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Eggs: I do not see how eggs will play a major role because you wont need to breed to get moves.. If logically the pokemon should be able to learn it then start working on teaching it.
Key Items: Are of coarse they will play a role. We will need that flute if we are gonna wake up snorelax, And bikes.. Golden rod city as usual. if you like get fancy and get a skate board... don't care. (though a bike is likely better. lol)
Fossils and Underground: Fossils will of coarse be included and Underground is fine if you guys want it.
Safari Zone: That is a must have!
TMs: Not really.. It is the trainers job to teach them.. (Besides I never really got how pokemon learned from a disk anyways.) I do have some ideas for replacing TMs though.. and am welcome to more..
Pokedex: There is no reason to complete it.. Lets just say Red already did that, so catch your favorite pokemon and have fun.. Rember that you can only carry six and be considerate not to catch too many so that every one has a chance to hav a unique party. However is someone catches the some pokemon you have then have fun with it. ^^ ( There are plenty of Zoobat to go around)
Key Items: Are of coarse they will play a role. We will need that flute if we are gonna wake up snorelax, And bikes.. Golden rod city as usual. if you like get fancy and get a skate board... don't care. (though a bike is likely better. lol)
Fossils and Underground: Fossils will of coarse be included and Underground is fine if you guys want it.
Safari Zone: That is a must have!
TMs: Not really.. It is the trainers job to teach them.. (Besides I never really got how pokemon learned from a disk anyways.) I do have some ideas for replacing TMs though.. and am welcome to more..
Pokedex: There is no reason to complete it.. Lets just say Red already did that, so catch your favorite pokemon and have fun.. Rember that you can only carry six and be considerate not to catch too many so that every one has a chance to hav a unique party. However is someone catches the some pokemon you have then have fun with it. ^^ ( There are plenty of Zoobat to go around)
Oh.. there is one restriction on evolution.. if the pokemon had an Item that was needed in order to evolve than that is that.. No worries you can randomly find the item on the road lol. ^^ Most likely I'll set it up to where like you get reapers cloth in places like lavender town and electizers in a Power company an so on. If you really need one than think about where it might logically be..
Restrictions. Not really... Think about each pokemon as if they where real. If a Machamp can move a boulder than it can! And passive and or hidden abilities are also simply part of the fun. This is the concept we will use so that every thing is simpler.. No Hidden machines. Leveling and evolution is a good question on the other hand.. I have never really run some thing like this so Ideas would be wonderful. But if we want to install a leveling system than best thing too do is get as close to the games as possible.. Though on that note, flaws of the leveling system are that it will restrict our move set and the ability to coordinate our own moves too.(that is what I don't want) So if a leveling system is something we need to incorporate then any ideas are welcome! ^^
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9 yrs ago
Forum: Advanced Roleplay
Sorry I haven't been more active. Work, work, impromptu date, dad's birthday kinda wrenched my week.
@Alchemist All right, first I support any criticisms my co-GM may have brought up. He is in that position for a reason. So I can confirm everything he has put forward. Now as for the edited sheet, I will bring up my own points.
- First of all, she needs a last name. I don't care if she calls herself Snow, Sand, whatever. Madonna would use her real name to register for something like this. She needs a full name.
- The contradictions in character are rough to balance. She's kind to the point where people take advantage of her, yet shy and untrusting. Does that mean she judges character that poorly? Can't be, since you say right after "she's been known to read others well." The patient yet reckless line, I'm willing to overlook, because I believe I can see where you're going with that, but you're veering dangerously into a case of Meredith Brooks Syndrome (I'm a bitch, I'm a lover, I'm a child, I'm a mother, etc.)
- Orphaned on it's own is sketchy, especially if you're giving her access to a bunch of materials to allow here to be a mythology expert and a martial artist. Giving her a direct link to multiple established canon characters is sketchy as well, definitely to the extend where you're claiming one as a brother and another as a step father.
- Amnesia is one of the defining Mary Sue character traits, and I'm definitely not having that.
- Your starter Pokemon would be at level 5.
- Aura in general is a subject I'm not looking to bring into this RP. It just adds stacked on layers that is going to be lost in the main plot. I don't see a way to incorporate it without bogging it down more than my current life schedule is already doing.
- Nitpicking, but the English graduate in me sees the writing with all the capitalization in random places, and spelling errors, and I die a little inside.
@Shiny Figment
- There are some editing errors in here as well "somethe, ofthe, himso" Other than that it looks pretty good. Welcome aboard. Place your sheet in the characters tab and go try and convince an angry Gary Oak to give you a Pokedex.
I can adjust my story and any thing else as much as you like and am very willing to. Elm is not her step father and I do not have Amnesia. I was to young to remember the full events of that day. She was 6, and now ten years have passed so the memories are at very least foggy.
