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⟣ The Golden Tree Hotel ⟢

This seems super cool, not sure why it didn't kick off.

Against The Devil (Polytheistic Gods v.s The Devil)!

I'm taking a hold on the Morrígan

RPGC #7 -- Loyalty/Resistance Voting AND Discussion

Okay, here I go. I am not a writing expert at all , I am here to learn. So any reviews I make are from the point of view of a regular, everyday reader. I won't be judging structure or anything, I will be reviewing the stories as I read them.

His Greatness

The first thing I notice is that the beginning of some verses are capitalized, and others aren't.
It's a very straightforward poem about a glorious leader whom is above all else. I love the line
"To defy the great is to defy sanity."
This makes me think of the modern Catholic Church, and how it feels to defy them.

A Short Mention

I like this one. It seems to have a more religious vibe to it than the rest, with the Glorious Leader being godly in nature. It's certainly a twisted creation myth. I'm loving some of the descriptions, all making me feel like the Glorious Leader is the universe itself. It's quite humourus how crazy it gets in the end. But then again, the GLORIOUS LEADER makes us all do quite ridiculous things.

Ode to King Han

This seems almost like a tavern song. I can picture a bard singing the tale of the glorious King Han in a tavern somewhere off the map.
It is made clear that King Han is a perfect leader, making everyone in the land happy. And yet immediately afterwards, we learn of a rebellion. Was the great King Han actually all that great? I like how ambiguous it is.
I love how each line has a rhyme, keeping the flow going throughout the whole piece.

Officer's Lounge

Nothing too surprising here. A futuristic take on the GLORIOUS LEADER. The only two things I had a problem with as a reader was that:
1. the Martian woman "fired shots wildly". This gave me the image of the Martian woman standing up and shooting her gun randomly around the room like a crazy person. We learn quickly that she actually shot with precision, shooting both Velko and Generals Stone and York. Just a small description that confused me.
And 2. The ending confused me. I wasn't quite sure why it was John's fault, or why Tyler was smiling. Maybe it's just me.

Will read and review more later

The Elder Scrolls: Corruption

@Sep Yes, thank you.
I'm working on a post to send to the GM proposing the history I had in mind.

The Elder Scrolls: Corruption

Lyreia

Lyreia's Theme May It Be

"I'll never forget my past..."

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A girl of indiscernable race, Lyreia is welcome nowhere in all of Nirn. She is of average weight and build, standing at about 5'5 with deep auburn hair. Her eyes gleam a steely blue-grey. Lyreia's long auburn locks cover her ears purposefully, hiding her discrace. When looked at, one may think she is a regular Breton, but when she pulls back her hair and reveals her obviously elven ears, her heritage becomes unclear. Some Bretons have slight points to their ears, but Lyreia's ears are sharper than knives. Not even she knows where she belongs.

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【Full Name】
Lyreia

【Race】
Half Breton (Indeterminate)

【Gender】
Female

【Age】
24

【Sexuality】
Unknown

【Birth Place】
Morrowind

【Nation/Allegiance】
Independant

【Profession】
Thief/Adventurer

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【Personality】

Lyreia is a sneaky bitch. Her upbringing has left her untrusting of the world, only believing in herself and her best friend/lover, Hroar. She will manipulate to get her way, and has a history of running away from her problems. She wants to be the best, but is too cowardly to do so.

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【History】
When Lyreia was just an infant, she was left abandoned in the streets of Riften. She was brought to Honorhall Orphanage, where she grew up with four other children, raised by the cruel and abusive Grelod. Her best friend in the orphanage was Hroar. She lived in the orphanage until age six, when Grelod was assassinated, and she ran away from the orphanage. She managed to make it across the border, where she was adopted by an elderly Dunmer couple who found her passed out and on the brink of death. Twenty years later, she was reunited with Hroar, and they began their trek back to Skyrim together.~More Revealed IC~

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【Skills and Abilities】
Lyreia is a skilled thief. She lived off of thievery for a portion of her life, and she was raised to be decietful or die. She is efficient with a one handed blade as well as a bow and arrow. She appreciates the use of illusion and destruction magics, and knows the basics of both illusion and destruction from her adoptive father. She is by no means a master at magic. She has the racial ability Dragonskin. Lyreia can use a bow for basic hunting purposes, but isn't a sharpshooter.

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【Weapons/Tools and Magic】
Weapons/Tools/Armour
A set of simple leather armour. An iron dagger. A hunting bow and 20 iron arrows. 15 lockpicks. A ruby ring.

Magical Spells
I. Flames
II. Sparks
III. Muffle
IV. Dragonskin (Racial)

My feeble attempt at a banner

Fae Courtis: The Wylde Hunt

Still heeeeere

CLOSED/MAY REBOOT IN FUTURE

*dances my STILL HERE jive*

DPRPGC #7: Hail the Glorious Leader

Oh, the Peace March has been a lovely time down here in the commons.
The choir chanting the GLORIOUS ANTHEM was absolutely beautiful.

Such a lovely time

They killed my whole family and my neighbours, all because my little sister sneezed during their nonsensical chanting. I only survived because I am crafty and have my author identification card from this contest on hand. The funeral for my loved ones will be held in a secret chamber at midnight. All rebellion members are welcome.

Fae Courtis: The Wylde Hunt

Naime sits in the court, patiently awaiting Senpai to notice her

DPRPGC #7: Hail the Glorious Leader

OH YES I LOVE MANDATORY EXERCISES. GOTTA WORK THEM THIGHS AND SUCH

Invisi-Hider

Me when the tanks from the Herald's signature come rolling in^^^