Sorry this took a while, but RL, y'know :P
I can't imagine that the Walker children are born disguised. Which would mean, that as soon as the child was born the secret would be "out."
Only if it was the woman who was human, or the couple still together. The rest of the answer for this is in the next part. . . .
Also, sure, rape, but still. Why would one of the Walkers want to have sex with a human? Don't the Walkers kind of consider humanity... the bane of existence?
Not all Walkers think of humans that way, and in fact I can see several races even liking humans. Like Vampires, sure the stereotype is thinking of them as little more than chattel, but there is always the odd vampire love story. I see many other races that may fall in love and want to have a life with their human partners if they are human compatible. Dragons themselves have often been known for taking human lovers and they bearing halfbreed children. I do not see a united level of hatred across the board for any race,even the humans, so, yeah, they could be in love with their human lovers and be trying to keep it secret. Hence, halfbreed children.
Also, as a slightly more major problem, why would that mean that the Organization members have to get killed?
For me this is thinking a little too far ahead. This is the question our characters have to try and answer and I think it would be no fun for us to have the answer to it right off the bat. I like creating a situation for the characters to go through and actually have them work for it. It's a lot harder to do when I already know the answer :P
Why would the Organization not pay well? And, perhaps even more importantly, why would people who are very rich, and are therefore used to living in luxury, hire on for a job that doesn't pay well, that requires them to obey all orders, and, if they don't pay well, probably doesn't have a high standard of living? It is completely counter-intuitive. Frankly, the rich go to where they can make more money. And maybe the Walkers are different, but it still seems backwards to me that they would go and work. especially if they are rich enough and influential enough that they could probably get a job anywhere they wanted.
The answer to this one ties into a later thing I had, but a little on this here that doesn't tie in. Rich. Old and well to do doesn't have to, and in the case of non humans, have anything to do with money. So, rich going where the money is, has nothing to do with the older families I'm thinking of. It's far to human a way of thinking.
Also, the fact that they live a long time would mean that there would be less workers, not more. A longer life span means less children per year, which means less children who would be of the right age to work in the Organization.
I have always thought this idea as bassakwards. Elves can breed as fast at humans, and do. Dragons lay a clutch of eggs and with the modernization have less to worry about, and Were most likely have multiple births as well. I will never accept a direct correlation between life span and children born per lifespan/year/whatever. Since were going with a small selection of races, it still makes sense that the humans outnumber the on humans, however, I really have a strong distastes for the crap about longer lifespans making for less babies. . . . It's always bothered me, and if it's not too off for you, I'd like to toss that old ideal behind in this RP.
I don't think the number of employees would really go down with time. Yes, there may be less problems, the Organization would have control. But the more control there is the more dissent there will be brewing just under the surface. As soon as it starts looking like the Organization is weakening in power, people are going to try and rise up. If the presence of one of the Enforcers is enough to calm things down, that still means you need an enforcer at every dispute, and I can't imagine that the frequency of disputes is going to have gotten any less.
Again this implies that the vast majority of non humans are just looking for an excuse to cause trouble, which after all these years I don't see. I see most being more or less tolerant or even content with living their lives in peace. Sure, most may have a distaste for the shadow living, but they've grown use to it, so, yeah. . . .
Think about America.
No no no no, no. . . .Again, this goes with the “Thinking too human” thing, which will have a tie in further down, but just saying, no. . . .Too human in your thoughts.
I don't think the Organization is looking for a point where they can just kind of... fade out. They are the power, and whether they are a good power or a bad power is beside the point. They are going to want to stay in power.
