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It was a beautiful day in DenTech City. The kind of day that a person would just wanna spend hanging out either outside, or just hanging out with friends doing whatever it is their mind could think of. Unfortunately, it was Monday. Not only was it Monday, it was most definitely a school day. However, despite this fact Hiro was soundly sleeping in his bed. Xero had yet to make a move, but that was because he was teaching Hiro a lesson. Don't go back to sleep when the alarm goes off. And as the seconds turned to minute the alarm rang again.

"Hm?" Hiro's eyes opened slowly just a bit before shooting open as the numbers on his alarm clock came into view. "Wha?! Xero!!" He yelped as he shot out of his bed and began to strip out of his pajamas and moved into the bathroom where he managed to quickly bathe, brush his teeth and make himself more presentable. "Yes Hiro?" Xero questioned his owner in a rather nonchalant manner as he heard him emerge from the bathroom. "Why didn't you get me up?! I'm so gonna be late now... And you... you..." With each word he spoke a new layer of clothing was added to his body. First underwear. Than shirt. It was moving smoothly until he fell. He landed with a loud thump, but he had no time to deal with the bit of pain. He got the pants on and was back up to get socks.

"You did get up. And then you went back to sleep. Next time stay up. I mean i can't shake you awake or anything." Xero answered. It was a logical answer. It was also true. "Gah... Fine fine..." Hiro submitted taking his Navi's words into account. His jeans were on and and now so were his socks and sneakers. The jeans were average blue jeans, the sneakers a solid black with white trim and a bit of blue accenting it here and there. The shirt, didn't really matter as there was now a Blue zip up jacket without a hood (See picture) over it with whiteish-grey vertical stripes running down the outer part of each arm. The metal pieces on his face were there as always. he rarely took them off, save to bathe, and his glasses were now on.

"Alright... What am I forgetting?" He asked as he grabbed his book bag. "Headphones." Xero answered calmly. "Right thanks." Hiro chuckled as he grabbed them, put them on and ran out. Wireless and connected to his PET along with wifi, and pretty much anything he could, including the radio. His own design, with help from his father. "Now... Off to school!" He cheered as he ran out. He might actually make it. At least, that's what he thought when he got to the door downstairs. That was when he realized. "3... 2..." Xero sighed as the bedroom door opened and Hiro rushed in. "Geez Xero." Hiro said as he grabbed the Link PET EX housing his Network navigator Xero.EXE. "Just hurry before you're late." Xero laughed as Hiro was soon out of the house and on his way to school
As the conversation unfolded it became painfully obvious to Rai that things would not get off to as easy a start as he had hoped. Everyone seemed so on edge. So much so that despite the fact that Leo obviously knew more than the rest of them about most of this, along with Merlin and Yen Sid,they still argued and would refuse to follow him. He understood that it would be foolish to simply trust someone they didn't know anything about. However, it was also foolish not to listen to him and take his words with a grain of salt. Maybe he was the only one who thought that it would be better to simply follow his lead while remaining cautious. Maybe that would have been too much to ask. That's probably why he remained silent. Especially since his previous outburst in approval of Leo had been so easily dismissed. Rather, it was ignored entirely.

"Right." The young man whispered to himself simply as he closed his eyes and waited for a decision to be made. It was the best option. He really didn't have the skills to make a plan or anything like that. He was just the muscle. He should really have focused as much on training his mind as he did his body. And even the training of his body was half assed really. Brawn with no way of properly directing it. No particular skills other than those you would find in a common street brawl. Granted this street brawl would pit a group against one, but still it wasn't much when compared to someone who'd trained in martial arts or swordplay or some other discipline. All of this factored into him remaining quiet. It wasn't like he was stupid, but it was likely he'd be thought of as such, so why not just let it all play out.

