Zordon

Insane Asylum + Super Powers/Mutants??

I just had an idea for a twist on the typical Superhero Genre. It's mostly just an idea floating around right now but the premise is all the characters are existing Asylum patients. The doctor of the facility has been testing on certain patients and these patients are developing powers/mutations.

Again, it's pretty much a concept right now but, everyone would get the chance to develop their persons power from the beginning, meaning no one will start out super powerful. Also, whatever mental disorder they may have may or may not counteract with the use of their powers.

The evil doctor would eventually become the "Big Bad".

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Any additional ideas or any type of feedback is welcome and appreciated!

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So my person can't have gotten her necklace from her mother?

And, is my person acceptable thus far?

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Toaw: No worries. No offense taken.

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I'd like to join. CS to follow.

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Zordon said
Nora remembers that she always set the best example for her little sister, getting the best grades in her class and obeying any and all rules set forth by her parents. It was always a pride to her to hear her parents tell her younger sister that she should act more like Nora.

Also, while this may be a fond memory for Nora, possibly not so much for the MC. I'm sure constantly being compared to your seemingly "perfect" older sibling would get annoying fast. I was trying to hint to why the fantasy side is so drastically different from the real character.

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Toaw said
As much as your character is interesting, I suggest that you have a bio that more strongly represents the fantasy character you described, I mean your character is awesome, and the fantasy bio is ok, because it is meant to be short, but the real life one is what is supposed to link up why your fantasy character is that way. It is how the protagonist saw you when she was alive, and also I don't understand the relation, Sister or neighbor? Maybe it is because I'm incompetent, but you didn't exactly describe it well if you did mention it. Other than that good luck with your character.

My character is intended to be the big sister of the protagonist. The fantasy side is how the little sister SEES her, not necessarily how she truly is. Being that the MC has not been fully developed, I tried to keep the Real Character Bio as vague as possible.

Also, I only used the term "girl next door" to describe the type of personality she has. (See here) Sorry if that was confusing.

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Sorry! Real life horribly distracted me. I'll try again in the morning!

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