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11 yrs ago
Aren't you a curious one, sweetheart?

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Just adding some small helpful things to your CS's review, by the way.

When she was 18 she got hit by a car making her instantly dead.

You could re-word this to: "When she was eighteen, she was hit by a car and died instantly."


A necromancer came to bring her back alive, What the necromancer exactly did is unknown but She wacked up near the school Athalia.

She *woke* up, actually.

There might be some other grammar-wise aspects that could be improved, but I have to go to a birthday party because my girlfriend forced me to do so. It will probably suck but oh well, a man has to endure such things.

See ya'll!
I'm not a co gm or anything, but I'm quite worried about her ability to infect others with the simple act of biting...
Theobromine said
While NarayanK's summary covers everything quite nicely, I actually suggest reading the IC when you get the time. The posts were AWESOME yesterday, and I got quite a lot of laughs and whatnot from it all. :) You won't want to miss it~~!


Specifically NK's posts with Ryuu.

ARIGATOUHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Animal said
The one sexy nurse I wouldn't like to be treated by


SHOULDN'T HER SURNAME BE ABURAME THO

It feeds on the agony of people who like watching movies with actual endings in them.


The truth, it has been spoken. FUCKING INCEPTION!
Dude, you literally spot ideas on everything I post or say LOL.
I did not. They stole my idea.

MY CHARACTER IDEA.
I had a dream that I was dreaming about a dream.
Well, now away I go. Good night!
Bael

"So glad?" Bael asked, perking an eyebrow at the girl. She seemed... Different. But Bael knew exactly why. He was starting to regret it, in fact; for some strange reason. The boy raised his hand from her shoulder and stared at the palm for a moment, then, his attention was brought to the girl once again. She was asking if they had met before... A question which made Bael hesitate to respond. He took a step back, moving a hand to rub the side of his head. This feels far too strange, I truly need to rest for a while. And... So does she. The boy apologetically looked at the girl in front of him... His eyes widening as he noticed the blood in her clothes.

She began to fall down and the boy quickly moved to catch her before she slammed onto the ground. Thanks to her healing abilities, he was still capable of lifting her from the ground and quickly set on his way from there. "Hold still, Lily, you will be just fine." He hoped deeply that she would; this was all his fault, after all. The boy was moving towards the main building. He needed to get her to the infirmary so she could be treated and healed. It was his only objetive right now.
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