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The Elder Scrolls: Vengeance of the Deep

A damn fine post and worth the wait! I don't think there's a better way to put it than Dervs did, everyone's voice really did shine through. On a side note though, in my professional Orc opinion, Gorzath's civility in the wake of his own blood is terrifying; well done Rtron :p

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And here I figured Lily took one look at the condition of the playing cards and nope'd off the ship. You can a lot about a person by their cards; ask Patrick Bateman.

The Elder Scrolls: Vengeance of the Deep

NASCAR makes so much more sense now.

The Elder Scrolls: Vengeance of the Deep

Voltaire said
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This was all I could think of as Blade careened around with Sion on top of the kart.

"Cub: I... I... huh!?"

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@Etc No doubt, but how do you get the establishing shot, character introductions, dialogues and monologues, opening actions, conflicts and closing actions all into one paragraph?

@Nobo Aye, don't get me wrong, I agree with such terse interactions when dealing with potential threats as it's only natural.

Y Crisis (Pat 1: Decline)

Of course! Like I said, I only ask in the first place because IC seems to have a lot of single paragraphs and I've found that's usually only the case when no one really knows what to do next. There's like three RPs worth of chapters here, no reason to not get started ;P

Y Crisis (Pat 1: Decline)

No worries, I rarely mean should we do this "now" when I say now so take your time :p More like "at this point in the narrative"

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ImportantNobody said
Maybe she can shoot down our helicopter as we fly past the beach and we land behind enemy lines? Or it could be a nameless NPC who does that and she just ends up chasing us down at some point.

What if she's just a regular soldier who shoots us down so after we escape, the blame falls to her. Letting NUA agents escape with knowledge of the empress' defenses would be a hefty crime so that's why she's made a test subject and consequently wants to hunt us down.

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Should prove interesting. Curtis will undoubtedly pity the poor child though how that'll manifest itself is to be seen.

By the way, who are we waiting to post? I notice the majority of IC is scattered paragraphs which I can only assume no one has much to say before we land. Is it time to load up the helicopter and fly by the Alexis?

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I like that idea :p