reflection)
Is one that came with great clarity to the wielder and thanks to the sword he was able to become what he is today. (Take that as you will). The three blades Become one smooth Red Katana. And he is joined by a Green version of himself and a blue version of himself, and he himself takes on a red hue. The three primiary colors of the spectrum.
His duplicates are equal to him and much to the opponents dismay can not be hurt directly (they react to being stabbed and cut correctly but it doesn't stop them it simply delays them, in addition they are linked to him so they see and hear what he does and vice versa. (The use of this Bankai was extremely taxing on his mind, when he first used it, he fought himself more than anything else.)

If you are cut by one of the three, your ability to perceive their color is taken from you, its temporary, but when you cant see any form of the color yellow. It becomes harder to understand depth of field and your location. Do to his duplicates being of simply one color following their blade is almost impossible for those without excellent sword play. The feed back from this is referred to as the true self, all the pain suffering and effort that happens to the duplicates smashes into his mind. Providing information that he may have not known, like how much the sharp end of a sword feels....

He can combine with his colors to change his weapon, yellow (making him orange) gives a Kunai and chain. Blue (making him purple) wields a pair of tonfas, or he combines blue and yellow to make a green, that wields a spear. He can not combine with both at one time, as of yet.

He can turn it off manually, but if to much damage is taken his sword will forcefully shut itself down knowing the feed back will kill him otherwise. In addition if he is maimed or knocked out, the two act as wings to fly him away.

Sekirei - The Beauty of Truth

I'll phrase it different I can see how its viewed as op atm. I didn't mean to make it seem so God tier technique I apologize. I added more build up and dialed it back to put more importance on her prowess with the weapon as to not make her seem an elemental monster.

Justice League Beyond UNLIMITED

Is my post alright, I wanted him to be new to the working with large groups thing.

Justice League Beyond UNLIMITED

"Come to Metropolis they said. It'll be fun they said."

Crypt mocked himself for thinking it would be as easy as knocking on the front door. Considering he had never thought about where the front door was. It was one thing after another once he got there, he had opted to go without his suit. He had never thought himself the hero type but when a crisis knocked upon the door, he felt morally obligated to try something.

Now lost in the corrupted and what was already intimidating streets of a city the size of metropolis Crypt found himself struggling to stay the correct density. The urge to ghost through the cold streets or hide in a statue was in every social paranoia induced thought.

"Come on dude, keep your cool or they will notice,,*coughs*.."

The cough makes him neglect to watch where he was walking, or walking through.....Honestly who puts those benches every fifty feet anyway! He stops half way through it looking down....

"Well that's not conspicuous."

Just as people go to take notice he sprints to a subway pulling his hoodie up over his head.

"That's it next time I wanna' help I'm going to donate a dollar to kids without laptops!"

Once again he mistakenly becomes intangible making him fall down...err...through the steps. A master of secret powers this one. He pulls himself outta the floor as more and more people begin to notice his Disturbing antics. He sprints towards the rails trying to get out of site as fast as possible. After all its not like he had to worry about being hit by the train.

Sekirei - The Beauty of Truth

I edited it and was Mike's cs appropriate?

Sekirei - The Beauty of Truth

Name: Deluna
Nickname: Bleeding Cresent
Gender: Female
Age: 25
Sexuality: Bi
Sekirei Number: #17
Appearance:
Sekirei Norito: By the Blood of my Contract, My Ashikabi's Desire will Eclipse all
Sekirei Type: Wind Scythe, Her technique, the "Tempest Scythe" Is an ability that is tied into her movements, as she rotates both herself and her scythe the air around her begins to follow suit. The winds themselves become her weapon pulling her enemies within her reach, at her climax the air can whip the flesh stinging it or exacerbating wounds to earn her nickname the Bleeding Crescent.
Personality: A woman who is displeased with the disgusting world and all but a few who inhabit it. Weakness displeases her, those that can not do what is needed may as well be acting against you. She tries to keep composure but her depression leads her to show her softer side far to often, her own weakness upsets her often. Constantly second guessing herself and full of regret, she searches for escape.
History: Her world has never been one with the deception of living a happy life. Her weapon in hand was the first memory she truly maintained, and her closest friend beneath her, she wonders why and how. Nightmares plagued her, blurring the line between reality and the dreams, but for her the waking moments where far greater the nightmare. Bleeding people dry and watching, it shatters you. Till your soul is bled out, Even in a controlled environment where they would be nursed back to health, you still question humanity. Your purpose is murder? No no no you are not a weapon? But wait you are a key? No a tool? What am I?
Friends seemed to be such an abstract thought once you practice techniques that are so disgusting. Her adolescence only made this more difficult when she was thrown into a larger group. But this life was just absurd wasn't it? Or was it a blessing? To know your purpose, to have an objective pre-established for you. A rather disturbing event happened, she found an answer. Nothing matters anyway. Time is brief, Spend it the best you can. Enjoy every second! Find that moment, squeeze it dry of ever last drop. Bleed it out, bleed it all out.
She entered the world looking for a Ashikabi who could really pull her out of her reality. What she found was a man who had a similar view, but not because he had some horrible childhood, no. She found a man who came to similar ideals from an understanding of what he called the "human condition". Pointing out to her that she is just as much human, if not more so than the maggots who squirm about just trying to get by. His words had an odd charm, his eyes where not hollow, this man held for her the escape she desired. For he too had a dark way of bleeding others dry.
Other:
(I am off to my night class, but I wanted this up for consideration. My grammar is poor, but this is the gist of the pairing. I am planning on a second but I wanted to see what you thought of this one first.)

Sekirei - The Beauty of Truth

I will have a cs for my sek in a few.

Sekirei - The Beauty of Truth

Name: Michael Mythos
Nickname: Plague.
Gender: Male
Age: 28
Sexuality: Straight.
Appearance:
Special Skills: Engineer, Driver, and Painting.
Personality: A masked person to say the least. He seldom lets on more than two emotions pleasure or being bored. His favorite thing is watching people squirm and break under times of pressure, or better still the ones that are made of real soul! Never without an idea, or some basic understanding, he will never allow himself to be surprised, in fact if he is ever thrown off he is able to feel another emotion, irritation. Another notable personal issue is his doubts, he knows what he is capable of but not another single living soul is true to their word. NO one.

History: A child of wealth, and political clout he is very much used to people following his instruction. In addition he is well acquainted with the expectations of others upon him, he has been handling power since he was the president of his class in middle school, till he became the lead developer in a think tank. But back tracking back to the time he spent enrolled in his classes he began to play games setting up the popular children against one another, till eventually he began manipulating the faculty and staff to pass the time. He considered the military but they have limitations and to the amount of power they can truly have.
He found himself drawn to engineering simply for the fact it challenged him. Be it cars or chemicals he dabbled in it. Lockheed and Boeing have both used him in the past, but it was rather tired of the idea that his life would involve moving nothing more than nuts and bolts. He found himself young rich and bored. Doing the only thing young wealthy Americans do, he parties. He parties hard. Thanks to his chemical engineering he began to dabble in more effective versions of his favorite "skittles" but then he got into his new favorite past time. Her Name Deluna.

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Sekirei - To Reach For The Future

Very well. I would rather create my own anyway, But do you want to keep to the number system? Or shall the numbers be random?