anyone wanna read the lyrics to my songs and give feedback?

[flat lovenote]

i'm just bored and this came to mind :P and you can do a pros and cons rating system if you want

[erikh]

sure

[flat lovenote]

@erikh 'kay, here is this song, "Why Should We"

"Yeah

I wanna say sorry to all my exes
I wanna say fuck you to all my ex-friends
Because all they did for me
Was only be there when I was popular (ah-ah, ah-ah)

I wanna say, I wanna say sorry
I wanna say, I wanna say sorry

I wanna say sorry to my current friends (ah-ah, ah-ah)
Sorry for spilling the whiskey and champagne (ah-ah)
Na-na, I was just a little tipsy
And gave myself a nose bleed (ah-ah)

I wanna say, I wanna say sorry
I wanna say, I wanna say sorry

Everyone's a people pleaser, we should be people eaters
A people pleaser, we should be people eaters
A people pleaser, we should be people eaters
Why should we

I wanna say sorry to my parents
Sorry if I disappointed you
Now I'm in the pits
I need to get out of this shit
See upcoming rock shows
Get tickets for your favorite artists
I wanna say, I wanna say sorry
I wanna say, I wanna say sorry
(Sorry)
I wanna say, I wanna say sorry
I wanna say, I wanna say sorry

Everyone's a people pleaser, we should be people eaters
A people pleaser, we should be people eaters
A people pleaser, we should be people eaters
Why should we

Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah
Why should we
Why should me
Ahhhh...."

[erikh]

fire !
idk im not good at critiquing.. things sorry lol

[flat lovenote]

@erikh

ahh no, yr good :)

i wrote that song during a... imma just call it during a difficult time in my life