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VitaVitaAR said
@Yog Sothoth: Um, well, how did they learn it in the first place? Magic is something you need to learn.


The original leaders were sorcerer outcasts who used their magic for personal gain and profit, they found others who could learn the magic and taught them the magic of Escape Artistry and formed the gang. basically the gang's leaders learned the magic from the previous leaders, so that's how they learn magic.
Sloth said
An established clan with like...five members?Minemoto: First Hokage, Eldest Son of The Sage, has two kids.Sangan: Minemoto's son, has at least two sons.Jin: Youngest Uchiha and Sangan's son.If that makes them some well established clan then the Bushou must be ancient.


So the Uchiha in this rp are only five members? Okay then I guess a little more editing is needed.
Sloth said
Wouldn't that have happened in recent memory considering the Sage has only been dead for a few decades? There has to be someone in that clan that knows the truth.


didn't we also run into a timeline issue with the Uchiha being an established clan, and just decided to ignore that?
Beta said
Not without edits. Combining two natures in such a way to make a single jutsu is either a Dual-Element KG, or a collaborative technique requiring more than one ninja. So unless he magically has two Kekkei Genkai, These jutsu in particular will need to be removed or edited significantly.


well i turned them into just fire techniques, but if they seem too powerful then i can remove them.
yoshua171 said
This seems to both mess with continuity in terms of there being a "demon" with which a contact can be made, though we'll have to check with Ouro on that, and it doesn't have enough specifics regarding the power of the flames themselves, which is further specified below in the rest of the review.


i just edited my jutsu list so it gives you an idea how hot the techniques are. also the thing about the demon is not proven to be true, it is just a legend so it can be believed to be ether true or just a myth.
Beta said
Not without edits. Combining two natures in such a way to make a single jutsu is either a Dual-Element KG, or a collaborative technique requiring more than one ninja. So unless he magically has two Kekkei Genkai, These jutsu in particular will need to be removed or edited significantly.Sloth is also correct. Shadow Clone is a B-Rank. Adding elemental effects would increase the rank, not decrease it.Make up your mind if this is a summon or a ninjutsu. It can't be both.As for the rest of the CS... it needs to have spaces between things, so it's not a huge wall of text, but does not conflict with anything in particular regarding the setting. If you edit the requested things, you have my acceptance.


Sorry if I didn't describe it right, the demons are not summons, the fire just takes the shape of them, like Kisame's water shark techniques. I will do the edits you requested.
Sloth said
Devilgan? Not sure what to think about that, or the clan's seeming to think they have a more powerful dojutsu than Sharingan. Unless of course hellfire > Amaterasu and whatever the genjutsu is > Tsukuyomi/Izanagi/Izanami.Also, just a note: Shadow Clone Jutsu by itself is a B-Rank, so a Fire Release shadow clone would be at least B to A Rank, not C.


Okay because water clone seems similar to it and it's listed as a C rank technique but I will change it to B. Also his Eyes of The Devil techniques do take up a lot of chakra and have some nasty side effects. Every technique has a way of being countered, hell if you're a water user then you can counter most of his jutsus
[here is my Konoha Jonin, it took me a long time to finish, and if he's accepted then the Konoha genin can start posting :)]
Name: Boru Nagimari
Alias: Demon of The Leaf
Age: 26
Gender: male
Rank: A Jonin
Appearance:
[change the forehead protector to the leaf symbol and that's what he looks like.]


Personality: Beru is a very serious and stern shinobi who will not take rudeness or snobby attitudes from anyone with the exception of his superiors. He can be merciless to those he considers his enemies and has almost problems with killing. Like with many from the Nagimari clan, Boru has dark side to him and if it is not kept under control than he could be consumed by the darkness within him. He also really dislikes the Uchiha clan, which is common among his clan, and the only Uchiha he respects is the Hokage because he is the leader of Konoha. Despite his flaws, Boru holds loyalty and honor among the highest qualities of a shinobi and considers those ideals as part of his ninja way.

