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I've posted up to the main assault entering the chateau, adding to Wraithblade6's post with some more detail about getting inside.

I hope I haven't messed with any continuity there (I've checked and I think it's right). Let me know and I'll change bits if i have to!
Kurak had taken his time approaching the front doors of the chateau, leading the small group of marines carefully from scrap of cover to cover. They now stood less than 100 meters from the front entrance of the grand old building, crouching behind a trimmed hedge in a stacked column, ready to attack. So far they hadn't been spotted. Clipped comms traffic was filtering across the airwaves from the other Astartes watching the perimeter with the occasional report of a downed sentry. Kurak had heard no shots throughout their advance from his Brothers and the guards he could see in the complex looked thoroughly off guard, indicating the marines watching his advance had managed to do their job with discretion so far. He knew the time for such tactics was soon to be over, and was relishing the idea.

"Kurak, Come in", the hushed tones of Prodigal came over his personal comms. Prodigal barely spoke except with his own men, so when directly addressed by him one tended to pay attention.

"Go ahead"

"You are clear to the gate. Ferreus and his men are ready to attack from the far side of the complex. We'll move in to support once you're inside. Kill Everyone"

"Received" Kurak clipped back. Prodigal was slowly beginning to take the lead on this mission and though Kurak was reserved about someone who would hardly spend time with his colleagues, the man clearly knew what he was doing. He was happy enough to follow anyone who gave orders like 'Kill everyone'. Some of the guards at the front of the chateau were smoking and one even appeared to be drinking, while the few men manning the sentry guns and spotlights near the roof were clearly not looking intently for anything coming their way. Kurak almost felt sorry for them, not knowing what hell was coming for them. Jonas, Rivacheg, Lyras, Alypius, Merdem and Brenard were lined up to his rear, rigid and alert for the order to attack. Each man behind him knew their role in getting to the gates and inside, and there was only one thing left to do.

"Now!" Kurak bellowed into his helmet receiver.

Merdem sprang to his feet and opened up with his heavy bolter. The thudding shells stitched deep craters across the crenelated rooftop, smashing through the flood lights, sandbags and men who were scrambling for their weapons. The rest of the Astartes sprang forward, firing their bolters at anything that moved as they made a full run across the relatively open ground towards the main entrance.

Kurak squeezed the trigger on his bolter hard as he ran, aiming it in the general direction of the main door as did his two fellow World Eaters beside him. He wasn't the best of shots and especially not at this range while moving, but the combined firepower of three bolters on automatic fire was more than enough for what they faced. The guards in front of the doors seemed to disintegrate under the barage, the explosive shells blowing apart ribcages and popping craniums as if they were hot needles popping water baloons. Lyras, Alypius and Merdem were alternately snapping expert shots at cameras and other lights at the front of the building and throwing a handful of grenades at the automatic sentry guns on either side as they passed, lining the gravel pathway they were sprinting down. The grenades did their job, fracturing the automated weapons before they could spin up and aim at the charging marines.

A few seconds later all six men arrived at the front gate, stomping through the mulched remains of the hapless guards. They were joined shortly after by the heavy bolter toting Merdem, who Kurak knew was grinning behind his helmet, sharing a lust for battle the equal of any World Eater.

"Jonas, Charges!" He barked, the other Astartes already clearing a path either side of the bolter damaged door as the young marine unstrapped a demolition charge from his leg and pin grappled it to the central lock. He was done in seconds, stacking up behind Kurak as they prepared to make their grand entrance.

Just then a klaxon sounded inside the building, followed by the ever increasing shouts of men. Kurak could also hear the dull rattle of bolter fire around the outskirts of the complex, indicating his brothers watching the outside had also discarded stealth for a more direct approach. So far, so good.

"Now" He said, bracing as the charge was detonated, blowing shards of wood and metal out into the courtyard and also into the building itself. He allowed himself a slight smile as he heard the screams of the soldiers inside who had clearly been preparing a welcome committee for the marines, but hadn't been expecting quite so much high explosives.

"In!" He bellowed, following behind Brenard who had to kick through a clinging remain of the door, in through the smoke and fire...
Posted my CS to be judged. I hope it meets approval.


Nicely written bio. I think it would be cool if you were picked up just after we made planetfall if you are accepted. It would explain why you wern't with us on the first mission and give us some much needed repairs when we meet up! Our poor armour will fall off soon enough with what we're putting it through...

I guess I'll get a post up then...these lengths are imposing though.


Nice post matey. The story is steaming along now. I'll try and get some of the frontal assault by kurak and friends in tomorrow
I think I see a problem developing here. Why don't we all just try continuing the story where the last poster left off? If we just go with what we think is happening in our heads the story won't be consistent or make any sense. Read one another's posts carefully, then continue the story.

In my post I've tried to patch the holes in the events so far, introduce everyone to some degree, and put us in a specific time and place. Read it carefully and you should be able to continue the story with no issues!
Finally had some time to post!

I've combined the first three posts into mine to form a continuous narrative, and also laid out a basic plan of attack. All that remains is for the attack to commence! I hope none of you mind me mentioning your characters in my post, hopefully doing what your characters are supposed to be doing how they are supposed to do it.

Looking forward to seeing this story through chaps.
He lay immobile under the felled branches of several deciduous trees, waiting for the sun to set. It was taking too long. Kurak was getting bored of the seemingly endless waiting, and knew his two men lying quietly next to him shared his sentiment as they had been there for no less than three hours. He decided to risk a slight incline of his head, looking along the natural trench to the 19 marines who had decided to set up there till the time to advance had come. Night fall could not come too soon.

