[OOC] Escape from Syrae (Irell Starling)

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I know you mentioned in the IC that you weren't done yet. If you like, I can just catch Ryen's side of events up with where the story is.

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Alright. I'm just about at the point where Lazlo is presenting the information to the crew. Just let me know when you're finished. :)

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No problem. I'm expounding on character's reactions to events that you've covered. I hope to have my post finished up sometime tomorrow.

[Irell Starling]

Alrighty. I'm going to stop there unless you want me to continue.

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I will work on some kind of storage device for the crew. Most likely it will also be a sort of warping device used for none living "samples". I'm thinking the second cargo hold can be filled with large, empty boxes. Each box is assigned to specific crew members (this way there would be no matter overlap like the problem two people use the Translocater at the same time). The limitations would be the size of the box and how many boxes each person has.

I'm also thinking of having Ryen experience some side effects with the technology. For example, if she charges the Feeder on body heat, hers will charge slightly faster do to her increase in metabolism. Meanwhile, she'll experience some interference with the Communicator Lazlo's provided and opt to use the one on her wrist instead.

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For the storage device, I was thinking more of the former. I don't think Ryen will be overclocking the Feeder. There's no reason to, plus she's extremely careful about not revealing her chip. A little too careful which is why things like her educational records are just luke warm.

Alrighty then, just let me know when you are done.

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I'm not 100% pleased with it (more like 70%) but I don't want to hold this up any longer so there it is.

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I was thinking that they arrived together. That they ran into eachother in the hallway and it was the end of their conversation.

I like the idea of a space battle, preferably with pirates. Perhaps we have to stop off at a planet to get some supplies or spare parts to patch up the ship after the battle. I don't know if you prefer having the battle ship versus ship or have the pirates attack us when we land to refuel/ give the engines a break and chance to recharge.

Next planet= Swampy planet

Leruta

Atmosphere: Hospitable
Gravity: 9 m/s
Inhabitants: Crutu- Friendly. Some speak common tongue but most speak a language native to their planet. Medium technology ranking.

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[Irell Starling]

No problem. I'd like to have a conversation between Ryen and Lazlo about Seita's future. If Ryen knocks on Lazlo's door, would he answer?

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Would he invite her in or step outside?

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