Village: Konohagakure

History/Background: The Nagimari clan was third clan in Konohagakure to develop a dōjutsu Kekkei Genkai, and they prided themselves by claiming to have the strongest dōjutsu. The Uchiha and the Hyuga disagreed with their opinion, calling them an arrogant and foolish clan. The Uchiha were especially snobby in their insults to the Nagimari clan, and this soon caused there to be bad blood between the two clans. They became fierce rivals and wanted to out do the other. Because of this rivalry, the Nagimari clan grew to dislike the Uchiha, and they were especially displeased when an Uchiha was made Hokage of the Leaf Village. They are still hoping to have members of their clan become the greatest shinobi in all of Konoha.

This brings us to Beru Nagimari, when he was young, he showed only mild skill in the ninja arts of his clan which was expected since he was the son of two lower class members of the clan. This made him envious of his more skilled clansmen and he wished to overcome everyone expectations by becoming the most powerful ninja in his clan. His academy years were hard for since he wasn’t seen as being very talented and it would be years until he could possibly unlock his clan’s dōjutsu, the Eyes of The Devil. But despite his basic skills, he was determined to become a great shinobi and overcome all the doubts that people had about him. By the time he began his training as a genin, his skills improved and he had risen above the average for ninja of his age and rank. His sensei and teammates were impressed at his growing skills, but he still needed to activate his Eyes of The Devil to become great. His time came when he and his teammates were sent on a B ranked mission to Iwagakure. The mission was dangerous and his teammates were almost killed. But Beru unlocked his clan’s Kekkei Genkai and managed to save his comrades from death and complete the mission. From then on, Beru was regarded as a talented shinobi and he quickly began to rise in skill and power. By the time the chuunin exams came, he was consider one of the most powerful genin in the exams and completed them. It wasn’t long until they made him a chuunin and he was considered one of the higher-class shinobi of his clan. Now he is a Jonin and has become one his clan’s most powerful members, unlocking many of his clan’s incredible abilities. He has now been assigned to his first team of genin to teach them and prepare them for the coming chuunin exams. This was the annoying part about being a jonin, but he would have to deal with the annoyance.

Tools: basic ninja tools and a scythe

Chakra Nature: fire and wind

Kekkei Genkai:
Eyes of The Devil:
The Eyes of The Devil is a dōjutsu bloodline technique that has been in the Nagimari clan for many generations. The origin of the dōjutsu is unknown, the founder of the clan would not say of its origins, wanting to keep it secret. all that is known is that the founder of the Nagimari clan entered a ominous cave which radiated powerful negative chakra and he was the only shinobi brave enough to enter it. he did not come back out of the cave for about three hour, and when he came back out, his eyes were glowing demonic red, he had activated the Eyes of The Devil. this bloodline dōjutsu passed on to his clansmen and it made them a powerful clan among Konoha. the first ability that the dōjutsu grants the user is the ability to see a person's soul and there emotional aura. The second ability is powerful genjutsu techniques, and the third are very advanced fire jutsus. the dōjutsu gives the user demonic looking eyes that glow red and are like staring into infernos. Many wonder what was the better dōjutsu, the Sharingan, the Byakugan or the Eyes of The Devil? But the Nagimari always boasted that they had the better dōjutsu. Despite its great power, the Eyes of The Devil techniques require a large amount of chakra to perform and can have bad side effects on the user especially their vision.

Special Traits:
Huge chakra reserves
Very fast and pretty strong
Great chakra control
Skilled Taijutsu user



Ouroboros said
Yoshua and Beta have been selected as my Co-GMs. Show them the utmost respect as you would myself and adhere to their criticisms regarding characters, OOC/IC disputes and all matters pertaining to the lore of Naruto and the lore of the AU. This should go without saying, but should either of my Co-GMs display behavior that reflects badly upon my own judgement in electing either of them to this position . With that said I have chosen Beta and Yosh as they have both proven themselves good writers in my opinion and I will hold them to a much higher standard than the average player. I expect them to be fair, balanced and most of all cooperative with other players. Now let's get some posting IC guys!


So will you still be accepting characters or are you leaving it to your Co-GMs?
I'm almost done with my Konoha Jonin
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