Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Cream
Raw
OP

Cream

Member Seen 18 days ago

So, on the old forums I tried this out a few times, both went well but real life took over. So hopefully I can write it up here and see who catches. Hopefully someone will. A little about me. I am 25 almost 26. I'm female and live in a currently flood-ridden South England. Luckily my place of residence isn't under orders to evacuate, unlike many others it seems. Anyway, enough about that. I have been roleplaying since I was 13 and writing since about nine so consider myself to be experienced. I also consider myself to be advanced because I love creating plots and stories, and developing characters. I can write anything from 4-5 paragraphs to a novel for posts (though I try to get the mix right)! I prefer partners who can create plots and stories with me, and develop characters. I care more about the quality of writing then the quantity so don't feel like you have to match mine. I've written seven paragraphs to write what I need in reply, you've written three to get what you feel you need, that's fine. I also get that conversation also gets posts smaller. It's fine.

So, onto my plot.

Meet Essie and Jade. Both have grown up a harsh slave world. Being a slave means a life of serving your mate in this world. It's the future. The military are now the government and things have changed big time. The world is almost like concentration camps that are scattered everywhere. The military took over after there was a rebellion over shitty governments. But things only got worse, not better. The military aren't a government. They were focused on getting the best soldiers so that if they needed to fight, they'd win. It meant that genes was an important factor. It meant a shocking change to the society we know.

A computer generated system known as ASOC was created. ASOC stores all the genetic information for everyone living in that particular 'camp'. Slaves are often traded with other camps in the country so that the genetics vary but it's all about getting the best of the best. If you've not got good genetics, you don't procreate and spend the rest of your days doing hard labour male or female. ASOC determines this at the age of ten. Children go to school from the age of four, both male and female. On their tenth birthday they are put through physical and mental tests and the outcome determines where they go. 90% of females end up in the slave quarters and 90% of men end up as soldiers. It is rare that women become soldiers, but not unheard of. Men that aren't strong enough to become soldiers, if they have good genetics can still become good working men with a decent job within the military - but if you're male and don't have good genetics, prepare for a shitty life and shitty living conditions and no mating. If women don't have good genes, they are either a servant or maid to someone higher up.

If you successfully pass the tests, then you go on to train as a soldier from the age of ten to the age of twenty. If you're a female with good genetics then you go to slave quarters until you're 18 and trained (brainwashed) to serve soldiers. At 18 you then meet ASOC. ASOC runs a data record of all the genetics and compares so that he can pair up a male soldier and female slave that have the most compatible genetics to make the best offspring. As a woman, your job is to breed. You are to cook and clean and look after the man. You are to get pregnant and produce children. If you aren't with a child after six months, tests are done to see if you're infertile. If you are, then it's back to hard labour and the man is paired with someone else. After all, the military want good strong soldiers and good slaves to continue the system. Bad genetics don't get passed on.

This system has now been in place for hundreds of years. No one alive today was alive when it first happened, but people know the stories. The higher ups are corrupt with power, just like the government was before. Soldiers think they can abuse females because they have that right, meaning most women aren't treated right at all. But there is hope. Outside there are rebellion groups that were never captured in the first place and the generations live hidden and free. The military are still trying to find them and capture them. Sometimes successful, sometimes not. But it gives some people in the 'camps' hope. Soldiers and slaves. It's the death penalty to talk about escape or even go as far as to plot it. But some people manage it. And some people get caught. It's a harsh environment and life. But there is hope.

And so back to Essie and Jade, my two main characters. The start is where they're paired with their mates. Are they friends, the two men they're paired with? Are they good or bad? Do they want to escape or not? What happens in this story.

PM me if interested and feel free to make ideas/plots/story suggestions :D
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Cream
Raw
OP

Cream

Member Seen 18 days ago

Still looking for anyone interested in this :)
↑ Top
© 2007-2024
BBCode Cheatsheet