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The problem is even further back than my previous post. It came about when you wrote this:

"Lazlo continued advancing towards a junction in the hallway which led to an elevator as he responded, "Activate your KDF and BME applications, then eliminate them with prejudice. I'm leaving the top floor to you."..."Standard Deep Space Raider gear." he mumbled to himself, tossing a few papers out of the guy's pocket as he searched for a feeder. It took a few seconds before he managed to find it - it was attached on his left ankle, below three layers of clothing. Lazlo frowned after seeing this, then activated his communicator again as he stood up and rushed down the hallway toward the shielding subsystem. After confirming that he wanted to speak through everyone's communicator, he declared, "Be careful, they have feeders and kinetic ammunition. If you see them sparking or gesturing toward you, find cover." He then quickly continued his journey through the mid-level as Gunther responded by giving him the status of the crew, having eliminated the two remaining combatants in the Oxygen subsystem room."

Ryen and Seita are standing right outside the galley by the elevator. When I read that my line of thinking was- "Huh, Lazlo didn't see them as he rushed past. I guess then the rooms are on the other side of the subsystems from the cockpit? Maybe the the hallways bend? Well, if he didn't see them, then I guess they shouldn't have seen him either." If I 'ignored' your character it was only because mine were ignored first and I thought that's what we were going with. I was simply trying to be flexible.

Either way, I've had just about enough. I don't mind disagreements but I feel that they've happened too often and it's getting to the point where we're constantly bickering. I'm no longer having fun writing for this and have been doing so out of obligation rather than want. Maybe I'm just not a sci-fi writer. Either way, it was nice writing with you while it lasted. So long and thanks for all the fish.
I'm glad!

I'm a bit confused about character placement and I wasn't sure if I should just wing it or not. At the start of the encounter, Gunther was on the top floor, Quincy was on the bottom floor, Ellie was in her room (middle floor), Lazlo was in the cockpit (middle floor) and Ryen and Seita were eating ice cream in the Galley (middle floor).

When the ship got attacked, Ryen told Seita to stay put and ran out of the Galley to a control panel by the elevator. Seita didn't listen but instead went out to provide backup. I'm not sure it would make any sense for them to be on the bottom floor with Quincy especially because at some point the elevator would have been turned off.
The lists have been combined. I've add the manuals for the crew's technology to that tab. I keep having to reread through them (if only I had Ryen's brain implant) to remember and I get tired of searching through the IC.
Eleanor was thankfully in the relatively safe confines of her personal cabin typing away as usual on her tablet. She was nervous, of course, but the repeated sensation of her fingers against the surface of her device helped her relax. Despite being shut away, she could still hear the ship groaning around her. The sound of shooting echoed down the hallway outside.

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So far Ryen had successfully locked down the oxygen and reactor core. She ignored the pain in her lip as she started the process of locking down the airlock for the cockpit. Hopefully Lazlo wouldn’t be trapped inside but if he was, he should be able to easily override the system again. As if on que, the captain’s announcement played over the communicators.

“Ryen!” The mechanic barely had time to register Seita’s voice before a weight slammed into her. Ryen automatically cover her face with her hands as the interface terminal and surrounding wall sheeting exploded around them. Pain lanced through her left forearm. Her fingers there tingled and felt wet and sticky. She was lying on the ground. Something heavy was on top of her… Seita? From her vantage point she could see the underside of Seita's shock pistol as it spun lazily on the floor. A shot rang out nearby, barely missing them. Ryen's brain struggled to come to terms with what had just happened. Was someone was shooting at them. From the crew quarter’s airlock? The lack of cover in the middle of the hallway meant the two women were practically sitting ducks.

“Maria- Override: Delta- Foxtrot-072” Ryen called to her communicator. In an instant, every light in the hallway blinked out including those for emergency landings.

In the distance, something crashed to the floor. Ryen quickly grabbed for the abandoned shock pistol she knew would be there. Fumbling Ryen quickly sat up before reaching out and gently shaking the girl’s body. Seita didn’t move. Standing up Ryen pocketed the gun into her tool belt, and hurriedly carried the girl further down the pitch black hall, away from their assailant. There wouldn’t be much time left before the lighting kicked back on again, her oral override only being temporary.

Ryen continued to smear blood over the ship’s internal paneling as she felt for the elevator doors. As she’d hoped, Gunther had already shut the machine down and, since the last place it had stopped had been their current floor, the doors had opened automatically due as a safety mechanism. If she knew the oral codes, she might have been able to override the manual shut down and have the doors close behind them, unfortunately Ryen did not and the control panel was both in the hallway and shot to pieces. Going inside the open elevator was risky and might lead to them being boxed in but it was far better than simply lounging around in the hallway without any cover.

Pain continued to lance through her arm as she dragged Seita inside. In the dark she felt for the pistol again, not surprised to find that it had already been loaded and the safety was off. Tiny blue and orange squares cast by the gun’s holographic display shook violently as Ryen readied to use the weapon. She’d never shot anyone and had only reluctantly attended the daily afternoon training session’s Gunther had started the past week. Now she wished she had paid more attention. There’d been something about lining up X’s. She didn’t see any X’s. Maybe she wasn’t doing it right? Maybe it was too dark?

