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So Rotten Tomatoes has the rating percentage for the Fantastic Four movie as 19 percent right now.

So clearly, Angel Vicky and myself are already doing a better job.

Seriously between Fox making a crappy Fantastic Four movie, and Marvel desperately trying to hide the Fantastic Four going so far as to cancel their series which oh by the way is Marvel's longest running. Its like watching a custody battle between two shitty parents.

EDIT: Oh pardon me, 12 percent right now.


Player Name: Drewvonawesome

Character You Wish To Play: Reed Richards – Mr. Fantastic

Moral Alignment (Hero, Villain, Walking the Line): Hero

Affiliation (what group/team/organization, if any, is your character affiliated with?): Leader of the Fantastic Four

Character Origin & Backstory: When Reed was born he already had a legacy, albeit it a short one, that would've been daunting for most others. Reed's father was Nathan Richards, a brilliant scientist who had written numerous books and documentaries on space and the concepts of everything around it. His mother Helen Richards though also had many scientific degrees in various fields. Even with all this however, Reed showed even early on that he was capable of being smarter than any of them. By the time most kids were just going into pre-school Reed already had the knowledge that could put him into High School. Even still though his parents wanted him to learn patience and humility, so they had him go through the school years and never leap ahead any grades, despite numerous people at school insisting he did.

When Reed however reached the age of 14 everything changed. His father was working on design concepts and small scale experiments on something he proudly told Reed 'would change everything'. However after one resulted in a miniature black hole that nearly sucked him in before he was able to shut it off. Nathan Richards canceled and abandoned the project quickly. He started using his time and stature in the scientific world to make sure that the very leaps and bounds were handled responsibly worrying that one advancement made too quickly could be apocalyptic in its sheer danger. It all led to him however finding out about experiments being done in Latervia and by one Victor Von Doom. The leader of the country was creating something Nathan Richards worried could lead to even more destructive danger than his own experiment. One night he went into Reed's room before his bed time, kissed him on the cheek. He told him that daddy had to go do something important, and that no matter what he loved him very much.

That night was the last time Reed has ever seen his father.

Seemingly Nathan Richards vanished off the map. Never telling anyone where he went made finding him all but impossible. Reed though in his grief finished everything through High School in a depression fueled rage. Getting a G.E.D. Diploma that he doesn't even keep out anywhere out of shame. As he knew later after a talk with his mom that he couldn't let what happened affect him. Still Reed found himself in a deep slump of sadness that he couldn't shake. His dad meant a lot to a lot of people, but to Reed he was a superhero. Someone he didn't have to look up too because he was right there, always with that smile, and that belly laugh that always made Reed himself laugh.

By chance the New York Comic Con was coming up, something the more geeky side of Reed loved attending every year since he was very little. Worrying about Reed, she had Reed's long time friend. The equally geeky Benjamin Graham, take him on a weekend trip to the convention. She got them hotels next to the convention center, and gave Reed plenty for goodies and food. Still by the end of the first day it didn't seem like it was working, Reed just mostly stayed in the hotel room, watching TV as Ben had to seemingly beg to even get him to go out for dinner that night. However the next day Reed finally went, more to shut Ben up than anything else. However during the day when he was sulking along he saw something radiant. The girl his age was simply stunning, even without considering the lovely costume she was cosplaying in. Reed's heart thumped harder and harder at the sight of her. Ben realizing what was happening played wing man and quickly got Reed to go talk to her. Her name was Susan Storm, and the two couldn't be detached from one another for the rest of the weekend.

Shortly there after Reed was approached by her father, another renowned scientist in Dr Franklin Storm. Reed knew about and admired his work (Having not really previously connected the dots on Susan being his daughter), and was surprised when Dr. Storm asked him to join his think tank program The Future Foundation. Reed was flattered, but as of yet hasn't had any idea what project he could do with them.

Powers and Abilities (What can your character do? What can't they do?): Reed's body has undergone a metamorphosis where in his body essentially allows him to be completely and utterly flexible and elastic. He can stretch his limbs from toes to fingertip upwards of 3 miles but with practice that number can certainly raise. He can also reform himself into things like a ball shape to bounce around in, stretch individual limbs like fingers and toes, inflate himself or deflate himself flat, along with countless other feats that are hindered by his imagination alone. On top of this his body structure has changed completely. No longer supported by a skeletal structure, Reed's body has an almost harden gel like substance supporting it, as well as no longer a stomach but instead a unique bacteria sack that allows Reed to survive off of oxygen alone.

Reed though personally considers his biggest 'super power' to have always been his intelligence. Quite simply Reed Richards could very well be the most intelligent man on the planet. Having gotten top studying in astrophysics, biology, bio-engineering, and countless others.

Sample Story Arcs: Give 2-3 ideas on where you want to go with your character.

