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"Alright. Vance. Go ahead." Tristan said calmly. "Wha? Why me?" Vance asked calmly. "Because I said so." Tristan added calmly as he set the drones to an easier level for the rookie. "Right..." Vance said as he prepared himself. "How do you think he'll do?" Tristan asked Abi in a whisper before hitting start.
Mokuro... I MEAN GABRIEL!
Gabriel is accepted lol XD
Gabriel is accepted lol XD
Seems good to me. And I'll trust you not to be OP. lol
As of now with my character, who has a last name I TOTALLY THOUGHT UP BY MYSELF, completed and an IC post made the RP is finally on it's way to beginning.
As of now with my character, who has a last name I TOTALLY THOUGHT UP BY MYSELF, completed and an IC post made the RP is finally on it's way to beginning.
When exactly was it that I became a hero? When exactly did I ask for powers? I mean I guess there isn’t a person alive who’s never wondered about what it would be like, but nobody would want to take the deal I ended up with. A dead father and a mother whose status is currently unconfirmed. I know MY problems aren’t really the worst of them, but I can’t just act like it’s nothing to spare the feeling of others. We’ve all got our own crap to deal with. I’m just glad there are others who kind of understand.
Don’t think I’m just sitting around complaining. That would be childish and stupid. At least I think it would be. But the point is in this world where villains rule and heroes are pretty much nonexistent I’m just one of a small group of the current and apparently newest generation of heroes. And one way or another we’re gonna take back what’s ours and save the world before anyone else ends up suffering like so many already have. At least… That’s the plan.
Tyler zoomed through the open space of the training room. He dodged each blast and obstacle which came in his way. “Pick up the pace! You think this is gonna be enough to really handle yourselves out there?!” A loud yet somewhat scratchy voice called out. The battle drones kept coming at the small team of young heroes. The old man behind the controls only amped up the levels on it.
“Hey chill out Wolverine. We don’t want ‘em to die before they really get to get out there on the front lines.” A more feminine voice came from behind the old former hero. “We can’t afford to cut them too much slack Laura.” He answered calmly as he watched over them. Drones with blasters set to stun, others of different sizes for various forms of physical combat and of course the flying drones. Those were on Tyler’s, tail. “I don’t normally agree with him, but even I think we’ve gotta make sure they’re ready.” The Hulk said calmly as he towered over the two also watching.
“Guys! Anyone care to help?!” Tyler shouted. Sure everyone had their hands full, but one of the main points of the training exercises like these was teamwork. The worst part of it was it was 7AM and they’d already been at it for an hour. Well as far as training drills went this wasn’t the worst. Simulating a surprise attack while they were sleeping was just one of the many forms of drills the teens were subject to on a daily basis.
Still, even though it was tough, it was necessary. Their so-called mentors simply wanted the teens to be ready. If they weren’t who knew what could happen when they actually went out to try and bring down the horde of bad guys who had caused the world to deteriorate into the state it was currently in.
Don’t think I’m just sitting around complaining. That would be childish and stupid. At least I think it would be. But the point is in this world where villains rule and heroes are pretty much nonexistent I’m just one of a small group of the current and apparently newest generation of heroes. And one way or another we’re gonna take back what’s ours and save the world before anyone else ends up suffering like so many already have. At least… That’s the plan.
Tyler zoomed through the open space of the training room. He dodged each blast and obstacle which came in his way. “Pick up the pace! You think this is gonna be enough to really handle yourselves out there?!” A loud yet somewhat scratchy voice called out. The battle drones kept coming at the small team of young heroes. The old man behind the controls only amped up the levels on it.
“Hey chill out Wolverine. We don’t want ‘em to die before they really get to get out there on the front lines.” A more feminine voice came from behind the old former hero. “We can’t afford to cut them too much slack Laura.” He answered calmly as he watched over them. Drones with blasters set to stun, others of different sizes for various forms of physical combat and of course the flying drones. Those were on Tyler’s, tail. “I don’t normally agree with him, but even I think we’ve gotta make sure they’re ready.” The Hulk said calmly as he towered over the two also watching.
