Mason quickly made her way away from the portal. She hoped that the orange players hadn't followed her.
Avetty looked down at her feet "It's fine. I've always been a little jumpy."
Lucius Cypher said
It's more punctuation than grammar really, but they both seem to fall under the same category. And there's still the alternative issue. If you're going to stay up, might as well get that checked out.
Lucius Cypher said
From what I can guess, your last sentence in your bio is a run-on with no punctuation. Grammar issue.Alternatively, what you wrote about the man in the black hood my be contradictory towards what Psycho imagined. Story issue.
PsychoticBreakDown said
Accepted fix last sentence phasing please. But we have enough to start if will start when I make first post.