RyuNoHime said
I hope this is still open.
Name: Ursa Vastia
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Overview:
Dynamic Ice-Make Magic is a form of Molding Magic that allows the user to create ice at will and to shape it into living things. Ursa is also capable of making several basic static objects.
Skill List:
- Freeze: Ice-Make's most basic, yet one of its most useful capabilities is that of covering everything Ursa comes into contact within ice. This comes in useful for a variety of purposes, from damaging opponents to making things composition weaker in order to more easily break them.
- Ice-Make, Eagle: Ursa creates several eagles that fly to her enemy and strike them. As a dynamic form of ice magic, these eagles can avoid any obstacles to hit their target.
- Ice-Make, Snow Dragon: Ursa creates an ice Dragon that rushes towards its target, and crushes them.
- Ice-Make Wolf: Ursa's entire arm is enveloped by a thick layer of ice which manifests as the head of a wolf. This strengthens her punches and increases the damage it causes to her enemies.
- Ice-Make Water Serpent: Ursa creates a large, spiraling serpent made of ice that freezes her intended target upon contact.
- Ice-Make Sword: Ursa creates a sword made of ice for melee combat. The strength of the sword is powerful enough to combat normal swords.
- Ice-Make Shield: Ursa creates large pieces of ice in front of herself, which then quickly reforms into hexagonal pieces arranged in a shield-like barrier to protect everything behind it.
- Iced Shell: Iced Shell is a technique that uses the spirit and the physical body of the user to freeze the target into a block of ice. It is virtually unmeltable as it is not actually a block of ice. It channels the user's body into the form of ice, destroying their body. Ursa learned this spell on her own, in secret, but understands it's cost enough to never use it lightly.
History: Raised in Lyon's care,
Three Weaknesses:
3. Stripping habit (because every Ice Mage needs one)
Additional Details: The tattoo on her stomach signifies that she was adopted into a tribal clan she encountered during her journey south. The tribe adopted her as one of their own after she bested their warriors in a friendly drinking competition.
Okay, first of I would like to say that I am not accepting your character as it is and I will be blunt with my issues.
first off is the name: Vastia. In the cannon of this RP, nearly every character in the mages guilds from the original version has died. that includes Lyon. He died around age 30, perhaps enough time to have offspring but not nearly enough to raise them.
second is your magic. several times in the orriginal, it is stated that molding magic is only limited by ones imagination, a molding wizard doesnt have a set spell list. Also, I dont believe Iced shell is a type of molding magic but rather a seperate spell all together.
third, history. Lyon is dead.
fourth, weeknesses. No, not every ice mage needs a stripping habit, in-fact in the official cannon only one ice mage has a stripping habit, gray. none of the others do.
fifth, the tatoo. why would a random tribe accept her as one of their own just for being an impressive drinker. perhaps a reward. Especially if she was just passing through anyways.
Finally, all in all she just feels like a female version of grey and Lyon put together which brings to mind this rule:
lordMidget said
3. Absolutely no canon characters or copycats! Similar magic is allowed, but original magic is encouraged.
Sorry but I cannot accept this character.