“Guys! Anyone care to help?!” Tyler shouted. Sure everyone had their hands full, but one of the main points of the training exercises like these was teamwork. The worst part of it was it was 7AM and they’d already been at it for an hour. Well as far as training drills went this wasn’t the worst. Simulating a surprise attack while they were sleeping was just one of the many forms of drills the teens were subject to on a daily basis.
Still, even though it was tough, it was necessary. Their so-called mentors simply wanted the teens to be ready. If they weren’t who knew what could happen when they actually went out to try and bring down the horde of bad guys who had caused the world to deteriorate into the state it was currently in.
Alright so my character is finished. I hope he's okay... Guy? Constructive criticism?
Rider's character is almost finished so yeah. I'm gonna post an IC beginning and just as I promised the RP will have begun tonight lol
Rider's character is almost finished so yeah. I'm gonna post an IC beginning and just as I promised the RP will have begun tonight lol
YOU BETTER KITTY!
And just be a patient a little longer Soren. I'll have my character finished and the RP started by tomorrow night. I've just been really busy @_@
And just be a patient a little longer Soren. I'll have my character finished and the RP started by tomorrow night. I've just been really busy @_@
Kitty said
Name: Ianite Miyana Tempro (Goes by Miyana and prefers Miya {pronounced 'my-ah'} )Alias: IaniteAge: 16Gender: FemaleAppearance: Miya has long wavy blonde hair that tends to be a darker blonde underneath by just a bit. Her eyes are a bright blue that are brought out by her hair and light-olive skin tone. She stands at 5'5" and is built curvy but athletic.Equipment: Two katanas named, 'Yin and Yang: The katana's of balance'Skills/Abilities: -Agility-Hand to hand combat-Flexibility-Gymnastics-SwordsmanshipPowers: Healing/Regeneration - Can heal wounds of others as long as they aren't fatal. Regeneration only happens when the transfer of wounds takes place.Light Manipulation - User can create, shape and manipulate lightShadow Manipulation - User can create, shape and manipulate darkness and shadows.Weaknesses: -Healing/Regeneration - Takes away from her own energy and will transfer 50% of the wound to her. When she has transfered an injury to herself her healing speed kicks up and she will heal in 1/2 the time it would take for wounds to normal heal depending on the wound transfered.-Light Manipulation - Use-able with Yin sword(white sword). Or can be used to create a beam or ball of light for an attack. Not very strong when not used to surround the Yin sword in Light energy.-Shadow Manipulation - Use-able with Yang sword(black sword). Or can be used for shadow travel of short distances, under 50 feet, or encasing fists in shadows to increase damage of hits. Not very strong when not used to surround the Yang sword in shadow energy.-Both light and shadow manipulation are highly draining for her.-When things are too much off balance she becomes weaker in power. So using her powers is hard for her currently so she has to rely on strength and skill with swords to fight even if she is more for peace.Personality: TBRHistory: Miyana was born the daughter of the asgardian god of darkness and the goddess of light. This match made her into the goddess of balance. When she was old enough to begin training, she was trained to be one of the main gods of Asgard to help keep balance. When things on Midgard began to go wrong, her parents took her with them to Midgard and helped her try and regain balance. But soon her parents were somehow killed causing Miya to have to go into hiding and she began losing power. She has slight powers but mainly relies on her katanas and strength she has as an asgard to keep going while she stays in hiding.Other: She is the Asgardian Goddess of Balance.
Alright so. She seems fine to me. A bit too creative for my tastes >)>
lol jk.
No but seriously, she's fine. However, I think you should try and add a little more detail as to what she CAN do with the powers and make her limits a little more clear. The weakness are good and all, but still a bit vague, you know?
Also... About the swords...
1) From here on out they shall be known as Tensa Zangetsu White and Tensa Zangetsu Black.
