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Seji watched the machine blast off. He sighed internally, flapping his wings slower to conserve energy.

"Well, shit."

He looked down below to see one woman leaping to keep up. She was doing a damn good job too. He winced when he saw her crash land on poor, poor Mr. Power, whose humorous cry of "Power!" did not lesson the harsh reality of his injury.

Seji still chuckled anyways.

Seji looked at the slowly shrinking silhouette of Maximus. He hoped that the robot wasn't able to handle it all before Seji arrived. Seji had need of that prize money, and besides that, the chance to interview a Namekian was a rare one.

Plus, he had sensed a lot of raw ki energy coming off of the other male. Seji wondered if perhaps this individual might be a fellow Ki Mystic. If not, then he would be easily dealt with with a few spells.
Sorry I poofed, was busy.
@vietmyke I'm mostly going for the former. I think what I'll do is reduce his age more, make him just a decently competent hammer user tanky sort, and later have him slowly start learning some dark magic. I'll remove the experiments altogether and just have him kept as a political prisoner, and since a younger apprentice could have been sent off to the caravans without issue, I won't kill off the other Slayers and just have them left behind.

Thank you for working with me on this character despite your initial reservations. Even if I do not get picked, I wish you luck with the rp. :)
I'll remove his magic then. Tbh I just liked the idea of a demon fighting berserker using a small portion of dark magic himself. And I assumed all demons used a form of dark magic. If that's not the case, and if enchantments however small are that expensive, I'll remove the mildly enchanted armor. It doesn't make sense for the Slayers to spring that much cash up for an apprentice to have a slight resistance to something he already has a resistance to. I was thinking of that enchantment as being, like, standard issue.

As for him being at the caravan, his order is not meant to be fighting wars, and after they were disbanded this leaves members like Thorn in a weird legal predicament where the military at large doesn't know whether they still count as soldiers or not. To solve this, Thorn is technically a civilian mercenary hired to protect a caravan. He never formally was Knighted as a Slayer anyways, being only a Knight-Apprentice.

Also sad backstory =/= constantly talking about it. Thorn is not going to be constantly thinking about the past. He'll probably be loudly complaining about the present and arguing with whatever he comes across.
They were recruited from a young age to the demon hunters, so they've had years of training. They didn't start off as being capable. His sister only rescued him months after they were attacked, and with the help of others who were genuinely skilled.

Most of his skills are useless in combat and are only really for entertaining people, which wouldn't come up for a while because his personality means he won't be very quick to go all artsy on everyone. Also, for his magic, it's explicitly the result of the experimentation, and he doesn't have very good use of it yet. It's not really powerful, and he has poor control of it. I planned on it mostly being a way to bolster his weapon use.

Am I underestimating how good a novice would be at things? I assumed a novice medic would be somewhere along the lines of, "knows how to usr basic field medical supplies, like a bandage." I explicitly stated he wasn't very good at practical applications of his skills, but I figured having a decent knowledge of those skills would bump it up to "novice". I can make them untrained if you want?

Am I also underestimating journeyman? I once again stated specifically he was by no means archmage material. I can change that to novice or even untrained if you want. He's not supposed to be an ultimate deathknight or anything. More of a scared kid conscripted into military service.

The mask is because of how the experiments warped him. He's gray and has horns. I'm assuming that, since the populace is mostly human, that that would make him appear monstrous to most folk. He hides his appearance for that reason.

He was born human.

His personality is sort of an exaggeration of the jerk with a heart of gold trope, with some nerdiness thrown in. He's not a crazy sociopath, he won't just run off during a fight on impulse. However, he makes bad decisions and tactical errors under pressure, and is kind of an asshole. So he could ignore the order to retreat for a few moments and get himself or someone else hurt, or say something stupid at the wrong time and land himself or others in hot water, but he's not going to straight up fuck everyone over intentionally.

And the armor resistance was because he was a demon hunter. I figured it made sense for them to ward themselves against their main foes. I didn't want it to weaken Thorn's magic because then if the armor were removed he'd be more powerful magically. I didn't want to think of a way to give him two different power levels, and it's a weak enchantment anyways, so I figured it wouldn't affact his own magic.

The second loss of family was more to bring him into his current situation than to add more woobiness. I didn't really plan on him angsting a lot truth be told, I planned for his interactions to be more lighthearted than anything.

All good critiques and valid concerns. Mary-sue is definitely inaccurate though. This character isn't perfect at all. His weapon skills and magic are counterbalanced by poor teamwork and an overly aggressive fighting style. He's not pretty, he's not very smart, he's not powerful.

That said, I'll edit him and see if I can bring him to the standards of this roleplay.

Edit: Oh, and remember Thorn has a severe weakness to magic. His resistance to dark magic would have made him very useful as a demon slayer, and against datk magic he's definitely op to the max.

Against an apprentice mage a single weak fireball will ignite him. I honestly meant for that to be a pretty crippling weakness.
@vietmyke

I figured Thorn would kind of skirt the line. He's technically a guard, but he's not exactly much older than the youths he's guarding. He isn't any better in a fight than them either, as he himself is still an apprentice as far as his order goes.

But yeah, I expected a front line position.

Edit: Added some info on his skills.
Working on a cs
This looks interesting. I'll work on a cs now.

Are there any races other than humans and orcs? Also, are orcs intelligent or just like animals or what? Are they all evil to the core?

Are there dragons, demons or other mythological creatures of the sort? If so, how do they interact with the rest of the world and how do most cultures view them?
Seji chuckled.

"Is the surprise coming from me knowing anout dragonoids, one of my past teachers being one, or my titles as the Ethereal Sage? I doubt it's the latter, as I am by no means the greatest sage alive."

Seji seemed amused by the dragonoid's emotional display.

Before the conversation could continue, the namekian and his companions showed up and raised hell. They were in and out before anyone could really respond. Seji waited, before hearing the offer for money.

"Well...that's The only encouragement I need."

Seji whispered a few arcane syllables, before his cloak seemed to rip open to accommodate a pair of huge leathery wings that sprouted from his back.

"I bid you, adieu, Dragonoid. We'll have to talk more later, I'm curious about you."

He flapped upward, before taking off in the direction of the energy sognatures. He expected he would eb able to get there first and defeat them with his magic before anyone else got there. However, a moment later Seji heard a sonic boom, and turned his head to see a metallic man flying past.

Seji whistled in appreciation of the obviously powerful android, and did his best to keep up.

"Mind if I hitch a ride!?" He yelled to Maximus, beating his wings furiously in a failed attempt to keep up, "We'd work better together!"
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