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I like the unique ideas people are coming up with for this roleplay. Two characters are opposite genders between reality and correctors and the weaponry choices are quirky. If I need anything else changed please let me know. School is going to end 3 hours so I'll get to the background then.

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@vietmyke Yes, I see what you mean. I will edit the word choices immediately. I apologize for the confusion. EDIT: I've replaced the adjectives to ones more suitable. Hopefully I have made them clearer now and have also done a quick weapon change. The background will have to wait until I have fixed up the first half of the character sheet.

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@Hella Cute I'm glad you understood the persona I was aiming for. I should have clarified that, but I wasn't sure how to word it. I like the weapon suggestion. I'll get around to editing him a little later. Thanks for giving me some advice :)

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@Anonymous Hiya ^^ So we like the idea of another male character, but gah this is gonna sound rather mean isn't it >…< could we get you to change his concept? We already have a sycthe user and are trying to balance out the attack ranges in our group. If that makes sense? Also about his personality, maybe something a little less edgy? In general the Correctors aren't exactly wild cards, they're meant to be generally good people who can deal with living double lives. We have a few colorful characters and are looking to balance them out, that's not necessarily saying people have to play straight laced upstanding citizens but there are more ways to give a character life besides being edgy or completely out in left field. Hah I hope I didn't sound preachy, it's late here but I wanted to give out some feed back before the nights over with. Please ask any questions that you need. Any clarification at all. ~ Alice

I appreciate the feedback so there is no need to apologize :D Changing his weapon will be no problem at all, but could you drop me some suggestions on what you might want to see him use? Regarding personality, which adjectives do you think would need to be subbed out to soften him up a bit. I know his picture does look a bit biting so I will gladly swap it out for a more open looking anime character upon request. Again, I do not take suggestions wrongly so feel free to nitpick ny submission to this roleplay's needs.

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Moved.

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Count me interested. It may take me some time to get the hang of things and memorize all the info up top.

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It's a Friday so I have tons of free time. Will put one up before the moon rises.

Since Inadi lost, does anyone have any creative punishments??? （ΦωΦ）

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Gonna post later tonight if I can

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Just got back from the Renaissance Festival. It was pretty cool :)
Tossed a post up there. Let the red team emerge victorious!

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Eventually, the Leila and Lesley duo collapsed into a muddled fall. As the adrenaline rush toned down for a couple of moments, it was then that he realized how low his heath bar had become. It was now at 60%. Looking down at his legs, arms and chest, he spotted a couple of paint splatters and sighed, getting back up onto his feet. Seeing as Leila was going bullet crazy at the giant robot, he joined in on the shooting right by her side, aiming dead center on the metallic linkage at its hip. In no time, the thing tumbled down in a heavy pile of burnt out iron and screws. Giving Leila a pat on the back, it was then that the truce was broken and everyone was taking on each other. Most of the other teams had already been wiped out by the robot too so it would make their jobs a whole lot easier.

Aiden dashed for a tree to gain some coverage as he scoped out Est. Flicking up the safety and clicking the trigger, he sent out a couple chest shots at the soldier and managed to land at least one or two. "Oh revenge, my weet revenge!" He snickered gleefully as he rubbed his hands together before slipping another round of paintballs into his gun. Maneuvering behind a boulder, he found another one of the pink members hiding there and he knew right away the poor girl had poor health already. sending multiple shots at her backside, it only took three bullets till she buzzed out. waving at her in apology, he grinned as he eyed Est who in turn was staring right back at him. "You see that?! That'll be you a few minutes from now!" He threatened playfully as tried to focus the crosshairs on him.

Reloading his gun and ducking for cover, Inadi fired a shot smack dab at his forehead lowering the bar to a mere 50%. "Shoot! That lil' turd is gonna pay!" He screeched whilst he jammed back the paintball canister and aimed at the running doofus. BAM!BAM!BAM! Lesley fired three bullets at Inadi and hoped at least one of them landed some damage. Catching sight of Jasper a distance away from the group, he stalked after her, but stopped a good couple of meters away in the thick greenery. Shooting her down with a spray as he finished off a mag, he knew that she had the least amount of life left compared to her other teammates.

Giggling to himself, he was definitely taunting Inadi to come and fight a little harder.