^That's a joke of course...
2) I feel I should tell you that Yin is actually the Black side with the white dot in it and Yang is the White side with the Black dot in it. SO you kind of got the color and naming wrong. Unless you did that on purpose. In which case... I feel dumb TT__TT
I'd like to point out a few things. I am a guy, Still Rider thank you for trying to defend and make sure I didn't get offended. I commend you.
Now on to the true business... A comic book... Or in this case a comic book universe/story is riddled with various plot holes and inconsistencies which change depending on the writer or the convenience of the story. I'm not trying to sound all knowing or anything, but this is essentially my story. By that I don't mean the other characters aren't important and mine is god... I simply mean that the premise was something I thought up and tried to work out. So far the only technologically advanced beings able to stand up against the leader are J.A.R.V.I.S. whom is on our side and who ever the fuck is in Japan (Whom I've yet to decide... Excuse my coarse{?} language)
I admit some details could have been better explained and things could have been worked out better, but in my experience no story can be free of plot holes or problems. You can find something wrong in just about everything you read or watch. For example, The Hulk's gamma power level has remained inconsistent for a long time. At one point his gamma was absorbed by someone... But at another point it was too much too take it. I think it might have been Silver Surfer... Maybe it's a bad example, but the point is though my story does hold some inconsistencies and plotholes it isn't like it's out of the realm of possibility. Especially in the comic book universe.
Another thing I need to point out... I have no problem with creativity. However, I would like to keep things in the confines of my specified story. I'm sorry if this impedes on the wills of some, however, I do try to be compromising to the extent that I'm in the losing corner of a negotiation.
All that said... Tesla was accepted and if Jon is gone Rider you may join. I also think that if by the end of the day there are no other CS's coming from those of the original interest check I'll open this up as I believe enough time has past to get at least a WIP.
Now on to the true business... A comic book... Or in this case a comic book universe/story is riddled with various plot holes and inconsistencies which change depending on the writer or the convenience of the story. I'm not trying to sound all knowing or anything, but this is essentially my story. By that I don't mean the other characters aren't important and mine is god... I simply mean that the premise was something I thought up and tried to work out. So far the only technologically advanced beings able to stand up against the leader are J.A.R.V.I.S. whom is on our side and who ever the fuck is in Japan (Whom I've yet to decide... Excuse my coarse{?} language)
I admit some details could have been better explained and things could have been worked out better, but in my experience no story can be free of plot holes or problems. You can find something wrong in just about everything you read or watch. For example, The Hulk's gamma power level has remained inconsistent for a long time. At one point his gamma was absorbed by someone... But at another point it was too much too take it. I think it might have been Silver Surfer... Maybe it's a bad example, but the point is though my story does hold some inconsistencies and plotholes it isn't like it's out of the realm of possibility. Especially in the comic book universe.
Another thing I need to point out... I have no problem with creativity. However, I would like to keep things in the confines of my specified story. I'm sorry if this impedes on the wills of some, however, I do try to be compromising to the extent that I'm in the losing corner of a negotiation.
All that said... Tesla was accepted and if Jon is gone Rider you may join. I also think that if by the end of the day there are no other CS's coming from those of the original interest check I'll open this up as I believe enough time has past to get at least a WIP.
Rachel smirked keeping her eyes locked on Torie. "Flattery will get you everywhere." She giggled lightly at the words 'pretty lady' as the machine guns vanished from her hands. "Still if you must know I just enjoy what I do. No special reason. And I found myself enjoying the company of the people around me." She explained before she requiped two hand guns. She held them in a fairly casual manner. "Oh and my name is Rachel. What do you go by?" She continued to reply in a rather kind manner. It was actually pleasant despite how bad this could get. "I'll give you thirty seconds." She then said after a brief moment. "Well maybe thirty is a bit much. I'll be kind and make it fifteen seconds. Make sure to say goodbye to the things you love in that time young man." He tone and expression gave off a confident, yet somewhat sadistic feel. Once she got his name she was gonna come at Torie with the determination to kill him.
