[OOC] Soldier Made [Heaven & Evershadow]

[Heaven]

:)

I'm excited to get started! :D

[evershadow]

I'll put up a post soon! :)

[Heaven]

Ok! I'm feeding the little one and doing some cleaning while I wait.

[evershadow]

Posted for you, sorry about how short it is.

[Heaven]

It's okay I replied.

[evershadow]

^^

[Heaven]

How's your toe?

[evershadow]

Absolutely killer! It burns constantly like a motherf!*@cker. I'm so sorry for my lack of activity today but I can promise that tomorrow'll be a different story!

[Heaven]

Okay :) Tomorrow afternoon (about 4 my time) I've got a baby shower to go to for a friend but I'm free until then- and baby free too! She's going to a birthday party, one of her cousins.

[evershadow]

Hello there my lovely! I'm going to post now.

[Heaven]

Hello there! ^.^ and d'awwwh *blushes* Okay ((((((:

[evershadow]

Posted for you!

[Heaven]

Replied!

So I was thinking about Emma- we need a more solid reason why they fell out.. read my post and see what you think about Emma being the one taking the picture and sending it to the whole school? Because she's jealous of Riley? Then when Riley finds out she blames Alex?

[evershadow]

I think they don't really need to fall out more so as grow apart. I think it works better considering how friendly they were when they finally met back up. The introduction of Emma was to have a bit of innocence put into Alex's life. I haven't gone into great detail about it yet but I'm going to start in these flashbacks about his life before he escaped.

The beating Alex gave Rick was over the top and he carried on like an animal. The whole school judges him except for his sister (Riley) and Emma so he looks to Emma as a source of comfort as well as a symbol of innocence because his sister has started to ignore him to fit in.

The way I saw what was going on was that Riley was ignoring Alex in school and mostly at home because she wants to fit in and be cool, also explains why she lost her virginity to Jeremy. Now she is suffering with the consequences, having her picture posted around the school. A more interesting root would be to have Tiffany be the one who sent the picture around? At first Riley is mad but for fear of losing everything she submits and stays friends with Tiffany and her crew of bitches. Probably because Tiffany gives some excuse as to why she did it.

What do you think of that?

Also, Alex is going to go after Jeremy when he finds out.

p.s. I know Tiffany is Jeremy's brother so it seems twisted and perverted that she would take pictures of his having sex with Riley but hey it adds to the dark underlying theme of the roleplay.

[Heaven]

Oh, yes!

I like that better, didn't even think of it!! Let's do it! Well after you reply of course. xD

[evershadow]

Posted!

[Heaven]

As did I!

[evershadow]

Same here, perhaps we can post a bit about Riley and Alex interacting at the house.

[Heaven]

I was thinking of doing that. :)

Maybe the parents are gone for the night, having a date night?

Do you want them to interact around the house a little, then flash back to present times?

Maybe later on in the RP we'll go to another flashback, but this time their senior year and prom and graduation?

[evershadow]

Sounds good!