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Sleep wellllll :)
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I'm trying to get a feel for how you like to pace character development.

Should I slow down the pace of some of these scenes to get in a lot of dialogue between the two characters? (For instance, should we have RP'd conversation between Kiara and Lamont as he showed her around the castle?) Or is the current pace and generic narration through some of the scenes appropriate?

This way, I'll gain a better grasp of the upcoming scene in the city, which I have a few mild plans for :)
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So I'm probably going to be MIA the next few days. I procrastinated too hard. Oops.

Anyways I liked the way you did the tour scene. I find its more realistic to skip it just because it makes more time pass before they really get closr and two that's just a lot of probably pointless conversation they may have had.
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Haha, alright cool :)

And thanks for the heads-up. Good luck!
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Thanks much. I'll probably post something tomorrow.

I took longer because boys are distracting and make you procrastinate longer.
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*snickers*

They're quite good at that!

And thanks :)
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Woah! Real life. Okay so I'm definitely going to post tomorrow for sure, just not sure when.
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*nod-nod* Real life has a tendency to do that, hehe. As long as it's all good and not terrible/stressful :)

Thanks for the heads-up!
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Ah! I feel bad for taking so long, but there it is!

And no its not terrible/stressful. I actually turned 21 earlier this year, so I'm able to go out now. And I met a guy. And things :o

Anyways, life is awesome right now so it can distract me all it wants. I'll be around during the week from now on though, just maybe not weekends.
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Hey :)

Sorry for the lame response after the wait... it seems the site was having issues for a day or so; I was finally able to post now!

Also, grats on meeting a guy! Getting to know someone the first little while is always the best :D
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Yeah. Its actually my first time, most people I meet through friends. He's the first I met on my own :o

And no probs! I saw mahz was doing something to the site earlier.
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Yeah, he was... hopefully he can fix the double-post issue too :)

I met both my ex and my current boyfriend online; I'm horrible at bars/parties, and work/school never brought me any success in that regard. It's utterly lame of me, but whatever works, I suppose. I'm happy, so yay!
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Yeah, he was... hopefully he can fix the double-post issue too :)

I met both my ex and my current boyfriend online; I'm horrible at bars/parties, and work/school never brought me any success in that regard. It's utterly lame of me, but whatever works, I suppose. I'm happy, so yay!
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I met a couple of mine that way. This guy actually sits next to me in class and invited me out. It was the first time it ever happened to me :o

I'm the kind of awkward person who can't look people in the eyes, so I feel you.
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Siiigh. Sorry. School is getting crazy lately, so I'll be posting maybe twice a week. Hopefully more, but that's what its looking like.

Just letting you know I'm still around though!
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Gotcha! That was supposed to have been our original arrangement anyway, haha. Good luck with your studies.
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Bahaha true enough. Unfortunately for me I'm a super procrastinator. So.... here I am. And stuff. Also

Aw... Lamont. You have no idea about Kiara's temper. Obviously.
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Obviously :p

He's almost a mirror opposite of Ostus. Poor guy needs to learn to "man up" lol
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Aw. That's so mean. Yet true. He is gonna need to grow some balls if he's gonna be able to handle her.
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I feel sorry for Kiara at this point. She somehow managed to alienate both her men in one day. Her loneliness must be great right now.

lol, Kiara's comment... I love how she just blurts things out like that, hehe
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