NorthernGR said
I put my app up. My brain feels like putty now.
I started reading it. The history is a bit much for my brain to handle as of right now. However, I can comment on the other parts of the CS.
One thing I feel I should mention first is that while he has yet to post we do have an energy based character. soren's character as far as I know is still a character named Tesla who is like made of energy, namely electricity as of now due to my request. However, he is supposed to grow and begin to discover that he can absorb, generate, etc. other forms of energy. While having two characters with such similar abilities would seem redundant in this case it is not as both are unique in different ways.
So that isn't a big deal. Just something I though I should mention. Also I'm not sure if soren will in fact use Tesla.
Next thing to bring up. I gave soren a limit of 1 type of energy for the beginning. I feel it would be unfair not to do the same for you. If this is a problem I apologize.
Other than those points, I didn't have any real problems with the character.