They were a sorry sight, he had to admit. Under the various branches, dead leaves and moss the Astartes had covered themselves with for concealment he could see a kaleidoscopic mix of no less than nine legion colours. They were Orphaned and homeless sons, left with little else but a desire to do something of worth with their tarnished names. Each suit of armour worn by each man had seen better days, their equipment was less than pristine and they were tired, each one of them. Sure they had eaten and slept plentifully in the days before they had made planet-fall, but theirs was a different sort of weariness. They had seen too much in too short a time, a look normally reserved for the Imperial Army recruits after their first taste of combat. Each man here was a veteran of dozens if not hundreds of battles and carried the scars of war as a badge of honor, but each one of them had been betrayed by their brothers. That betrayal was a personal sort of tragedy for each man, and that wound they each carried was not a badge of honor at all, but a soul-deep scar that had left them with nothing but the desire to restore a little of their previous selves. The only way an Astartes could do that was in the blood of their enemies of course, the thought of which made Kurak grin behind his helmet. He was a simple man and not given easily to pholosophical thoughts. It was the damned waiting, he knew, which gave him time to think. He did not like the sensation.

Bethuel was the only one of the 19 men not lying prone, concealed as he was inside a half hollow tree stump at the edge of the clearing giving him a great view of the Chateau ahead. Chateau Thorn. Their target. Bethuel was acting as the group's scout with unspoken but unanimous agreement. In his lightweight armour and toting his sniper rifle he looked the least like an Astartes out of all of them, but the obvious skill at infiltration of the Alpha Legionnaire was beyond doubt. He had remained these past three hours completely still with uncanny patience, watching the building complex in the near distance with unflinching concentration. Each man there waited for the order to advance from him.

It had taken this group of lost Brothers nearly two days of cross country trekking through quiet backwoods to get to this point, and Kurak was surprised they had not attracted more notice. Their landing at the port some kilometers behind them was a characteristically bloody affair. There had been no way to make any kind of landing without taking out the fortified port first due to its highly advanced ground to air tracking technology. Without that going down first, any landing of nearly 20 heavily armoured marines anyhere within 300 miles would have been easily identified and stamped out within moments.

The marines had managed to annihilate the small armoured port within a ten minute period. Kurak and his men along with Ywain, Merdem, Lyras and Alypius had stormed the landing site and killed the unprepared soldiers there while the rest of the group struck out for the occupied landing pad and comms tower. Soon enough there was nothing left breathing in the area except for the loyal Astartes, and they had waited with baited breath for the inevitable artillery strike if the defenders had managed to get a distress signal out. When none came, they knew they had succeeded and headed straight out into the countryside. The small isolated port burned behind them, and Kurak hoped it would not be discovered till long after they had had infiltrated into the wilds of Argyos.

A few isolated military patrols had been taken out on the way, as well as one lone civilian hunting Folari in the woods. None of the population of the planet must know of the force of marines making their way towards their target location, in case they reported the incursion to their superiors even with the best of intentions. Kurak had slipped forward from the group when the man had been spotted early in the morning, more than eager to claim the kill for himself. The terrified man had hardly un-slung his low caliber hunting rifle from his shoulder before Kurak had bisected his upper torso in one clean strike of his combat knife, both parts falling wetly to the forest floor. He knew any of the other marines could have also killed the man, eventually and after some soul searching, but he believed he was the only one who would not have hesitated to kill a civilian for the greater good of the mission. The group had wordlessly moved on from the bloody site and not a word was ever spoken of it again, although he knew he caught a few questioning glances from Kraeger, Ferreus and the other Death Guard.

Kurak's focus was brought to the present by the slight flick of Bethuel's left wrist. It was time to move.

Wordlessly, the Astartes untangled themselves from their natural cover and readied their weapons. They had discussed the assault several hours earlier when the Chateau had first come into sight. Prodigal, Kraeger and Ywain would take the perimeter and eliminate any roving patrols and take out any straggler forces that tried to escape. Kurak and his men, Lyras, Alypius, Merdem and Brenard would then use cover to get close to the complex and then break down the front door, killing anything they could inside. Ferreus and his fellow Death Guard would then engage the Chateu from the road on the other side of the main assault and take and hold the roof. Bethuel would hold back and snipe any stragglers and serious threats inside the complex. Once both assault teams had succeeded in claiming a foothold inside, everyone outside would then tighten the noose and sweep and clear the chateau till nothing lived but those loyal to the Emperor.

They moved out into the gathering dusk, weapons ready for the bloody work ahead.
Just to confirm, as I'm a little confused.

We've taken the port by force and have now moved stealthily towards the chateu. The chateu contains lots of high ranking officers but not the governor, and we're having to lay an ambush before we attack to cut off any retreat?

If that's the case I'll try and post up today and get the story up to where we are ready for the first assault. I would have posted earlier but work has had me on crazy hours since Monday. Cheers!
Great post ozy. Incredibly busy at work at the moment but will post up as soon as I can. I'm happy with my planned role as frontal assault when we get to the villa, doing what Kurak and company do best.

Blood for the Bloo---- oh wait......
I shall endeavour to get a post up tonight! Lyras will probably be going in towards the objective from the outskirts as stealthily as an 8ft giant in power armour can before the main fighting starts.


Point me and my World Eaters in the right direction and stand back. Things are about to get messy.
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