He continued on without a word until finally the commotion was ended and a single voice filled the room, prompting him to open his eyes. Merlin had returned along with... Leo? Had he left? A guy closes his eyes for one minute... He mentally facepalmed. Merlin spoke of the fairies disappearing. Crap how long had his eyes actually been closed?! He went on about how to make a corridor of light, and how they should be off already. Rai had no problems there. "Alright... So we're going to this Hollow... Er... Radiant... We're going to the Garden place right?" He managed to ask after a moment of obvious confusion over the name after Nadia's little outburst on the actual name of the place. Why couldn't things be a bit more simple? This whole thing was honestly making him miss math a bit.
Hey you two. My CS is almost done. I'm willing to start with just us three, but if you know anybody who might wanna join, let me know or invite them or whatever.
So my character is more or less done. I'll gladly change, add or remove anything you two think I should. So long as it is within reason of course.
Nothin mush Zar. lol Nothin mush.
Redwing said
Sorry. I'll try and chill out. I've got to leave for work soon anyway.


It's cool.
I need your temper to be mean when I can't XD
Man that could have sounded better...
Oh well...
I need ya here Red XD
Partisan said
Nooo, don't take it offensively! You just use a CS format more suitable for IC progress (which makes sense cause you're RPing a 12-13 year old, what kinda history do they have) but for a jonin I don't think I can write a cohesive story that makes sense. :p The reason you piqued my interest was actually simply cause I liked the way you set up the OOC, so don't take this as an insult to your organisation skills. As for the remark about me reading the OOC, well, I've been in a few naruto RP's, co GMed a lot of them and I simply assumed that multiple characters of 1 clan were allowed. That was my mistake. However after giving it some thought I don't think I can create a good clan myself (I've done so before and they all end up the same because I hate kekkei genkai) and I can't stand the Inuzuka. That all being said I do wanna leave on a good note, you guys have made a pretty good thread here. Just make sure to keep it going. I'll check it regularily whenever I see it pop up so I'm definetely interested to see what you guys manage to make out of this.


You don't need to play the Inuzuka. Though I do think it would be better to keep one of each clan for now as it is a fairly small RP.
If you wish to discuss more on the matter send me a PM and we can talk. If not, thank you for expressing interest.

Redwing said
You know what? After DiamondBlizzard, I'm not even going to try.


Take a deep breath Red.
I can easily tell this person is a ways away from Diamond.
I'll handle it. Just relax. I think you have enough on your plate for now lol
Can't have my co-gm gettin all angry xP
Partisan said
Judging from CS style I draw back my previous offer. :p I think I can't play a jonin when there's such a limited CS, I would simply not give myself a good enough view of my character that I can do the genins justice. That said, this'll be an experiment for me as I'm not used to playing with canon clans. Please, do bear with me!


1) I'm not going to lie. A few comments made regarding the CS were somewhat insulting. I believe this was not you're intention, but I do feel I should mention it. While I do think My CS is fairly appropriate for me, I would have to agree. i have honestly seen much better naruto CSes in the past so I don't hold any ill will towards said comments. Do keep in mind though i do/would allow you to build a CS to your liking assuming you did hit each point listed in my CS.

2) You should know there is no restriction saying you must use a canon clan. So long as you explain them well enough in your bio or something and state why/how they came to Konoha I would read over it, and objectively decide whether it would work. And by work I'd mean based on potential plotholes, or levels of strength based on your shinobi level.

3) I do tend to make my RPs a bit more IC based. The reason being that I've never been personally good as describing each detail of a character. Especially one so young who'll go through countless changes throughout the roleplay. If that makes any sense. I am, however, still working on my skills as a writer and trying to give more and more. One thing I'm trying to do and make it so the CS will be easy to edit and make better as with the character's growth and training and powering up I'll be expecting everyone to update their character sheets. Thus we can keep track of the characters and possibly flesh them out more and more.

I hope all that makes sense TT__TT
About a day and a train ride later the group would soon pull into the station of Magnolia town. A loud satisfied sigh of relief could be heard as the machine pulled to a stop and iggy stretched getting up from his seat. "Finally!" He said feeling quite relieved and energetic. "It hasn't even been a week and it feels like we've been gone for so long." He said cheerfully as he began to walk off the train with his things and his comrades in tow. "How are you all feeling? Personally I wish things had gone a bit differently, but we seriously kicked some dark guild ass!" He chanted happily. "AND!" He paused almost as if to purposely add a bit of suspense. "We didn't even destroy a piece of the town! That means we get the full pay!" Yup. Things had gone amazingly well. This was pretty great. Especially for the two newbie's first mission.
Some time later...

