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kapuchu said
I'd say that counts well enough... Still, I have to admit that I like the idea of him being male yet having a somewhat feminine body when fully Shifted xDIt would give us an excuse to go:


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Well I do plan on keeping that, mostly cause its a fun point.
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I'm glad you chose that xD If nothing else because it is, as you said, fun :P
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might try and post today.
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kapuchu said
I'd say that counts well enough... Still, I have to admit that I like the idea of him being male yet having a somewhat feminine body when fully Shifted xDIt would give us an excuse to go:

"What's your name again?"
"Red."
"Douchebag?"
"No, IT's RED."
"Douchebag, I remember now."
"I hate you so much grandpa."

I'm going to post later today, I'm still with this.
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Meant to get something written, might try to do so before I go to bed tonight.
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I look forward to see your posts ^^
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SURPRISE MOTHER FLUFFERS.

I'm back.
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data549 said
"What's your name again?""Red.""Douchebag?""No, IT's RED.""Douchebag, I remember now.""I hate you so much grandpa."I'm going to post later today, I'm still with this.


Glad to hear it. I kind of need you to respond.
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EldritchOne said
might try and post today.


data549 said
"What's your name again?""Red.""Douchebag?""No, IT's RED.""Douchebag, I remember now.""I hate you so much grandpa."I'm going to post later today, I'm still with this.


Damn, those are some long days, you two ^^

Seriously, though, take the time you need :) Can't rush perfection xP
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I blame zee capitalist pigs!

Nah, sorry, I just got distracted by the conclusion to my first story on fimfiction. its been needing a conclusion since late 2013 and I finally worked up the courage to work all the bits and bobs out.

Anyhoo, soonish, maybe, hopefully... I figure.
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Ah! Story!

Yeah, that takes priority, imo xP
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So I edited my character a little, oh by the way hi again everyone, I went poof because school sucks yadda yadda ect ect MOVING ON! Is it kosher?
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So I edited my character a little, oh by the way hi again everyone, I went poof because school sucks yadda yadda ect ect MOVING ON! Is it kosher?


Still the same problem :/ A wolf isn't a mythic creature, and isn't possible. I'd suggest you do something else. A Lycan, for example. It's still a wolf, but it's only really halfway there. If you pick that you'd have to make your character something like the lycan from Van Helsing or Underworld http://static.comicvine.com/uploads/original/10/109250/2227479-1430785-lycan_0_super.jpg. They are mythologica lcreatures in every sense of the word, but they still have some wolf-like qualities. I suggest them instead of being a normal wolf which is what you seem to want to become.
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A fox with nine tails isn't far off from a mythical wolf (they exist) Kapu :P
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A fox with 9 tails? Not really xD Foxes do, but not those with nine tails nor those with magical powers.
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There are apparently Nine. Wolves, that is.

I must sleep now, ta-ta.
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Well... yeah, mythical wolves do exist (Fenrir being the most obvious example), but just a standard wolf like what Sara wants isn't a mythical creature. I admit that I hadn't thought of Fenrir and the likes, but I'd like her to be more specific if she wants a Wolf Character. Which basically means saying which Wolf it is she wants, and then mold her character after that one and its abilities.

P.S - Sara, there was a small revision made to the character sheet template. It's near the top of the template, and it's a small bit where you have to write exactly what mythic creature it is your character can transform into.
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I did some more editing, i'll be around all night so feel free to critique it whenever.
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Alright, Sara. Looks good, but there are a few things.

1 - I'd like a full description of your appearance when shifted as well. This includes size, etc.
2 - Tied to #1. I suggest a different picture for reference (you're still welcome to have one, but a description is very much appreciated and preferred). I looked through a couple pictures and founds this one that I think fits: http://img4.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20130619223817/mythology/images/f/ff/Fenrir-2.jpg. Fenrir is often portrayed as black, so that's part of the reason why I suggest a different reference picture. Also, Fenrir is a - to say the least - very large wolf. Which means that your fully shifted form being abnormally large is actually somewhat expected. I'm not talking eight metres long, but definitely at least twice the size of a normal wolf (think Dire Wolf from Game of Thrones). Possibly, since I read a passage about Fenrir which said "his rapid growth", it's implied that he grows, and will continue to do so until slain. So her fully shifted form getting larger and larger as she gets stronger and more used to it (up to a certain cap) is a suggestion from my side.

3 - She's 18 years old, but she heard about Shifters in 5th grade. Shifters appeared 2 years before the RP begins, so that's when she was 16. That would be in/near the end of her 9th year of school. Please change that bit.

4 - This is actually a compliment. I like your idea of her having a bit of trouble controlling her Shifting, in that she is "forced" to shift every now and then simply to avoid it happening at random. It's a good idea and I think it would be fun to see in RP.
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