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Current Running a fantasy RP(roleplayerguild.com/topics/7..), looking for more things to do.

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@SigilI did not catch that one. Huh.

@ElitestpotatoI set no limits on what one plays, as long as it's balanced. If you can balance a doppelganger...sure?

Though for the record, if this means your doppelganger won't have a personality of its own, I would rather not have the character play at all.
Bumping for justice.
The human nodded at Keystone as he finished the spell. The elf's skin took on a darker shade of grey, his limbs stiffening.

"Restraining spell," the wizard explained. He gestured to the animated construct, who seemed unaffected by the half orc's powerful incantation. The entity walked over to the fallen elf and lifted the stiff onto one shoulder, keeping hold of the blade in its other hand. Without as much as a word, it started back for the chapel.

The mage kept his guard up around the two, but seemed much more relaxed now that there was no immediate danger. He motioned for the two mercenaries to follow him back into the chapel.

"I ask of you to not touch anything inside, including my friend over there and his blade. You are in no danger, but touching that weapon will put you in much the same predicament as it did him, " he explained, quickly bridging the distance to the door. There was a faint shimmer around him and his mirror image, as if he wasn't entirely corporeal.

The inside of the chapel was surprisingly large, bigger than the outside would suggest. The walls were lined with various shelves full of spell components and potions, and the only furniture aside from that were four empty stone alcoves, covered in dust. They could serve as seats if one was so inclined.
The axe flung by the large man pierced one of the conjured images, blinking it out of existence. The rock flung at the other image was swatted out of the air by a lightning quick flash. The living mummy had swung the large sword to cut the projectile out of the air, its blade puffing a cloud of dust when it struck the ground. The construct moved between the half orc and the human mage, yanking the sword out of the ground as it did. It assumed a defensive position, keeping the blade in clear view of the half orc. The inscription on it was clearly visible now, and it read 'Kaylee'.

Reverin was out cold, his skin still scaly and grey. Erepar ignored the half orc and paced towards the unconscious elf. He paused for a second and looked at the warrior who knocked him out. The mage appeared to be keeping his guard up around the fighter, standing several dozen steps away. The construct kept itself between the half orc and its master, its intent obvious: guard against any more attacks from the green skinned man.

"I thank you for neutralizing him. He has been trying to kill me for months. I'll make sure he doesn't get up soon and we can talk," the mage said, beginning an unknown incantation in full view of Keystone.

-snip-


That's exactly why I made this thread; not to prove how innocent I was, but to see what I was doing wrong. As such, I do take everything said personal, but not as an attack. My feelings don't come into play here.

The IC posts were nuked because the player kept editing them from the original, story-fitting post to basically 'I left because GM is jerk'. I don't care about the personal attack, but I would have liked to keep the original posts instead of the edited attacks. Thus, I requested a moderator to nuke them(This was after they were all edited down to a single sentence). I purposefully left everything in the OOC because I do not intend to hide anything, for people to see what transpired.

There's no angle here that I'm purposefully trying to force. I was confused as to why certain players left, and asked for help on determining what I did wrong in handling it.

I thank you for the criticism, it is most welcome. I've learned from this thread that if something like this happens again, I'm going to shut it down gracefully and quickly. I do not enjoy this drama.
@DipperUnless otherwise noted, yes.
@Blackmist16I suggest you confirm whether this RP is for you. If you can't or are not willing to fix those mistakes, it isn't.
@Blackmist16Going with a stock bard, eh?

Could you expand on the background and history? I use it for events in the game, so bigger is better.

The biggest problem I have with your character sheet, however, is the complete lack of periods and commas in the bio, longsword description and a Bard's Tale. I must insist on a far more regular use of those when writing larger pieces of text, if you plan to join the RP. I do not require perfect grammar and spelling, but I don't like reading one run-on sentence.
@Blackmist16If you have any questions, or need help, ask!
@potatochipgolem
That seemed a little unnecessary.


I can understand why he'd say it, one of the players who left earlier had the same impression. You have the green light to post, by the way. My apologies for the absence.
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