"Heh... Looks like she's still playing around." Kinzoku commented on Rachel with a small laugh as he charged at Blaze. Still much to his surprise she came at him. "You're pretty confident huh?" He asked before jumping up avoiding her attack. The position he held would cast a shadow over Blaze and cause his face to be darkened quite a bit only his eyes visible in the darkness. Of course, they seemed to be glowing red as the Dragon slayer held up his arm. "Iron Dragon Sword." He announced as his arm formed into the shape of a large, jagged steel blade with spikes along the blade's edge. He swung his arm down. Still there wasn't much killing intent behind this attack. Almost like it was a show of power. Like he wanted to toy with Blaze before he actually fought her seriously.
Iggy saw two battles in the midst of beginning and soon felt the sizable ball of flames collide with him. He smirked. Blaze always knew just what he was thinking. As the flames enveloped him he could be seen sucking in the flames. His stomach and body seemed to expand with the sudden intake of nourishment, before compressing once more converting the flames into his own magical power. "Right." He replied to blaze just before she began her own battle. He wiped his mouth after his 'meal' and then charged forward past the enemies who were pretty preoccupied with their own situation. He was heading for the castle. Whoever was there was in the top of it. "Let's show these bastards why they shouldn't underestimate their opponents! Especially when their opponents are FAIRY TAIL!" He shouted to his comrades as encouragement before jumping high towards the castle. Flames blasted from his feet propelling himself forward towards a window. It wasn't hard to get in. Once there he landed and looked around. "YO! Where are you?!" He called out.
"Heh... Looks like she's still playing around." Kinzoku commented on Rachel with a small laugh as he charged at Blaze. Still much to his surprise she came at him. "You're pretty confident huh?" He asked before jumping up avoiding her attack. The position he held would cast a shadow over Blaze and cause his face to be darkened quite a bit only his eyes visible in the darkness. Of course, they seemed to be glowing red as the Dragon slayer held up his arm. "Iron Dragon Sword." He announced as his arm formed into the shape of a large, jagged steel blade with spikes along the blade's edge. He swung his arm down. Still there wasn't much killing intent behind this attack. Almost like it was a show of power. Like he wanted to toy with Blaze before he actually fought her seriously.
Iggy saw two battles in the midst of beginning and soon felt the sizable ball of flames collide with him. He smirked. Blaze always knew just what he was thinking. As the flames enveloped him he could be seen sucking in the flames. His stomach and body seemed to expand with the sudden intake of nourishment, before compressing once more converting the flames into his own magical power. "Right." He replied to blaze just before she began her own battle. He wiped his mouth after his 'meal' and then charged forward past the enemies who were pretty preoccupied with their own situation. He was heading for the castle. Whoever was there was in the top of it. "Let's show these bastards why they shouldn't underestimate their opponents! Especially when their opponents are FAIRY TAIL!" He shouted to his comrades as encouragement before jumping high towards the castle. Flames blasted from his feet propelling himself forward towards a window. It wasn't hard to get in. Once there he landed and looked around. "YO! Where are you?!" He called out.
Nathaniel chuckled a bit at he tickled his girlfriend before hearing the Zeta Tube. He stopped a little confused. "You know anyone named Star?" He asked calmly thinking maybe they should go greet whoever was there.
Jason had been sleeping until he heard the Zeta Tube. Still it woke him up and he was the first to make his way to meet the person who'd entered. "Yo!" He called out in a casual tone giving her a slight wave as he approached her. "What brings a pretty girl such as yourself here?" He asked with a small smile.
Jason had been sleeping until he heard the Zeta Tube. Still it woke him up and he was the first to make his way to meet the person who'd entered. "Yo!" He called out in a casual tone giving her a slight wave as he approached her. "What brings a pretty girl such as yourself here?" He asked with a small smile.
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