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Who is Lucien?


Forgot to change the name. He’s my past OC Tyrell
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Not exactly.

This is a Great House. Even though they're new to that scene, the Tyrells need more fleshing out than a single (contradictive) character with a biography spanning just two paragraphs. As I've said previously: I'd like to see more on his weaknesses, as well as some effort to even out his personality. As it stands, Matthos looks more like a secondary character than a main one.

I refer to my earlier remarks. Not that I want to brag, but I advise you to take a look at my own WIP House Sheet. This should give you an idea of the nature of the sheet we are looking for. Another point to elaborate on would be the Tyrell relationship with their bannermen. They're a young House, with a questionable claim to overlordship of the Reach. There are other, older families with a better (blood) claim to Highgarden and the Lord Paramount title.


Is it better now?
I assume everything is fine with my profile? I would also like to recite my request to be on the Small Council. Either as Hand or Master of Ships if possible
I am a fairly descriptive writer, often preferring advanced over casual. It has been a while since I have also written though I am willing to partake if the plot is interesting enough. Not much of a romance writer but science-fiction/fantasy, alternate history, drama, or other genres of fiction are something I could take considerable interest in.


Hm. Interesting. Would you like to discuss something in PMs if that’s the case?
I rather like the idea of brother against brother in a royal feud, and prefer the older brother so it works perfectly.


Weird. I never got the notification for this post. Let’s discuss this in PM
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I usually put them in the character description. I'm not a huge fan of listing them explicitely.


I prefer to do that. Since I know that people don’t always look at the profiles of people they rp with.
@Sini

Changed and I based the contents off of the template provided. I’ll probably reveal the other topics IC.

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I'll read up on your sheet too.


That’s fine. Here:

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Looking for a full review?


If possible yes
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God I really need to go back through the DoD part of the World Book. XD


Same honestly. Can you look at my profile above as well?
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