After leaving the train with their belongings it wouldn't be long until the small group reached the guild hall. Iggy kicked the doors open rather enthusiastically. "WE'RE BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACCCCKKKK!!!!!!" He shouted with a happy laugh. This was pretty good. Sure he'd ended up collapsing after the damage he'd taken and the amount of magic he'd used, but you wouldn't know it now. At least you wouldn't if he didn't have bandages strung around a fair amount of his body courtesy of the townfold before the group left. They treated everyone else as well, of course.
BluetheElf said
This looks quite fun! I think I'll play a user and NET Navi crime fighting duo.Name: Alex OaksAge: 16Gender: MalePET: A handheld Advanced PET with a blue case and a white front panel made to fit in pockets.Skills: Alex is good at making plans of attack, which goes to waste most of the time because of his arrogant NetNavi ElfMan disapproving of the plan or just charging into battle. He is also skilled at programming, and even made a few programs (at ElfMan's "demand") to boost his NetNavi's power.Personality: Alex is a kind hearted, sweet, and innocent young man. He tends to work behind the scenes because of his shy nature, and the only reason why he is in action so much is because his NetNavi. While he has his mind set in the good side, he can be easily convinced to do things because of his submissive nature. Even females can make Alex do what they want him to do. But his NetNavi ElfMan keeps things in check for him, and because of this he had slowly gained the feelings to fight back himself. Alex would never do anything to hurt anyone, he just wants the best for everyone, even if ElfMan's arrogant self does not agree with him. However, while he keeps almost all of his anger inside of him, if ElfMan keeps annoying him he just might have an outburst of anger.History: Alex was always a programmer ever since the day his father showed him a computer. He has made many simple programs in his past, mainly computer games, but as he grew up, his programs became more and more robust, soon coming to the point where he made a system that monitored the entire computer! And this his 10th birthday came. His gift from his parents was a PET and a NetNavi, ElfMan. ElfMan started out as a NetNavi with no emotions, seeing as he had only recently been created and had no time to learn, but as the days stretched into weeks and Alex tested out ElfMan, the little computer program became cocky, headstrong, and arrogant. Whenever Alex did something that ElfMan did not like, he quickly let him know in the worst possible way. Still, in later months they soon started to bond, and after a year the strangest of friendships was born. While ElfMan may think he controls Alex's every movement, Alex is the main hero in his life, and he will do what he thinks is right no matter what.Other: N/ANavi Name: ElfMan.EXENavi Type: FighterWeapon(s): Elf Arrow: a quick, straight shot that can pierce even protection programs. Elemental Alignment: NaturePersonality: ElfMan is an arrogant NetNavi that has the tendency to think he is the master over Alex, not realizing it is the other way around. While he just might have enough power to do this and get away with it, ElfMan is very headstrong and cocky, hardly thinking about danger even after it's too late. To him, Alex is just his transport, even though he loves the guy for all the things he does for him. ElfMan is quick tempered, but he knows what is good or evil. He will battle against foes, but on his terms only. ElfMan is also a bit of a goof and makes jokes about people, but in unfunny ways. He still, however, can respect people near his power level, and people on his good side and most likely to get the best from him. Deep inside of himself, ElfMan is a caring, golden hearted hero, although he almost never shows this unless Alex is in life threatening trouble.Other: His main attack is Elf Arrow, which is fired from an energy bow when the attack program is executed. It was added to him by Alex, who wrote the program himself.


Alright pretty good. One thing though,
Elf Arrow. Make it a regular straight shot on average and the piercing function should be a charge shot.
We'll likely end up competing or stuff a lot as both our characters seem to be very skilled programmers.
Okay I made mine a genius, but you know XD
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