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Vader's Fist. 501st for Life!
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So it occured to me that, because people don't die when they are killed inside the Nexus, a lot of shit I wrote makes zero fucking sense. Like taking a hostage and telling them their life is assured. Not to mention, the way Pilot Guy works would have been he would have shot himself so he doesn't end up as some demonified slave rather than wasting his last bullet for nothing >_>. Idk what to do about that now.
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So it occured to me that, because people don't die when they are killed inside the Nexus, a lot of shit I wrote makes zero fucking sense. Like taking a hostage and telling them their life is assured. Not to mention, the way Pilot Guy works would have been he would have shot himself so he doesn't end up as some demonified slave rather than wasting his last bullet for nothing >_>. Idk what to do about that now.


Assume the pilot new to the warfront, a green horn who lost their head in the face of imminent demise. While death isn't the definitive ending to life inside the Nexus, mankind doesn't not live in the Nexus and can still die outside of it, so mankind has not lost the innate fear of death unless they go full cyborg and stuff.

Also he is a dumb red shirt who was panicking. Panicked humans do things that are not rationale, which is why they have the Machina doing the brunt of the work as they are almost always rationale until they get corrupted.

So really you can leave him as is, because you can't expect everyone to keep their head together when under heavy bombardment, fighting their own turncoats, and being infiltrated by scary ladies of a demonic nature :3
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I'm waiting on the Sisters to respond to the goings on around them, otherwise I'll post tonight or tomorrow.
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I posted. I hope we have some time for small talk before the big battle.
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I imagine we might have some time.
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I think I'll have a post in the morning. Sorry about that. XD I was up at 8 AM and at work from 9 AM to 11 PM yesterday. (Not working all that time of course) but I only had four hours of sleep so I'm still tired right now. XD
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And with that post, I'm also leaving this RP. Goodbye everyone! I genuinely hope everyone here can enjoy it further!
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Will attempt to get a post up myself today.

I'm really tired though so I'm a bit out of it. I'm out of coffee/other caffeine related items so yeeeah. Today's gonna be fun.
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And with that post, I'm also leaving this RP. Goodbye everyone! I genuinely hope everyone here can enjoy it further!


I see. Apologies it couldn't work out. Hope to see you around again sometime.
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This Rp Seems Quite interesting !. ( Have Pmed the Gm about becoming a Demon Lord, So will edit title if it gets approved or not )

Name: Aidoneus inferno
Title: High Lord
Age: 400
Gender:Male
Allegiance:Demons of Hell
Race: Shadow Demon


Height: 6 Foot 7
Weight: 150 pounds
Personality:Twisted is how some would Describe him. It makes him smile when he kills a angel or a human or a other Human It makes him smile whne a child screams for his parents when he sees a creature in the Shadows of his room. He takes delight in everything that would cause panic in people. He does not avoid conflict he jumps right into them. He does not care who he hurts or how many die. He loves the screams of terror he hears when his forces are destroying land belonging to humans. He takes great Delight in those that kneel and beg for mercy as he shows none

History: Aidoneus history is not really known other than he is a high rank in the Demons of Hells. He is one of the very few Shadow Demons or Demons that can control the Shadows. He is known to kill Lesser Demons who do not do his bidding. He views this war as something that was neeed to purge the World of both humans and Angels..So that only demons will roman the earth and rule it completely.
Powers: Controls the Shadows
Shadow Ball - A Ball of Shadows that is unleashed. If it hits a object.. The object becomes Corrupted

Shadow Vines - These Vines of Shadow Trap the user. For most they are hard to break out of as they grow stronger the more a person stuggles in them

Shadow portal - This portal allows for one to travel to places they have been as well as allow lesser Shadow Demons join the battle. The portal only lasts a few seconds and then can not be re opened until the next night.

Embrace the Shadows - The Shadows Completely Surround Aidoneus and create a barrier between him and his enemies. It can only last for a Few minutes. It is only in this form that he can summon more powerful Shadow Demons. Once out of this form he is weak and needs a few hours to regain his strength

Weapons: Sword of The Demons - This Sword was handed to Aidoneus by his father. The Sword is made from Finest Metal in the world and surroudned by the Shadows is only able to be wielded by someone that has control over the Shadows. The Sword is long and sharp.

Daggers of the Fallen - This Dagger is used mainly for Assassinations. Why it is called The Dagger of the fallen is because of how it was Aquired. A fallen Angel once used the Sword before Aidoneus killed him and took the sword

Equipment: Plate Armor ( Arms, Legs Torso )

Other: Aidoneus will not hesitate to kill his fellow Demons if they fail a task. He is ruthless and cruel
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Oh god i missed a lot in the like, few days I was gone. Could someone give me like, a super quick recap of what's happened of the past few days?
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Oh god i missed a lot in the like, few days I was gone. Could someone give me like, a super quick recap of what's happened of the past few days?


Well no one has pursued your Machina, so they escaped cleanly. Suparna retreated from the battle, so Silana, Victoire, and Fran are approaching the Cargo Hold where Aqua Regia, Gwynn, the Sisters, and a punch of cannon fodder are preparing to defend the Objective. The Elicitor has burrowed underground, leading to the Angels that aren't aboard to retreat and bombard the demon army left behind.
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That's a... Pretty sparse CS for a demon lord. Normally they would have more info in the history, powers, equipment, you know, something that really says "I'm a demon lord". Plus most of his abilities appear to be half of Victoire's, and despite her power she's not a demon lord either. Though she's pretty close to one me thinks.

@Shyla Nesthorn

The Elicitor has begun to burrow into the ground and the Machina are trying to escape. The angels have a few agents within the Elicitor, most who have been captured by the Machinas, while the rest of their forces are trying to clean up topside. The demons managed to get their PC's inside the Elicitor and intend to steal the Queen's Treasure, a girl named Bastion. A few of the Machinas PC's are already at the cargo hold were Bastion is at and getting ready to defend it, though they'll be getting some back up in the form of Endian soon enough. But the demons have already started their attack, so if you want to jump in you'd be arriving as the demons are first hitting the cargo hold.
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I think I'll have a post in the morning. Sorry about that. XD I was up at 8 AM and at work from 9 AM to 11 PM yesterday. (Not working all that time of course) but I only had four hours of sleep so I'm still tired right now. XD

I had a busy sunday anyways, not feeling obligated to post was a big help xP
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Yeah.. Well His powers are all about the Shadows.. Will add some more but did not want to go overboard with it. Now that I think about it.. Maybe it would be best if he earned his Demon Lord status somehow.. or took it by force. I normally Play Demon Lords.. But Maybe I will play someone that is trying to become one.

No Idea who that person is.. Will have to look them up
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It seems good up to now. However, a better description of those weapons seems like it could be useful.

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Alright I edited my Post. Included one other power and Described the Sword and Dagger. Hope this is good !
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As it stands, Aldoneus is not approved to be a Demon Lord. We judge these things based on the quality of the CS and there exists very little to be seen to the character beyond they are evil and like shadows.

I understand you are knew, but the existing CSs for this RP have a certain level of depth to them that we would like to maintain, Noire not withstanding, and we would appreciate if you could build upon the CS so that his personality is longer than a single line.
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That is fine.. I was thinking more of the Lines of him being a High Lord ( Not a Demon Lord, Just a Lord in general )

Am Working on ediitng His profile some more.. I am a bit rusty with all of this

Is he approved in general though..Or does he need more work to be done ?

Added more to his Personality as Requested.

You are right he would not be fit to be a Demon Lord.. He takes too much Pleasure in hearing the Screams of those he or his forces kill.
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