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"We're undercover. This is a very important undercover operation which you are endangering just by talking to us. Look, I have a gun. I am Detective Inspector Me. This is my partner, Detective Her."
"Her?"
"Me."
"Him?"
"Not me. Her"
"Me."
"You?"
"Yes."
"I'm sorry who are you?"
"I'm Her, he's Me. Got it? Good. You better get out of here before you blow our cover. They've got snipers."
"Her?"
"Me."
"Him?"
"Not me. Her"
"Me."
"You?"
"Yes."
"I'm sorry who are you?"
"I'm Her, he's Me. Got it? Good. You better get out of here before you blow our cover. They've got snipers."
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oh, Caits your application looks fine too, just please reread the rules on the front page
Voltus your app is good, but your grandmother couldn't have lived on earth. No one has been there for 300-400 years. Fix it and you are accepted.
Libbyt your application is also good. However change the atmosphere of your bio. You cant really intrude on peoples property because the ship is more laid out in a hotel complex type of way. There are no floors and for the most part only medium sized rooms for people to live in.
LokiLeo your application is just fine.
Dragonbud you application is also fine.
McHaggis your application looks nice
Before any of you are accepted, however, please reffer back to the first page and reread the rules. I'll give you a hint, your missing something
Libbyt your application is also good. However change the atmosphere of your bio. You cant really intrude on peoples property because the ship is more laid out in a hotel complex type of way. There are no floors and for the most part only medium sized rooms for people to live in.
LokiLeo your application is just fine.
Dragonbud you application is also fine.
McHaggis your application looks nice
Before any of you are accepted, however, please reffer back to the first page and reread the rules. I'll give you a hint, your missing something
ok wow, give me a few minutes to go through all the CS. I just got home
dragon and Cait we will wait for you to get a app up certainly. Voltus, Expllo brings up a good point on the accidental bomb, but I trust you enough to explain it all in the bio.
Nallore of course you can join the RP. I'm so glad this is getting off to a good start! Expllo the app is looking good. Keep working on it, I have faith!
Voltus welcome to the show! Homemade firearms being guns or explosives. If you mean explosives I could see that happening, if in a limited number. Guns are a little bit of a stretch. As for Kronshi you are accepted. I do hope you give some solid effort into your posts however. I noticed it seemed to be lacking in the biography.
fantastic, while my character isn't really a Murphy she is close enough that i'm glad you picked another direction XD
Name: Astrid Cain
Nickname: Astrid, Crazy Psycho Bitch (CPB for short), Thunder
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Relationship Status: N/A
Appearance:
Crime: Accused for stealing food as well of assault of an office of the law after being arrested
Parents:
Damien Cane
Elizabeth Cane
Friends:
Cloe Cane
Partner: N/A
Personality: Skylar seems like a very distant and cold person. Around people she seems to snap quickly, ready to jump on anything that they say. She is always expecting someone to be attacking her, causing her to constantly become stressed around people. Despite seeming to be permanently angry with people Skylar is a born leader. When she steps up to take control people seem to follow. That is when she hasn't created discomfort between the two of them.
Likes: Her sister Cleo
Dislikes: people, flowers, arts and crafts, grounders, music, being forced into a situation, lack of control, feelings, happy people, parents, coffee, crying
Talents: getting people to dislike her, leading a group, thinking quickly on her feet
Biography: Astrid's parents were easily flakes. They didn't contribute much to society and spent most of their time as drunks. Soon after they had their second daughter Cloe, they both were arrested for lack of contribution towards the Arc. As such they were floated, thrown out into space, because keeping them was a waste of resources.
After both of her parents met their fate outside the Arc, Astrid assumed responsibility over her little sister Cloe. Astrid was very young to be taking care of someone besides herself, but she stepped up to the challenge readily loving her tiny sister. Unfortunately work was hard for someone as young as Astrid so she was forced to steal food to keep the two of them alive
While stealing to keep her sister and her alive, Astrid became quiet good at it. She improved steadily, until she was even able to take books from the library. This took quiet a bit of effort on her part so she kept it to a minimal. However the books that she did manage to get her hands on formulated tons of ideas in her brain. Ideas that others would later look to her to develop on.
