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8 yrs ago
Current Ever had that moment were you've just lost a battle of wills with your dog and think to yourself, "maybe I should be the one sleeping on the floor"? I have. It's oddly liberating.
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9 yrs ago
My Lit Lecturer used Matt Fraction's Hawkeye run to display the effect of narratology in class today. It's the first thing he's spoken about all term that I've actually read.
9 yrs ago
How good is the Punisher in Netflix's Daredevil series? "Just some guys who are about to walk into a diner for the last time." That line is so manly it could make a toddler sprout a beard.
9 yrs ago
The Justice League trailer is giving me mixed emotions. On the one hand, I desperately want to get hyped. On the other, Snyder and co have burnt me too many times in the past. I'm a conflicted mess.
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9 yrs ago
What? The Lethal Weapon tv show isn't utter garbage at all, instead being an enjoyable watch. What the fuck is the world coming to?
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For all you know I'm handsome as hell. Let's keep it that way.

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Furious

He screamed when Chrome crushed his hand, the pain indescribable. If anything the sound of his bones being splintered was just as bad, his stomach lurching with each crack. He'd never felt anything like this in his short hero career, not even during his battle when that Meta-prisoner transfer bus had been hijacked and he had fought all those villains at once. He wouldn't have been able to stop Chrome throwing him to the ground again even if he had the wherewithal to realise the trainer was doing it, his entire focus was on the pain of his hand.

A big heavy boot came down on his throat, and this time he couldn't do anything to stop it. He felt the pressure, slight yet inexorable. Chrome was going to choke him out and then it would be all over. No membership in the League, no chance of showing the PMDF what he was capable of, no helping oppressed Meta's everywhere. Just a few minutes of gasping for air then it would be all over, just a miserable trip back to the Dominguez mansion where he would live the rest of his life like a ghost, trying not to get in his father's way. He could almost feel Miguel's indifference already.

But then he felt something else. It was small at first, but growing within him steadily. It was like a fire, but it burnt without heat. It grew and grew, a light to illuminate the darkness that had threatened to swamp him. It was power in its rawest form, pulsating and pure. He could feel his skin tingle with it. Even his hand didn't hurt like it did before. Perhaps he had never experienced anything like having the bones in his fist shattered, but it had made him stronger than he had ever been in the past.

But its not just that he realised. It was more than just his Metapower, it was something greater and more intangible. It was the first Daryl Redman struggling against circumstance to make life better for men like himself. It was Sofira Redman fighting to help the needy and unfortunate. It was even Miguel Dominguez, determined to make a world were the tragedy that had befallen him would never happen to anyone else. Furious came from a long line of fighters, and he would be damned if he shamed that lineage today by giving up here. He may lose this fight, but he would go down swinging.

He grabbed the closest thing to him, Chrome's ankle, and squeezed. He squeezed as hard as he could, poring every last bit off power he had into it. He was more powerful than he had ever been, but he wasn't sure if that was enough. Dr Mellori had said his strength was potentially limitless, so Furious prayed he had enough now to make a difference.

He focused on his broken hand, fixating on the pain, all just to leech a bit more strength for the squeeze. He wasn't sure if Chrome was really made of steel, or if he was some organic metal, all he knew was that he had to hurt the trainer somehow, had to get him off before Furious passed out.
Hey MrD, is Chrome basically this universe's Colussus? Like have his eyes and insides turned metal too?
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Ok Mr D, I've edited it pal. Hopefully it's looking better.
Not really Furious's style to abandon the fight, even to get to the hostages. He's like a dog with bone when it comes to a challenge. The character is supposed to be intelligent yet hot headed, his arrogance and youthfulness blinding him to the bigger picture. In all honesty I shouldn't have had him notice the hostages as he would be too determined to beat Chrome now to even remember about them, or notice the rest of the team closing in on the bus.

I'll change the post, but have him continue attacking Chrome when he should be charging the bus.
Furious

The whole world became an explosion of white, thunder echoing across the bright empty planes. It took Furious what seemed like an age to realise it wasn't the world that was white, just his perception of it. Thankfully his increased durability and regeneration negated the worst of Chrome's blow in seconds, the young vigilante managing to regain his balance before he barrelled into Changeling.

Chrome was proving to be far more troublesome than he had first appeared, but on the plus side Furious had managed to escape his grasp and the steel-man now seemed to be on the back foot. Even he couldn't last long under the combined might of the two heroes.

