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Arlana spun on her heel, raising her lightsaber into a high, two-handed guard, the tip of her saber pointed at the...Duros' face. A fellow Jedi Knight, she thought he looked familiar, but she couldn't place the name. She stood there for a long moment, her eyes wide with terror and rage, then she marshaled her emotions, let out a breath, and closed down her saber. "There's not time to talk, we have to get out of here. The Grand Army is trying to wipe us out."

The sentence hung in the air and her mind for a moment, and for the first time she really thought about it, the standard questions whirling through her mind - who had arranged this? How? Why? Nothing seemed to make very much sense, but she didn't have time to sit here and ponder it. The moment of contemplation and the appearance of the other Jedi had jostled her out of her blind flight.

"If we're going to escape we need a plan. The hangars are bound to be watched, probably filled with soldiers." She directed the other Jedi to move with her, trying to fall back on her war experience to guide her. She had slowed from her sprint to a steady walk, saber clutched but unactivated in her hand, stretching out with her senses to try and find the enemy and other Jedi before they would sense them.
Well, at least Jia won't feel bad when she booby traps his house.
A minimum of four players, plus me. Max no more than ten.
Cool. Alright, you're in.
Very nice, Laufey. One thing, either way it's good, does she absorb blaster bolts or knock them aside?
I'm sorry, I'm afraid I don't see this character fitting into the group, Zarkun. He's extremely overpowered and half of his abilities are Dark Side-aligned.
The taste of blood and dirt and the smell of burning wood and rubber awaken you from your slumber. You're sore, but a quick check shows that your injuries are minor, little more than bruises. All around you is wreck, ruin, and corpses, shattered wood and twisted metal from a zeppelin crash, sprayed all around this vale. Here and there are dead bodies, men and women in their finest clothing impaled and dismembered by shrapnel, or scorched to a crisp by flames. How you escaped harm is anyone's guess.

Who the hell are you, anyway? Try as you might it just won't come to you, not even a name. There's a weight in your pocket, and you withdraw it. A large, folded sheet of paper covered in writing - near the top is a name. A familiar name, it feels like yours.

There are a handful of others stirring around you, men and women of various races, and they look to be in the same shape as you...

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TICKET:
This ticket registered to _______ on this third day of Mara, 1905, for accomodations in _____ class (economy, business, luxury, or crew) aboard the C.A.S. Victoria, on the route from Davenport to Morgenstern.
Photograph: (Description or Text, preferably in black and white. It's pretty simple to flip a picture to black and white if you need to, just PM me if you need assistance)

More information regarding your character will be PMed to you after you post your ticket.



That's going to be an interesting state of affairs in character. Jia is going to be such great friends with everyone.
Force Lightning is an extremely advanced technique, especially for someone who isn't Dark Side oriented. Please describe Force Fire and Phase Walking, as they aren't canonical Force abilities. Character's backstory makes no mention of his incredible facility for language, it seems very out of place and random that he would learn a niche language like the Sand People tongue. You say things in his personality that aren't borne out by the rest of the character, he doesn't come off as caring or wise beyond his years when you go on to say he's perfectly okay with watching people die or slaughtering guards of people who oppose him.

Hostile diplomats would quickly back down when their guards were reduced to bodies without the warning they received from other Force using factions.


That sounds like murder to me, and someone who is known to murder people at peace summits wouldn't be invited to a peace summit.
I'd be up for an Avatar RP, but why would the Spirits go to war with Humanity over technology? They have no trouble living in Republic City.
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