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The mooks are unnamed angry looking gangsters, (I'd say there are a little less than 30) but I'll err on the side of caution and scale his power way down.
EDIT: in the mean time, i'm open to constructive criticism of his character in general.
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Still openings in this I assume?


Yeah
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Still openings in this I assume?


Yeah
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Nron said
Still openings in this I assume?


Yeah
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DeadBeatWalking said
The mooks are unnamed angry looking gangsters, (I'd say there are a little less than 30)


Yeah, gonna have to say no to that. Because for starters, I don't want one guy being in charge of a gang. Two, I have no idea what you're planning to do with them. And finally, I said no to a similar idea in the past.
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So open he said it thrice.
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Three yeahs well aren't I lucky. I'll start work getting a character created and hopefully have an app in for you to tear apart by tomorrow night.
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Decided to keep Creed as an NPC, since his OPness has been pointed out.
Perhaps we'll see a less powerful Creed in the future redeem himself Nevermind, that's American History X.

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So open he said it thrice.


I thought we were quoting our favorite Beatles hooks and got excited.
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Three yeahs well aren't I lucky. I'll start work getting a character created and hopefully have an app in for you to tear apart by tomorrow night.


*Heavy breathing*

You don't much to worry about since sheets rarely get "rejected" (unless they are really that bad). Worst that will happen is that you'll have to make some edits to satisfy me.

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Decided to keep Creed as an NPC, since his OPness has been pointed out. Nevermind, that's American History X.I thought we were quoting our favorite Beatles hooks and got excited.


You're free to submit another character, bruh.

Anyways, I see an acute lack of character interaction - in an interaction heavy RP nonetheless! Time to fix that. I have five free characters wandering around, hit me up if you want in.
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Mr Allen J said Anyways, I see an acute lack of character interaction - in an interaction heavy RP nonetheless! Time to fix that. I have five free characters wandering around, hit me up if you want in.


I'm setting Harmon up for interactions a little later. There is a thing called timing and I'm making full use of it, boss man.
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I'm setting Harmon up for interactions a little later. There is a thing called timing and I'm making full use of it, boss man.


Professor Oak's words echo... "There is a time a place for everything, but not now."
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You're only setting him up to meet Tentacle Steve.
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You're only setting him up to meet Tentacle Steve.


The only one Tentacle Steve is gonna meet up with is Priapism Pete.
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They'll double-team Harmon.
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4P does not pound.

He peddles.
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Hmmm... This is a well-written sheet, but I feel like she seems like a comic-book character. But, we can work with her. She can be a tough-girl martial artist. That's fine. She can be a hero-type. Which is also fine (Long as she doesn't piss off NEST). Her parents could have been killed, shot herself, and thrown on the streets. She's going to need psychological repercussions (Which going off her personality section, she doesn't any). But some parts of it seem contrived. For example:Sorry, but this really seems like a forced way for her to learn martial arts. I mean she just pick-pocketed someone who just so happened to take her in and teach her to fight? That does seem a little forced.Also.This is pretty far actually. Around three-hundred feet by my calculations. Which is again, fine. But I'm going have to ask you to give her another weakness.Other than that, the sheet is fine.gtfo


I was kind of going for Jerkass with a Heart of Gold but noted,I'll work on it.

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I was kind of going for Jerkass with a Heart of Gold but noted,I'll work on it.


It was mostly was her backstory that made me think comic book character. But that's the spirit!
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Editted.

Ability - Shortened the range to fifty meters. Anybody in contact with her gets transported whether willing or not so she can't say, conveniently blink out of a chokehold without some creative thinking.

Reworked her backstory and made her sort of a full street rat.

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In Black Fall, it's all in a number. If that number's high enough, NEST pretty much gets free reign to diddle you filthy without your permission, whenever.
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