[OOC] Enslaved Salvation(Werewolf RP)

[ViolentViolet]

@Nallore
Worst job ever. I haven't even worked at one and I'm not doing it.

[Nallore]

Good don't lol.

[ViolentViolet]

I don't mind where I am though. It's not that bad.

[Nallore]

*Points to rule number 9 in the OP* Has to be posted here before its accepted. But looks good to me so far.

[Arista]

*Points to rule number 9 in the OP* Has to be posted here before its accepted. But looks good to me so far.

@Nallore

Thsnks Co-gm of mine. Added another rule to the list xS now it's even lol.

[Arista]

@Ladon Accepted, however his appearance needs to be a real picture instead of a description of what he looks like. Besides that it seems fine to me.

@ViolentViolet what do you think?

@Nallore Your opinion stays the same on his sheet?

[Nallore]

Maybe expand the backstory a bit, add a picture to me like pictures. :P But otherwise I still think its acceptable.

[Nallore]

"My sister is the only person I have left, I will find her and rescue her even if it means my own life!"

Name: Caroline "Carol" Stark

Age: 25

Gender: Female

Appearance:




Personality: Before losing her pack to the humans, Caroline was as friendly to all of the members of her pack and her family she is the closest to. Pack is normally family, that'd what I'd like to have for them until Hunting day takes place) She was very loving and caring and helped out when they needed, but it all changed five years ago when her pack was attacked and captured, those who resisted were killed while the others ended up getting captured. Being the sole survivor of her pack she has since then been mostly sheltered and sometimes very cold hearted to others, and tends to be a very loose canon now, Caroline despises humans now but she still knows that if she ever reveals herself she would end up being captured, so she avoids them at all costs.

History: Caroline was originally born in a very small mountain town in Pennsylvania to the leaders of the Red Lake wolf pack. Both of her parents were very kind and growing up the Red Lake wolf pack was known to be rather peaceful but only attacked when provoked into fighting. Caroline was the very loving and caring type and she was the closest to her younger sister Riley, the two of them were inseparable, and were always seen to be hunting with each other. When the incident finally happened and the hunters invaded their town a lot of the Red Lake pack members went to defend their home.

But they were eventually overrun and were forced to surrender, their parents ordered both Riley and Caroline to flee which they both did. As they fled into the woods Riley's foot was caught in a bear trap. Caroline tried her best to save her sister, before Riley finally told Caroline to run away, eventually Caroline started to run away looking over at her sister one last time as the hunters ended up capturing her. Since that day Caroline vowed to find her sister once more, Caroline eventually met up with another pack since then she has been in hiding still hoping one day to be reunited with her sister.

Rank Within the Pack: Omega

Pups: None

Relationships: Riley Stark Sister: (Currently Captured)

Name: Riley Stark

Age: 18

Appearance:




Gender: Female

Ex-Pack Name: Red Lake

Ex-Position: Pup

Ex-Territory: Western Pennsylvania

Personality: Before her capture Riley was a very energetic, very loving and carefree spirit, she was young but very smart and sometimes mischievous to those around her. Then when she was captured and forced to endure very painful and sometimes humiliating experiments performed by the scientists, Riley is now very fearful of her current handlers and wont even fight against them hoping that they would stop with the experiments.

History: Riley was born to the pack leaders being the youngest she was closest to her older sister Caroline, growing up Riley was always the mischievous pup and would occasionally pull a prank on a few of the other members of the Red Lake Pack. As she grew older Riley became a rather good hunter for the pack under the guidance of her older sister. Then when the hunting of the packs started Riley and her sister witnessed members of their pack either being slaughtered for resisting, or getting captured by the hunters. When their parents ordered them to flee they did.

As they fled into the woods, Riley caught her leg in a bear trap doing what she could she tried to free herself. But when Riley started to hear the hunters getting closer Riley told her sister to make a run for it, when Caroline reluctantly agreed to flee the hunters finally caught Riley and forced into a van bound to the facility in LA. Being separated from her parents it was the last time she saw any members of her family and other pack members. During the passing years Riley was subjected to intense experiments anything from shock therapy to surgery.

[Arista]

@Nallore fne to me, just go back over Caroline's personality and add comas or periods where the sentences run. Other than that...oh! For Riley's pack position...what's a Iota?

[Nallore]

@Aristahttp://www.wattpad.com/10450812-positions-of-the-wolf-pack This is where I found it has all wolf pack positions Iota's are the pups basically and will make those edits soon. I can change Riley's to Omega if you need me to. :)

[Arista]

@Aristahttp://www.wattpad.com/10450812-positions-of-the-wolf-pack This is where I found it has all wolf pack positions Iota's are the pups basically and will make those edits soon.

@Nallore

Huh, didn't know that. Though to make it easier she'll be a pup instead of a Iota -if that's fine-, however a pup to me is a child/early teen who still doesn't grasp his/her shift and is I'm need of guidance. Make sense? I kinda lost myself xP

[Nallore]

@Arista Makes sense to me. :) I'll just edit her as a pup then, I just put her as a pup cuz I don't consider adults until they are 20 but that's just me. *Shrugs*

[Arista]

@Arista Makes sense to me. :) I'll just edit her as a pup then, I just put her as a pup cuz I don't consider adults until they are 20 but that's just me. *Shrugs*

@Nallore

Pups aren't considered Betas until they reach adulthood 19-20 -in my head-) so that's fine, also separate them so others can tell it's two people. Also for Riley you should read over her personality and history, a few mistakes are there. Not big ones it won't hurt to edit ^~^ once those changes are made, place them in the Character tab!~ ^>^

[Nallore]

@Arista Would you be okay with PMing me what needs to be fixed specifically? Not sure what needs to be edited there on both of them.

[Arista]

@Arista Would you be okay with PMing me what needs to be fixed specifically? Not sure what needs to be edited there on both of them.

@Nallore

Sure ^>^ no problem

[ViolentViolet]

@Ladon Accepted, however his appearance needs to be a real picture instead of a description of what he looks like. Besides that it seems fine to me.

@ViolentViolet what do you think?

@Nallore Your opinion stays the same on his sheet?

@Arista

I don't mind the description - sometimes its hard to find a good picture on the internet unless you really know where to look. And an expansion on the backstory would be good as well. His description is longer than it >_<

[Stitchblades]

@Arista @ViolentViolet
[/b] what is the conditions like for those werewolves in England and europe? thinking about having a sibling pair of lone wolves come over to help the cause?

[Arista]

@Arista @ViolentViolet
what is the conditions like for those werewolves in England and europe? thinking about having a sibling pair of lone wolves come over to help the cause?

@Stitchblades

The fact that you mentioned that makes me happy ^>^ the wolves in Europe won't be mentioned until later, when the war begins to spread to their lands. However for now we're sticking with US Weres.

[Stitchblades]

@Arista would i still be able to run with the pair i mentioned - maybe have them flee to the US in hope of looking for a pack to help them back home then they find out how bad it is in the US?

[Arista]

@Arista would i still be able to run with the pair i mentioned - maybe have them flee to the US in hope of looking for a pack to help them back home then they find out how bad it is in the US?

@Stitchblades

There's only one pack free and that's the one most of the Omegas are turning to. Hunting day hasn't spread outside of the US, PM what you have in mind and I'll converse with my co-gms.