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In Fukushima, near the Fukushima Public High School, lies a humble little bakery under the name of Le Patseur. It's just opened and the manager is looking for help! If you have what it takes to come along then come and sign up for a job! Madame Lilacflour wants your help! If you have ANY cooking experiences then come in! Don't worry, even if you can't cook then we will help you! So sign up! Go for a job, have fun in our little Bakery! We are willing for anyone to try out!
-Le Pasteur








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For your consideration, GM-Sama!


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Edit his personality a little, I don't get much out of it nor do I see much of his characteristics. Is he shy? Is he insecure? Is he defiant? Is he guy who can laugh things off or is he the type of guy whose of afraid of people's opinions? From what I can tell is that Shinji is insecure about his blonde hair and dislikes all the rumours around him. Expand on it a little, is Shinji usually cheerful until his hair is brought up or perhaps he's mean and cold and hard to open up too. Expand on what you have here since he can be interesting character if you bring out his traits and mannerisms more.
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Hmmmmm...

Edited a bit. Let me know via PM if this is much better and if there's more you'd like!
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Perfect! That's what I would like to see! Accepted! :)

If you please, post your CS in the character tab please.
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Name
Benjamin "Ben" Pelletier

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16

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Personality
Ben is a loud and outgoing person that doesn't seem to have any problems trying to find new people to make friends with. In addition, he's almost always seen with a smile on his face, even in the worst of times, but whenever he's by himself it's clear he just puts on the mask to distract himself and others from any problems that he might be feeling under the skin. Though, if it gets to the point where he can no longer put up the facade, he will break down and find a friend who's willing to listen to him. If he's unable to find such a friend, he will usually grow silent until somebody confronts him.

Occupation
Cashier

History
Until he was around 13 years old, Ben was living in Canada with his family and enjoying the winters that came and went without any problems where he found one of his first passions: cooking. Ever since he was old enough to pull himself up to the counter to help his mother, he would as she mixed and poured assorted things into each other. Then, watched as the stuff mixed and changed into different things before getting poured into pans then placed in the oven to cook. Over time, he started to take of most of the cooking for the house and it gave him something to smile about, making his parents breakfast or even cooking his own lunches for school the night before.

Once his teens, he entered himself into a cooking contest where he had to cook several different dishes from savory items such as chicken parm to more sweet treats, he nearly jumped out of his shirt when he heard his name was called out as the award. Atop of that it was broadcasted on network television AND shown online for everyone in the world to see. The prize, it was a 5 year stay-all necessities included, including education-in any country of his choosing, needless to say he picked the country of Japan.

Now 16, Ben is loving it in Japan as is his mom. Sure, there was a little bit of a culture shock whenever they first moved in, but that was nearly 2 years ago and now Ben is just like one of the locals. In addition, they both agreed that they will stay in the country as long as they can, which seems to be pretty easy as his mother's company had offices there as well, and Ben has been working at the bakery for about 18 months now. The only thing that Ben wishes he could do is move up to a position inside of the kitchen, but he's sure such a day will come soon.
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And that is accepted too! Please post it in the Character Sheet Tab for me thank you! :)

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Perfect! That's what I would like to see! Accepted! :)

If you please, post your CS in the character tab please.


Done!

Thank you GM-Sama! I'll have a suitable uke pic up later tonight!
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Now it wouldn't be fair if I just let my characters in and you guys had to go through my grading process. TEAR THESE GUYS APART! GO!





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@Hibiki No EchoI think all three of them are pretty cool
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TEAR THESE GUYS APART! GO!


*Revs his CS chainsaw*

Right. First thing, Madam Lilacflour, being the only magic user in this RP. While our characters might be unaware of her power, I feel an example of her abilities might be in order just so we as writers know what to expect. Or does she regularly make Shinji sprout cat ears and tail just for fun?

For the twins- whooooooooooooooo baby! Chair to the face! I like the comradery they show, but is there any tension between them since they had to pack up and go? Has daddy dearest sent a representative to try and make an offer they can't refuse?
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Example maybe shrinking EVERYONE to small sizes and have and outright cake war. Or perhaps creating a monster made out of pastries that the character have to fend off or cook while she dispells it all. Or even world domination made out of an army of gingerbread men. Basically, all bakery related stuff.

For the two little shits, their relationship is better than ever actually, since they've bonded at the bakery. Daddy dearest has no plans on getting them back. For now at least.
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Very cool! So the crew is aware of her magical hijinks then. I was going to go into this thinking she was gonna be all sly about it. Thanks for clearing it up now!

They meet with my approval :3
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Gotta go put this in the character tab then.

Holy crap it's 4:00am. Whoops.
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Maaaaaaan you gotta get on this Eastern Time Zone!

Edit: When do you think you'd like to start this pony show?
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I accept! Please copy and paste your CS into the Character tab! Welcome to the RP! :)
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Added some stuff about Sumiko's height. She's hella short.
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Ah ok that should be fine!

Question though, what miniplot would you like to start with?
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I'd like something easy where it allows for characters to get to know each other (or rather the players to know each other). Maybe something went wrong with the doors and they locked at a bad time, like during a storm, so we're trying to remember where the panel was.
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