One day while grabbing some of the rations out of the store room, a worker walked in on her stuffing food into her bag. Shouting out for the guards she was quickly put under arrest and thrown into her cell. They didn't give her a chance to see her sister, or tell what to do once she was gone. Without Astrid there Cloe would probably starve to death. Anger filled her at the thought and hadn't left her to this day.
Theme Song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v2AC41dglnM
Weapon Type: Spear
Weapon Appearance:
Other:
Nickname: Astrid, Crazy Psycho Bitch (CPB for short), Thunder
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Relationship Status: N/A
Appearance:
Crime: Accused for stealing food as well of assault of an office of the law after being arrested
Parents:
Damien Cane
Elizabeth Cane
Friends:
Cloe Cane
Partner: N/A
Personality: Skylar seems like a very distant and cold person. Around people she seems to snap quickly, ready to jump on anything that they say. She is always expecting someone to be attacking her, causing her to constantly become stressed around people. Despite seeming to be permanently angry with people Skylar is a born leader. When she steps up to take control people seem to follow. That is when she hasn't created discomfort between the two of them.
Likes: Her sister Cleo
Dislikes: people, flowers, arts and crafts, grounders, music, being forced into a situation, lack of control, feelings, happy people, parents, coffee, crying
Talents: getting people to dislike her, leading a group, thinking quickly on her feet
Biography: Astrid's parents were easily flakes. They didn't contribute much to society and spent most of their time as drunks. Soon after they had their second daughter Cloe, they both were arrested for lack of contribution towards the Arc. As such they were floated, thrown out into space, because keeping them was a waste of resources.
After both of her parents met their fate outside the Arc, Astrid assumed responsibility over her little sister Cloe. Astrid was very young to be taking care of someone besides herself, but she stepped up to the challenge readily loving her tiny sister. Unfortunately work was hard for someone as young as Astrid so she was forced to steal food to keep the two of them alive
While stealing to keep her sister and her alive, Astrid became quiet good at it. She improved steadily, until she was even able to take books from the library. This took quiet a bit of effort on her part so she kept it to a minimal. However the books that she did manage to get her hands on formulated tons of ideas in her brain. Ideas that others would later look to her to develop on.
One day while grabbing some of the rations out of the store room, a worker walked in on her stuffing food into her bag. Shouting out for the guards she was quickly put under arrest and thrown into her cell. They didn't give her a chance to see her sister, or tell what to do once she was gone. Without Astrid there Cloe would probably starve to death. Anger filled her at the thought and hadn't left her to this day.
Theme Song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v2AC41dglnM
Weapon Type: Spear
Weapon Appearance:
Other:
Thank you Kronshi for accepting my constructive criticism with maturity. However Expllo does bring up many many good points. A sword is something you really wouldn't have on the Arc. Anything as rare as a sword would be locked away as an artifact. I mean they locked up books in air tight containers, not letting anyone touch them for fear they would deteriorate faster. For the weapons section I was more thinking of what you could construct out of the rubble and debris off of the ship, once we get down to earth, not before. Also gangs were not really a thing on the ship. Anything violence related was hunted down with extreme prejudice and soon after executed. I recommend you allow me to get my app up and read over it before resubmitting yours. That or send it over to me so i can preview it.
Kronshi i'm going to have to ask you to put a little more effort into your application. This is more directed towards a high-casual RP than a low. Expand on your personality as well as your biography. Besides that I have a few things that I would like to mention about your character. 1 we are not a alien race, we are normal humans who don't have red eyes, sorry. Unless your a blind albino I don't see the red eye factor working in this RP. 2 while I'm totally okay with murder the fact that you killed 20 people with a blade before someone managed to chatch you is quiet rare. Take note that not many people survived the earth's war, so the total population would fall under 500-800 people. This would leave you having killed 4 - 2.5 % of the entire population of the Arc. You can see that's a little bit of a stretch. I have a few conflicts with the personality being a genius as well as a mass murdering killer, but I will let that slide if you update on the other things. If you need help getting your application up to par, feel free to throw me a message. I would love to help you out in any way I can and explain more about what I have just said.
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