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I will get an introduction post up in a bit.
I will when I can get to a computer. I'm on my iPod so I might mess up.

@Blue- your good to go
Ok your good. Just fix the bio like in the pm and your good. I'll update and make character list as well as update the kingdoms list. I would now but I'm on my phone and I might mess up.
The shadow magic is ok but a kingdom made up of mostly demons is concerning. Now you did say they are good but demons are still easily manipulate by a rage for power. Demons are very powerful beings and a kingdom of them may cause a lot more problems. If it has demons, that is ok but to be made up of demons is a problem.
@Vortex- it looks good but you are missing something crucial before I can accept you.

@The Fated- accepted

@Saeko- accepted

@Cephly- not sure. It doesn't look bad but the forbidden were really the only ones to use dark magic. You would have to be careful, those who see you use dark magic will assume many things. I'll get my co gms opinion before I decide. And Saeko has to say its ok for you to be in the kingdom she made.

@Charak- you also have an ability that can bind a person to a place for a week. That is more than enough time to die of dehydration. Plus, the only reason why your character is really doing anything is because you assume the forbidden use necromancy, however, they only use dark magic. Dark magic and necromancy are two separate categories.
I'm not sure when would be a good time to come in cuz there is quite a bit happening now.
Its ok
@Charak: I see where you are coming from it there is one thing that primarily concerns me. Death touch is an extremely powerful ability, I need to know its limitations, for instance it's cool down time, and I need to know if you can only do that ability through skin contact.
Another thing is the whole undead thing. I'm not sure how it would play out. Most undead are driven by corrupt and you with out a doubt would be hunted by the paladins and be labeled an abomination.

Also that there is a certain thing that is suppose to be in other: so go back to look at the rules.
Not sure if it's ok to make a villain or not so ill just make a cs and see where it goes from there.

Name: Jack Maverous
Alias: Maverous
Status: Villain
Appearance:
Age: 45
Gender: Male
Powers: Can control his body on a cellular level to an extent. Can maintain a chemical balance and replace old cells to keep his body in peek physical condition and be 'ageless'.
Abilities/Skills: His suit gives him a wide variety of abilities. His suit is made of titanium making extremely durable. His suit is also allows him to become invisible and has thrusters enabling flight. His suit also gives him thermal vision, night vision, and can see through walls. His suit also grants him super strength to lift 8 tons and speeds up to 40 mph. It also makes him extremely agile. Over time, he has developed expert marksmanship and mastery of martial arts making him extremely lethal in hand to hand combat.
Equipment: His suit, rifle armed with shock rounds, concussion rounds, as well as tranquilizer darts ranging from different doses. He also carries breach explosives as well as stun grenades and flash bangs. He also carriers deployable energy shields. He also carries a sword capable of cutting straight through concrete and energy daggers. Two pistols and smoke grenades.
History: Jack was born into an organization known as the Shadow Complex. A secret organization that specializes in the hunting and capture of super powered beings and utilizes them for experiments. Jack has spent years training and hunting down super powered beings for the organization. It doesn't matter who you are, if your name pops up, Jack hunts. Jack has captured many people for the organization and even gained his powers through the experiments. He was recently given a list of names that he found interesting. Those names belonged to members of the teen titans.
Other:
Is it cool for me to make a villain or are the spots all filled?
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