[OOC] [s]The City of Swords: Corruptions End[/s] (Dead)

[manapool1]

I'll try, but I'm pretty beat right now.

[manapool1]

Hey guys, sorry to be so slow. I'm a little confused. What's happening?

[Marcus XVI]

Nothing much is happening yet, but things will get rolling properly after you have posted your starting post - I think. ^^

[manapool1]

Sorry, meant to respond this morning, but my internet was out!

[Rook]

Sorry, meant to respond this morning, but my internet was out!

@manapool1

Great post! :) Will follow up with GM/NPC responses this evening

[Rook]

Will post in a second :)

[Rook]

Hope people are getting a jist of whats going on and who's where from my post :o

[Marcus XVI]

And I have posted ^^

[Rook]

Do you think it appropriate for, when you're writing posts, to take control (verbally) of the NPC's? For instance, you,@Marcus XVI, can control The Counsellor of Peace when you're talking with him, within reason. What do we think?

[Marcus XVI]

Well I do think it would be appropriate to a certain degree, but I prefer to stick with my on characters as much as possible since their thoughts, feelings and other such I have full control over.

[Rook]

That's understandable :) I may have, in this post, restricted a little freedom by time-skipping and also pre-deciding where your characters would be (mostly assumption, not purposefully restricting creative freedom) - this own't happen again, I just needed to have a focus on where everyone was because some descriptions of location were a little unspecific and I didnt want to leave you out of the post

[Dcatanzaro682]

@Rook
yah, in general I'm lost xD and we're only 8 posts in.

[manapool1]

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Great post! :) Will follow up with GM/NPC responses this evening

@Rook

Really? Thank you. You may hate to hear that these are all rehashes of older and lesser characters of mine. I hope you don't mind that I sort of made my character's in a very diverse place, I wasn't sure the sort of society we are in, hence the hookah.

[Rook]

@Rook
yah, in general I'm lost xD and we're only 8 posts in.

@Dcatanzaro682

To summarise:
My first post was of new NPC's establishing a general location for the resistance to meet. I let everyone post an introductory segment so they could, in relation to the first post, identify where their character was and what they were doing - to place them in the world. My second posy was reactionary, addressing what was going on to each character - I grouped several characters into the same segment that I knew were in the same place eg. Raulf and Ramia at the Lord of Swords' tower, Trask, the Avar twins, and Soma at the unspecified bar they were drinking. Its wise not to write a post until I, as GM, have made a post addressing your character - but, like in the scene to come, there will likely be lots of back and forth short posts so we can simulate conversation instead of large descriptive paragraphs

[Jintaru]

Posted, guys. Apologies for the lack in quality of this one, got a lot going on at the moment. MUST TRY HARDER

[Dcatanzaro682]

Edited: Sorry again about the confusion, I think I'm on the same page now. Unfortunately I can't get rid of the original post I made that made no sense whatsoever, but just ignore that, I deleted everything I had in it and created a new one that's actually in the proper area, once again sorry.

[Jintaru]

@Dcatanzaro682

Just letting you know that your last post came after my character left the room and went to the back of the inn.

Not sure whether or not folks want me to delete my last post and respond retrospectively to yours of if you want to alter your post instead.

As it stands, the timeline doesn't make sense

- Jin

[Rook]

I think Dcat needs to alter their post - regardless of what you 'want to do' any posts that happen before you post you cannot contradict (excluding 'insta-hit' actions which are forbidden). So Dcat yeah, you'll need to alter your latest post - you'll need to do that before we can continue

@Dcatanzaro682

[Dcatanzaro682]

@Rook@Jintaru Sorry again, I might be a little behind. Thanks for the PM Rook, I'll change it back to the original post. If I've managed to have done anything wrong again please let me know and I will attempt to correct it as soon as possible.

[Rook]

Not a problem :) I'm new too, it'll take a while before we get a natural flow going. As soon as you're done I can work on the next NPC post