What I meant by “Money, protection, a chance to have a position of authority,” ... Think about America again. The reason so many people work in the Government, whether they like the government or not, whether they like their job or not, is because it pays well, because it is a very stable job, one that they are not likely to lose, and it has very good benefits. Seeing as the Organization is pretty much like the government of the Walkers, why would it be any different? Besides, many of the downsides to a government job, like the fact that it is incredibly inefficient and many people are lazy, would be removed because of the strict control within the Organization itself. Even if the Walkers don't like the Organization, if they see it as a cruel overlord, there are still going to be people who will go and work for them. Maybe their family is sick, and they need the Organization to pay for whatever substitutes as Medical Bills. Which the Organization would probably only do for employees. Maybe they want to be close to the "boss," so that, if or when things go bad, they will be on the "winning" side.
I think this is the main dispute point I've been referring to. The organization is, to me, NOTHING like a government. In the initial descriptions of what it is I remember distinctly calling it something like a “Shadow organization outside the law”. And I'd like to stick to that. The are not a governing body, they are more like an outside military force. Also, as this seems to be the case, I also rebel against the idea that the non humans even HAVE a central government type figure. For the most part, most none humans live in their own societies governed but heir own rules and social norms. That's a fact true in any fantasy realm. Elves have their own rules, Dwarves their own, Goblins theirs, and Drakes theirs. The thought of them under one set ruling body is. . . .Actually rather distasteful to me. This would, to me, destroy a lot of what makes it fun to be or even see any of these races interact or simply live their lives. One set of laws, like America, makes things to uniform even in their rebellions of disputes. It's the differences between the races and their societies that is fun and entertaining, and one of the things that makes the fantasy realm so much fun for me. So, yeah. . .Sorry if that is offensive in any way, it's just how I roll? I really hate to think of the non humans having/being like human stereotypes.
All I'm trying to say is that, just because the Organization is disliked, doesn't mean that people won't still go and work for them.
I agree with this, however I think the reasons behind joining would be a lot different than the base human reasons one would join a workforce. The noble kids would join to better understand humans, to learn the ins and outs of operating in their society, so that when they finish their tour and go back to their families they would be able to make their clan better and do things that previous generations never thought of, or expand in such directions that they never believed possible. This also ties into why the workforce would be getting smaller. Not only are a lot of the disputes once had rather often tamed down and have very little chance of flaring back up, but the clans are finding better ways to channel their energies and perhaps making their tours shorter. It's what would make the workers from the non noble families more important since they are their for the long haul and such, but would make the mass slaying of the workers all the more dramatic since the members would consist mostly of noble guys. I think it would add an interesting layer and a whole slue of issues that would be fun to deal with.
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Sorry if it seemed like I disagreed with you almost every step up there, I just. . . .Don't like generalizing different races into once central group when it comes to fantasy, and, yeah. . . .OH! This idea -
What I could see, though, is having a group of Walkers who are looking to purposefully expose the presence of the Walkers to the humans. Probably in some sort of massive conquest thing. A kind of Cult, dedicated to having the walkers rise above and take control of the "inferior" humans, who only rule through population. And perhaps they have some messed up sort of magic that can do some minor mind control. Which is why everyone, Organization members included, was killed. Because they succumbed, and turned traitor. So one of the powerful higher ups had to come and personally clean up the mess. But, of course, that didn't end the Cult. It could be one of the recurring problems, if we like. And, for one reason or another, our characters are directly connected to it. Either because they can resist the mind control, or they are literally connected to it, or someone simply decides that they are the two for the job.
I can see us working with several of theses ideas, they seem fun. However I don't want to set anything like this too solid since, again, I feel it's too far planning ahead for me to set the motivation in stone so early on. I know I initially had an idea of the motivation for our guys, but that's different in my mind than setting the motivation of the antagonist/s :P I like the idea of our guys being special for some reason. Perhaps one of us can resist and that one has to, I d'know, share blood or magic or something, so that his partner can still keep on working on the case too? Maybe have the one without resistance under the control for a while until the one who can resist notices and have a confrontation to resolve the issue. . . .Looks epic in my head, but again, just a thought :P
Again, sorry this took so long! You were very thorough, so not need for expansion unless you really want to :P