Concentrating hard, Ryen could hear the sound of feet shuffling slowly down the hallway. Slowly the hallway lights flicked back on again.
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Alright. When I get a chance I'll combine the lists.

Looks like we might be in for some snow again.
”Are… you sure this is okay?” Seita asked for the third time as Ryen plopped down a double fudge mini-Sunday in front of her.

“Yes. Just like I’m sure it’s okay Quincy gets a few rationed hours in the medical bay, Gunther occasionally accesses the cargo hold for practice, Ellie keeps syphoning off energy for her tablet, and Lazlo pulls the ship off autopilot.” Ryen said, trying to reassure the girl. She knew about the first three for certain, having had the other crew members ask her for those favors directly. As for their captain, well, it was her best guess on why the energy signatures in the ship sometimes showed slight variations. ”I, on the other hand, get a little ice cream every now and then. It’s one of the perks of my job.” With that, she sat down across the table from Seita and dug in, her promise to eat healthy after her run in at the hotel, long forgotten.

Watching Ryen, Seita tentatively ate a spoonful herself.

”How do you like it?” Ryen asked, enjoying her own delicious mixture of vanilla, chocolate sauce, and bananas.

”It’s… cold,” Seita said before trying another small spoonful, ”And sweet.”

”I’m glad you…” Ryen never finished her sentence as Lazlo’s announcement burst over the ship’s intercom.

”Code 3- U.”

”Clear the airlocks?” Seita asked, happy that Ryen had just reviewed that code with her. ”What’s the U for?”

”Something that’s unidentified,” Ryen said as dread filled her. A scene played in her head from a few days back. Gunther was sitting as this same table, talking about deep space. ”Not seeing anything at all is almost always the best kind of deep space travel.”

”What do you think it is?”

”I don’t know.” Both of them had stopped enjoying their icy treat. ”Behind your seat back is an emergency harness.” Ryen continued as she grabbed her own and locked it into place around her torso. “We should…”

”Code 20” Gunther’s voice prompted over their communicators.



”Ryen. G. Green.” Ryen called out to the device on her wrist and nodded for Seita to do the same. The girl had barely gotten out the three words before Lazlo’s voice rang over the intercom again.

”Code 1 –CE.” The ice cream platters went flying and smashed against the galley walls, smearing across a nearby cabinet. Ryen felt her stomach lurch as the restraint dug into her torso. "Prepare for Code 13 - H, on Go." The mechanic barely had time to catch her breath when she felt the entire ship lurch again. A small light on her wrist device blinked red. Soon after a holographic warning message hovered in the air.

Ryen shouted an expletive as she unhooked her restraint and jumped up. She had to get to one of the ship’s terminal. Maria had been hit and her shields were about to fail.

“Ryen!” Seita called out, starting to unlatch herself. Ryen turned and fell to the floor as she did, the ship shifting under her, the ship’s gravitational controls failing to keep up with Lazlo’s maneuvers.

”No!” The woman replied as she made her way back to her feet. ”Just stay here! I’ll be back… I’ve just got to…” The gallery door slid close as Ryen headed over nearest ship terminal by the elevator. Strapping back into to the ship’s restraint system again she hastily logged in.

Ryen checked the other subsystems and gave a sigh of relief. Just as she was feeling more confident she was rammed against the belting as a loud, crumpling sound echoed down the hallway. Seita appeared through the Gallery door. Ryen didn’t have time to chat as she saw what the noise had come from. Maria’s shielding had been diminished and part of her hull damaged at a location not too far away from where the mechanic was currently sitting.

”Go.”

Ryen worked alongside Lazlo to quickly powering down all non- emergency functions in the residential rooms, galley, medical bay, and storage lockers while diverting the excess energy to try to rebuild the ships shields. It was a slow process to undo all the previous work she’d had set up under Code 5.

"Code 3 – H."

Words appeared in the back of Ryen’s head as adrenaline surged through her veins. Accompanied by the lack of stabile gravity, the mechanic felt giddy and a bit squeamish.”Invaders?” Biting her lip hard enough to make it bleed, Ryen tried to work through her next course of action. ”Air locks?”

”Shut… them… down.” It was Seita’s voice. Ryen looked up and saw the girl was next to her pointing a wobbling shock pistol down the empty hallway. The mechanic swallowed hard and began to override the airlock controls starting from the oxygen subsystem and working her way down sealing off sections of the ship.
FYI I have added a quick reference sheet for the codes under the "Characters" tab.
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Lol. Nice. Our schools around here were also canceled until Wednesday. So much snow! We got somewhere between two and three feet. I lived in DC when I was younger on Bowling Air Force Base. We were only there for two years but I really enjoyed it.

I'm working on my reply but with so much going on right now (moving + snow storm = yuck!) I'm going to be slow about it. I hope to have something up sometime this weekend.

Also, thanks for using Code 3. That's awesome! :)
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