After the big project, the teleportation device his father was working on, fails spectacularly. Reed finds out one of the people who was working on it has mutated for the worst, a strange monster like creature that buries itself underground and produces mole like monsters a sexually. Finding out about him and having to fight its now mindless form leaves Reed depressed and blaming himself, on top of what happened to himself and the other three.

Reed along with the rest of the newly announced Fantastic Four begin to put the pieces together about where his father went and what happened to him, which leads them to a certain castle in Latervia.

(This one with Kid Lantern's permission of course) After their constant struggles and disappointments against 3D Man, The skrulls decide to use the Fantastic Four as the base for a new Super Skrull prototype. However when they get DNA samples from the four it causes the heroes' powers to go haywire, and result in the curious side effect of being able to exchange powers with one another through physical touch.

Sample Post (This is used as an introduction to your writing – try to keep it to around three paragraphs or more and try to include dialogue):

As Reed Richards could faintly hear sounds coming from all around him, the bathroom where his roommate for the weekend Ben Graham was singing Dinosaur Laser Fight, the traffic outside that is distinctive for New York City morning rush hour, and the dull sales person on the tv. Reed just quietly sighed to himself as he stared up at the ceiling while laying practically motionless in bed. Sure he had on clothes and had been awake for an hour or so, but he just would've rather gone back to bed.

It had been some time since his father told him good night that last time, before vanishing to who knows where and if his even alive there. As intelligent as the young man was he couldn't stop repeating questions that had no logical answer. The biggest one of all though was why, why did he leave? Was it something Reed did? Was his mom and dad not getting along as well as they were making it out to be? Reed's brain was wrecking itself as Ben came out of the bathroom. A light misting of steam coming out with him as he had changed into some fresh clothes. The large, muscular guy in a Jets jersey and jeans took his fingers through his blond buzzcut hair before glancing over at Reed.

“Hey Reed man you're awake!” Ben started into with the chummy Brooklyn accent of his. “Listen man come on its going to be great today, they're doing some giveaways today, and man the booth babes. Dude the booth babes are amazing this year let me tell...”

Ben paused, a bit disappointed as he watched Reed silently roll over in his bed putting his back to his friend. “No its fine, just go ahead man I'll catch up later.” Reed softly said with a sigh as he hoped Ben would leave.

“Reed...” Ben had to hold back his irritation before he walked over to his bed and sat at the side, facing Reed. “You told me that yesterday and you didn't do it. Hell I had to make you come have dinner with me last night. Look I really liked your dad too Reed, he was a Hell of a guy. But... come on man everyone is worried sick about you. This whole weekend was to give you something special. Bro I'm not just going to let you sit here and wallow away like this. That's not the Reed Richards I know.”

Looking out the window of the hotel room Reed grimaced, he knew Ben was right but there was still that part of his brain, that nagging feeling that told him he still didn't 'get it'. Still Reed had to fight it and hold it down as he shut his eyes for a second. He finally turned over, “I uh...” Reed had to force it out. “I guess...”

-Later-

It took some time, as it felt like Reed was just using small inconveniences and annoyances to just justify not wanting to be there. However Ben was prepared, and had to get Reed back into the right geeky frame of mind. It started with some panels where Ben was able to get autographs for Reed of some comic book writers and artists. Going through the booths Ben helped find Reed some figures that he was looking for. Slowly Reed was giving a faint grin, just letting himself get back into things again. It still hurt, but he saw how hard Ben was trying and if nothing else it was providing a nice distraction.

“Alright alright Ben seriously now, I think you know better than to doubt Captain Marvel.” Reed shook his head having to hold back a laugh.

Ben chuckled, not just because of their discussion but frankly he saw some people nearby give a slight cowering to his presence. There was something fun about looking like a jock and scaring people who would be impressed by the engineering and robotics knowledge he actually possessed. “No man Superman could totally take him, Captain Marvel is just a kid playing superhero.”

Reed smirked, his hand having to hold up his head a bit. “Yeah and that's what makes Captain Marvel more awesome.” Reed and Ben continued to have their argument, one that had been made in the past and will continue with the two until their too old to even remember comic book characters. Reed always enjoyed it though, it was that kind of thing you could never justify with anyone rationally.

As the two continued on, Ben was trying to raise a point about Superman's endurance or something like that when Reed suddenly found himself unable to even hear him. It was due to someone nearby, a cosplayer who had her mask off and was talking to someone else. The girl though was... Reed just couldn't look away, it wasn't even the Hawkgirl costume she was wearing. It was just her. She just had Reed's attention and wasn't letting go.

“...so what I'm saying... Reed? Reed!” Suddenly a hand on Reed's shoulder sucked him back into the real world where Ben looked on confused for a moment. Finally though he looked over at the girl and back down to Reed, quickly picking up the social situation at hand with a grin. “Oh I'm sorry, I didn't realize you were a bit preoccupied.” Ben said as Reed felt his cheeks start to turn a harsher peach tone.