But my Riolu and the ability to tame Aura is an unnegotiable term for me even if I was not allowed to catch any other pokemon I would be happy with a Lucario that can do every thing it is suggested to be capable of.. If you can not fit that in, then this is simply not the role play for me. I am Sorry for being so stubborn but Lucario Really means that much to me! ^^
On the other hand I will fix any thing else if you can tell me that you will try to give me that lucario the way it's meant to be. (With the ability to tame Aura and every thing! As seen in "The Mystery of Mew" Pokémon movie)
Name: Lyra Crys Sinclair
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Appearance: She has White like silvery hair with a bright blue tent. Her eyes look much like her own Arua, They are Blue. She is small and has very delicate features which has led others to under estimate her.
Typically she wears A white dress with out sleeves and wears long black gloves with a blue design like flower petals up below her shoulders. she wears her white trainer shoes with black leggings that are identical to her gloves and wears her trainer pack around her waist.
Hometown: Celestic Town, Sinnoh
Personality: She is shy and untrusting of others. She has been known to read others well and is considered wise in some ways but prefers to keep to herself. She is also a brilliant strategist and is well studied for a rookie. She is patient and cautious but can be passionate and reckless especially when it comes to protecting what she cares about. She is especially passionate about Mythological pokemon.
Bio: She was Orphaned at a young age due to a house fire in Sinnoh. She was a part of a family known for there ability to tame Aura and there house symbol was a Riolu. Her family was wealthy and where revered for there unique and rare abilities. The two Children survived the incident but where unfortunately separated. The older brother was named riley and remained in Sinnoh to be quickly adopted and his sister was sent to Johto to the family who agreed to foster her. she was Elms next door neighbor and when she was young she always wanted to travel and figure out more about where she came from. She still has night mares about the house Fire and remembers bit and pieces but wants to know the truth now that she is older. Elm was always good to her and when her adoptive Single mother nearly lost custody of lyra, Elm stepped in to help and payed everything needed to keep lyra in johto. He was like a father to her. Before she became a trainer she would spend her time at the library reading books or at professor Elm's place under his care. She lived with him and provided assistance in return that one day he would give her a pokemon, and was there for years. Of course Elm never did give her a starter nor did he intend to. He loved having her around and was sad to see her go the day she received a package from a secret admirer in Sinnoh. Inside was Her first pokemon, Riolu! Now she has set off to begin her journey She currently know nothing about her Biological family but is determined to find out who she really is.
Starter Pokémon: Riolu (Called Lu for short.)
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Appearance: She has White like silvery hair with a bright blue tent. Her eyes look much like her own Arua, They are Blue. She is small and has very delicate features which has led others to under estimate her.
Typically she wears A white dress with out sleeves and wears long black gloves with a blue design like flower petals up below her shoulders. she wears her white trainer shoes with black leggings that are identical to her gloves and wears her trainer pack around her waist.
Hometown: Celestic Town, Sinnoh
Personality: She is shy and untrusting of others. She has been known to read others well and is considered wise in some ways but prefers to keep to herself. She is also a brilliant strategist and is well studied for a rookie. She is patient and cautious but can be passionate and reckless especially when it comes to protecting what she cares about. She is especially passionate about Mythological pokemon.
Bio: She was Orphaned at a young age due to a house fire in Sinnoh. She was a part of a family known for there ability to tame Aura and there house symbol was a Riolu. Her family was wealthy and where revered for there unique and rare abilities. The two Children survived the incident but where unfortunately separated. The older brother was named riley and remained in Sinnoh to be quickly adopted and his sister was sent to Johto to the family who agreed to foster her. she was Elms next door neighbor and when she was young she always wanted to travel and figure out more about where she came from. She still has night mares about the house Fire and remembers bit and pieces but wants to know the truth now that she is older. Elm was always good to her and when her adoptive Single mother nearly lost custody of lyra, Elm stepped in to help and payed everything needed to keep lyra in johto. He was like a father to her. Before she became a trainer she would spend her time at the library reading books or at professor Elm's place under his care. She lived with him and provided assistance in return that one day he would give her a pokemon, and was there for years. Of course Elm never did give her a starter nor did he intend to. He loved having her around and was sad to see her go the day she received a package from a secret admirer in Sinnoh. Inside was Her first pokemon, Riolu! Now she has set off to begin her journey She currently know nothing about her Biological family but is determined to find out who she really is.
Starter Pokémon: Riolu (Called Lu for short.)
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Oh, I'll make one right now! I apologize... I quoted Oak Mostly as a joke I thought people would enjoy.. lol never thought it would get in the way..
Uh... Okay.
By the way, the form looks a bit clunky; would it be possible to streamline it so it's easier to copy/paste and stuff instead of having to remove a sentence or so from each line?
Like that or need something else?
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