Remember those little buggers are scary little ninjas,

Name: Milo Cash Nickname: Music Man Gender: Male Age: 26 Appearance: Type of Character: Fresh-outta-boot-camp-marine Rank: Private Armor/Clothing: Standard UNSC Armor with http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-0nKyj8RxcxI/UnELheDRkEI/AAAAAAAANmU/p9tWD8Gl42Y/s1600/Girly+music+tattoos+and+music+note+tattoos8.jpg printed to the front plate and helmet Weapons: M6E Standard Issue 4 clips, M90A 12 Shells (mag and reload), 2 knives (one standard issue, the other more ornate a family gift) Equipment: 6 String Acoustic Guitar, Picture of his girlfriend, rations for 5 days Personality: Milo was always seen as a loyal and protective person growing up seen as a "big brother figure" even if he was younger. Growing up he wasn't always confident making him seemed panicked before him and his group went into a fight, but once he started fighting it seemed to be natural and an unnerving calm came into him. These fights were never even for Milo though, he saw it as stupid but went for the sake of who the fight was for. Giving up his time, money, safety everything for the sake of another History: Private Milo Cash, originally an up and coming musician who realized the threat that was coming, and did what he knew he needed to to help humanity. Joining the military he knew he gave up on the future he worked towards since he was young, but he knew everyone would understand and maybe a few would join him. His training kept him on the same planet at least, but right as he got out of basic the Spirit of Fire came and had to infect the planet. Ordered to keep the peace Milo went to post, but when orders stopped and hell came out, he went to where his girlfriend, Jocelyn was New Alexandria hoping to find her and keep her safe. Now that he's arrived he doesn't feel like this will end well Other: Guitar player and singer, "One down, 50 billion to go!"

a energy sword would only take out ten or so combat forms before becoming a useless hilt.

IC posts are getting slow again

I'll post a bit later, just having lunch :L

I'll post after Enalias posts, and hopefully LupusIntus posts soon. I'll post after those two, or if Lupus takes longer than expected, I suppose I'll go after Enalias.

Name: Milo Cash Nickname: Music Man Gender: Male Age: 26 Appearance: Type of Character: Fresh-outta-boot-camp-marine Rank: Private Armor/Clothing: Standard UNSC Armor with http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-0nKyj8RxcxI/UnELheDRkEI/AAAAAAAANmU/p9tWD8Gl42Y/s1600/Girly+music+tattoos+and+music+note+tattoos8.jpg printed to the front plate and helmet Weapons: M6E Standard Issue 4 clips, M90A 12 Shells (mag and reload), 2 knives (one standard issue, the other more ornate a family gift) Equipment: 6 String Acoustic Guitar, Picture of his girlfriend, rations for 5 days Personality: I'm not much of a sentence person when it comes to personality description so I can list, if you truly want sentences I will do them as needed -Loyal -Calm in battle, panicked before -Others before self History: Private Milo Cash, originally an up and coming musician who realized the threat that was coming, and did what he knew he needed to to help humanity. Joining the military he knew he gave up on the future he worked towards since he was young, but he knew everyone would understand and maybe a few would join him. His training kept him on the same planet at least, but right as he got out of basic the Spirit of Fire came and had to infect the planet. Ordered to keep the peace Milo went to post, but when orders stopped and hell came out, he went to where his girlfriend, Jocelyn was New Alexandria hoping to find her and keep her safe. Now that he's arrived he doesn't feel like this will end well Other: Guitar player and singer, "One down, 50 billion to go!"

A few things to fix, and then it will be good to go. One; why did the Marine Corps allow modifications to his armor with the music notes on it? It's an altogether negligible detail though, so if you can't think of something, that's probably fine. Personality needs to be in sentence format. But it's pretty easy to make sentences, just basicallytake the list and say "He is (blah blah blah). He is also (blahblah blah). Around people, he is (blah blah blah)" Like that. Then, is his girlfriend still alive? If so, if she missing or traveling with him? If she's surviving with him I'd ask you to make another sheet for her. If she died, how has that loss affected your character?

Marines often times (I took my thing from idea from real life which is why it came up) put a personal detail, normally they are small, but as a personal thing he printed it himself, if you want it gone I've got no qualms, I'm a detail person. I can fix the sentences that'll be easy it's just I tend to try and write it and it normally ends out bad I'll get it later when I'm not on mobile. And the girlfriend my thing is like he just got there, he doesn't know so for now MIA, I'll find out later depending on how everything lines up. I'm a very fluid person when it comes to things in a story, I never set a plan for characters like that because sometimes it wouldn't make sense so I'll find out as we get there.