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@Yvain
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@Tarquin@Ganryu
Can't see any problems with it so approved ^.^

@LokiLeo789
I agree with Kurisa on this one oxo so once you make the changes, then you can go ahead and just removed the Phobos part xD

@Hantu Kongkek
I'm going over yours and any CS's that Kurisa had missed


@Kurisa
Thank you for giving me feed back on the CS, as for the changes, what limit are we looking at? I added the theoretical part becase I was not sure in the first place. Maybe after taking 16 swings, it would have to release the energy, but what about projectiles, that would be situational, like, taking a cero would mean he could store no more energy, and have to reflect it, but it can absord multiple Bala's. Is that an acceptable limit?
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Name: Karma Sonozaki

Appearance:

Age: 21 in living human years.

Gender: Male

Height: 5'9

Weight: (optional)

Hair Colour: DarkRed

Eye Colour: Yellow

Birthday: April 22th

Clan/Family:None

Race: Shinigami

Rank: Lieutenant

Spiritual Energy Colour: FireBrick

Personality: At heart Karma is a doctor; He is nice,kind, mercifully, and tries his been to save and improve his patient life. However at the same time, Karma is also thug like, causing as many injuries as he treats. Usually to those who cause problems for others, especially the relief teams of Squad 4. He also had sort of a short-fuse making it easy to get him angry.

History: Karma was born in the soul society, born and raised in the poverty-stricken area. His father was killed in a violent incident before he was even born, forcing his mother to take care of him by herself. While he was still young his mother got caught up in a major tragedy, when a gas leak caused a major explosion kill or injured a lot of souls. His mother died in the aftermath due the foreign objects that were sent inside by the blast; likely caused high-stress doctor rushing to saving everyone that he didn't know of the objects trap in her before he regenerated her wounds.

After the incident Karma was left on the street, having fed for himself he adapted and learn how to defence himself with his own hands. In his teenage years, Karma learned that his interest in biology make help him make money so he decided to start practicing treatment before applying to join the Gotei 13 under there recruit program.

While he was still in training he provided backroom treatment to those who couldn't effort it to pay for a licensed doctor. Karma soon graduated into squad 4 where he learned how to take his doctor license onto the battlefield, making him a combat medic. Though he was a good duty he often gets punish for starting the fight with his fellow shinigami members, however in time theses incident got lessen to the point where the higher up could look pass those incidents a promote him to lieutenant.

Relationships/Friendships/Rivalries/Siblings:
Would likely befriend Anyone in squad 4
Would likely have high respect for his captain
Would likely dislike anyone Squad 11

Other: As a doctor he would likely carry around whatever medical equipment he could carry.

~Zanpakuto~

Zanpakuto name: Urufuhaundo(Wolf-hound)

Type: Familiar summoning

Zanpakuto Shikai Release command: Come to me

Spirit Appearance(Optional):

Inner world:
A forest with a massive tree in the middle

Sealed appearance: Katana

Shikai appearance:Doesn't change

Bankai appearance: N/A

Shikai special ability:
When Urufuhaundo is release, Karma can summon and to 3 wolf-hound familiars to aid him as well as dispel them from anywhere. All three Familiars can act Autonomous as well as high intellent(for an animal) and will tries there best the act on Karma last order to them. Karma's familiars travel up 200 meters away from him, and can use his spiritual energy to increase their physical abilities; This, however, makes it harder to keep track with how much spiritual energy he is going while his familiars are away from him. Finally, what make theses wolf-hound real for squad 4 is there ability to heal his allies by licking their injuries, For their saliva contains special healing properties; However release this special saliva comes with a tax, and require hounds to burrow spiritual energy from Karma.

Bankai skills: N/A

(Skills that do not cause harm to an opponent)

Skills & Masteries
(Note: Remember that a GM can help you with the skills as it'll likely be faster and easier)

Zanjutsu

Kido

Hakuda

Hoho
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Approved or nah~
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@Ciphra Lol your characters appearance is Sayaka and my shikai appearance is Sayaka's sword
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@LokiLeo789yeah that's fine, we just want to avoid him using this skill against opponents that are past his limit, not that I'm saying he can't use it against them but after taking so many hits ye chain should be broken. Besides that, you're good xD

@Vongola_Hasayo
You good too *thumbs up*

@KillBox
...*dissipates*

Get yo ass on Skype btw
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@Phobos thank you. I'll probably add some custom Zanjutsu skills in a bit. Shouldn't be anything troublesome but I'll tell you when I do.
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@Vongola_Hasayoah sorry, forgot to address that xD yeah just go ahead and use a simple template like

Skill name- skill level(ie captain/lieutenant) - Skill description for any Hakuda/Zanjutsu/Hoho skills you guys want to get approved and PM em to me

For custom Kido skills, this template could work or whichever you guys wanna use, long as I get the general idea xD

Kido
Kido Name
Kido class (Bakudo/Hado/???)
Kido number
Kido description/appearance
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@Phobosim not home right now and you're petty... <____<
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@LokiLeo789 Alright, I got me first mate! Good fer ye, laddie, and welcome aboard! Hahaha.
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@KillBox Revenge >:D but nah, Kurisa said he wanted to take care of your character
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@Phobosok then...
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@Ciphra Lol your characters appearance is Sayaka and my shikai appearance is Sayaka's sword


Hey, if it works it works XD
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So uh, can I post my character in the character tab now? Or do I have to wait for Kurisa too?
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I wonder if I should bring back my old char =x=
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@Kitsune -throws you into the yes bin-
Hidden 8 yrs ago 8 yrs ago Post by Brink
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I think I have finally decided on a character. He will have to be a lieutenant (Third division) which I don't mind, but would it be possible for him to be the generational prodigy?
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@Brink as in skilled? I think all lieutenants are skilled in some manner xD
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I think he is saying more skilled than the other Lieutenants. Prodigies usually are.
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@Oblivion666 In the Bleach lore prodigies can be born every generation or so. Gin Ichimaru was one, he became Aizens Lieutenant when he was very young. Captain Hitsugaya is the current one, as he is a captain already despite being younger than everyone else.
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@Brink
So you're asking if you can have a character that is younger than the others but has prodigal skills that lets him keep up with other Lieutenants? If so, then I see no problem with it really
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