The scream of the Trooper was horrifying. He was twisting on the floor and screaming for the sweet release of death. There was nothing I could do. The cause of this suffering was as clear as his scream: he was corrupted.
And, unfortunately, so was I.
But there was a difference: I was corrupted, but protected. But it was growing. Growing, eating me from the inside. I had to hide my face; it had changed. I couldn't recognize it anymore.
This corruption, this fatal illness has been around for years. I wasn't the only one, though. It took my friends, too. But now I'm alone. Alone
CorruptionWiki page The scream of the Trooper was horrifying. He was twisting on the floor and screaming for the sweet release of death. There was nothing I could do(You could kill him, that sweet release of death you just mentioned, was something you could have done.) . The cause of this suffering was as clear as his scream: he was corrupted(DAMN YOU VINESAUCE LOOK WHAT YOU DID!).
And, unfortunately, so was I(So why are you not on the floor screaming and twisting?).
But there was a difference: I was corrupted, but protected(Oh okay you was wearing a condom.). But it was growing. Growing, eating me from the inside(Baby's tend to do that.}. I had to hide my face; it had changed. I couldn't recognize it anymore.
This corruption, this fatal illness has been around for years. I wasn't the only one, though. It took my friends, too. But now I'm alone. Alone with this condition, this fever. It doesn't have a cure, it will kill me someday(Redundancy, is quit redundant, don't you think? don't you think? .
But before that, I must fight it. I must fight it because I'm the only one that can stop this. All my other friends... they are gone. It took them. That thing... It's an exact copy of me(Expect it's not, it's made oh (spoiler) Phazon.) . It knows my moves, it knows my weaknesses, it knows me(It knows what you did in that really shitty 3D game where you had a voice.).
But now, I must face it. even if it kills me, It will kill me, anyway. It took the other bounty hunters. It will do the same with me(Well you did kind of killed them first, before it took them, so it's not all it's fault.). This feeling of dread, the feeling of impending doom. The feeling of no escape(Is not the vibe this is giving off).
I must, for I am the bounty huntress, Samus Aran(This ending was pretty bad, but hey it's short.)
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What did I learn? .
NOTHING! This Creepypasta was a waste of space, and not really a creepypasta, why was it on the wiki?
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Counts:
Hyper realistic:0
Fun:1/10
Interesting:3/10
Plot twists:1/2 maybe?
This was a quickie for the few people who still pay attention to me.