Instead of leaping back at the attack Furious used the momentary lull to survey the rest of the field. He was surprised to see that the heroes had managed to get the villains on their back foot, especially after the dismal performance his would be comrades had put in at the start of the confrontation. Then again the worst of the bunch had probably been taken down already, so they were left with the hardiest and most powerful. Fitting then, as Furious was the most powerful of all. They would no doubt need his help to rescue the hostages, but he'd be damned if he was going to abandon his confrontation with Chrome before going to help them.

“We've wasted too much time with him,” he stated to Changeling while gesturing at Chrome. “We need to get to the bus and save those hostages. You go, I'll be with you presently.” the words were spoken with a grim certainty.

Most people would have realised that taking Chrome on head on is futile by now, the 'villain' being to strong. Added to that was the fact that the steel-man was no doubt expecting another attack, steadying himself for another bout. Furious was stronger now, and faster too. He stalked towards his adversary, rolling his shoulders to work them loose. The thing was that no matter how powerful an enemy was, how tough or how many surprises they had up their sleeve's, Furious was just to well adapted to beat physically. The longer the fight went on the stronger he became.

Suddenly he roared and charged forward once again, a move Chrome was probably becoming quite familiar with. As he closed he send a wide, powerful right hand swinging for Chrome's head. It was a cunningly crafted feint for Furious's real attack though. If Chrome took the bait and either blocked or evaded the blow then the red-masked hero would follow up with a thundering knee strike with all his force, aimed directly at the dents he had caused on Chrome earlier with his knee.
Novel length and we're still fighting the first battle!
Furious

The first two hits connected with satisfying force, jarring his arm with each strike and filling him with goodness. The third wasn't as succseful, Chrome managing to grab his arm and twist it behind his back. With his free arm Chrome attempted to wrap Furious in a choke hold, but years of wrestling and combat classes had taught the younger hero that the first thing to do in the situation was to force your chin down, denying your assailant access to your vulnerable throat. Succsefully negating the metal teachers hold, Furious allowed himself to be manhandled in Changeling's general direction.

The teen vigilante allowed himself a small grin, one that the others would never make out through his mask.

"You know my powers tin-man, but do you know my skills?" he asked, a nasty edge to his voice. Before Chrome had a chance to respond Furious swung his left leg behind Chrome, gaining better leverage, then drove his left elbow into Chrome's stomache. Then again. Then again. Then again.

He'd force the fool to let him go, one way or another.
"Dear Mum and Dad, its me, Magnus" . . . No.

"I have waited so long to write this" . . . Wrong again.

"Remember me?" . . . That's the worst of the bunch.

Magnus had faced Shrapnel without blanching, stared down a known hero-killer like Deathstroke/Bronze Tiger and hardly worried, even managed to escape Granny and her Huntsman without a second thought to his own safety, yet now a simple letter had him flustered. But this was no simple letter, to him this was quite possibly the most important letter ever written of all time. Or at least it would be whenever he managed to write it.

But how do you tell your parents, parents who haven't seen you in almost a decade, that you aren't dead?

Too make matters worse Magnus's handwriting was terrible. Years of having talons instead of fingers will have that effect. He didn't want to use a computer to write the message for a couple of reasons, firstly that it felt to impersonal and secondly he was terrible with technology. So he sat and he wrote and he crossed out what he had written and he worried that it would never be good enough. At this rate he would never speak to his parent's again, never manage to let them know that their son wasn't dead.

Why not just go to them? the thought leapt unbidden into his head, a host of conflicting emotions battling within him at it's wake. He couldn't go home, not while Granny was still looking for him. She was sure to have spy's watching his old town, waiting for him to rear his head. He was almost surprised that the Pack hadn't been attacked by Granny's agents yet after their battle with Shrapnel had been televised, showing Fenrir in full glory, but then even Granny would be wary of facing off with the Justice League. But if he was to go home on his own then she would strike, making the best use of his time alone. No, the letter would have to do for now.

A flashing yellow light disturbed his thoughts, a Godsend for the Meta teen really. If he remembered rightly then yellow meant some sort of villain disturbance. His lips pulled back into a tight smile, revealing white teeth. He'd been cooped up too long, it was time to let the Wolf out. Quickly donning the costume that Hawkman had sent him and buckling his new Hunting knife onto his belt he made his way to the corridor, nearly bumping into Ditto on the way.

"Trouble," growled Magnus, his monosyllabism seemingly a fixture now. Though his words went very descriptive the way he said them was, as his tone indicated it was both a statement and a question, as he was keen to know if the Cargitte knew anything more of the situation.
Phantom vs Phantasm is one of the most interesting, confusing and unique fights of all time.

. . . Too bad no one will ever see it.
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