“I wha no no no I mean no she's just got a nice costume!” Reed stammered out a response even he had a hard time figuring out after the fact. Having to look away to try and figure out quickly how stupid he sounded.

Ben chuckled a bit, patting Reed's shoulder again. “Sure buddy, it was just the costume...” Ben saw how Reed was getting very embarrassed but also saw an opening. “Why don't you go talk to her?”

Reed's eyes shot open wide as he glanced back hastily, “I what? No I don't even know what to say! I'm just going to look stupid.” Reed figured as much, the only other time he tried to talk to a girl like this was asking someone to prom. It ended about as well as Reed figured seeing as how she laughed thinking it was a prank set up.

“Here come on Reed if you're so concerned I'll help.” Suddenly Reed felt Ben's large hand grip his wrist as he started pulling him towards the girl. Leaving Reed panicked, excited, and feeling like he was about to vomit all at the same time. He tried to get Ben to let go having to shuffle his feet in his forced movement but all hope faded and he soon found himself face to face with something amazing, and with nothing to say.

“Hey whats up? Sorry to barge in but I'm Ben, this is Reed. Here Reed say hi.” Ben had given him the opening, Reed felt his heart rushing in his body like it was bouncing all over the place. All the knowledge he possessed, all the smarts he had and will ever have. None of it prepared him for this, the brief pause felt like an eternity as Reed had to muster up his courage. Here goes...

“Uh, hi!”
Uh sure, that's fine.


Drewvonawesome/Angel Vicky

-8 months before-
-Richards home-

The attic wasn't really the planned location for the entire day, but when you're someone like Reed Richards with the kind of things that were there.  It's hard not too get sucked into an attention grabbing moment that turns into an all day venture.  It wasn't like he had planned on it, a random thought led to a thought about his dad, Nathan Richards, and the memory his dad had designed a blueprint on such a thought.  Reed went up to the attic where all his dad's thing were put, and just started browsing everything.  His dad's collection of ideas, sketches, blueprints, and everything he had on his personal laptop was a treasure trove for a thinker.  He never was one to waste an idea by just keeping it in his mind.  

Susan Storm, Reed's friend of about a year or so since they met at Comic Con in New York, decided she would call round at his house today because he didn't call her this morning. They were so close that they were never off the phone or computer talking to one another. Or even texting a million times a day. Everyone around them says they're like a couple, but maybe Sue and Reed just couldn't see it yet. She rang the doorbell and Reed's mother answered. She informed the smiley bright blonde that he was in the attic, her expression was one of sadness. Sue knew what that meant...Reed's grief and his mom's never had gone away. She was glad she visited, Red was in need of some much needed comfort right now. She ascends the stairs and makes her way up to the attic. There she finds him trawling through memoirs of Nathan Richards. She approaches him meekly and tentatively, without saying a word, places a gentle hand on his shoulder to show she was there for him. As always like a true friend. "Hey, you okay?" She asks and kneels down beside him to see what he was looking at.  

Reed was too distracted and entranced by what he was looking through to even notice Susan was there and much less getting closer and closer until she was right next to him with a soft hand onto his shoulder.  Reed's head jumped up startled before turning over to Susan Realizing it was her and giving a warm smile.  "Hey Sue!  Oh no its nothing I'm just looking through all this."  Reed gestured at the multitude of paper and notebooks surrounding him.  He chuckled slightly hoping to ease the worry in her voice and face.  Though he knew why it was there, it wasn't exactly the most comfortable place for him right now mentally to be looking through all of his dad's things like this.  It always worried his mom the most, as she saw it as him refusing to let go of the past.  Reed didn't quite see it like that, but deep down he wasn't sure completely himself.  "No some of this stuff is just fascinating.  Why what time is it?"  Reed asked realizing he hasn't paid the slightest bit of attention to his watch or smart phone.

Sue looks at her white metallic watch with a large circular face surrounded by rhinestones that looked expensive. And it was, a gift from her father. Though she'd much rather spend time with him than spend his money. "It's nearly 3.30pm." She then looks up at him from the floor and rests her head against her knee. "I got worried when you didn't reply my texts."

Reed glanced at his smart phone realizing both the time and the texts he didn't even see.  "Oh man I thought it was eight in the morning still.  I'm sorry."  Reed meekly said as he put his smart phone back into his jeans pocket.  She patted her head, letting his fingers run through her rich blond hair.  "Hey least you came over, I do always really appreciate when you come over like this."  He went to put away the notebook he was reading at the moment when something slipped out of its pages.  A large folded up piece of paper, one side blue and the other white with numbers on it.  As it tumbled out and onto Susan's lap.

Sue smiles warmly as he runs his fingers through her locks, she felt a warm fuzzy feeling as he did so. But not like when Johnny did the same, it was a different kind of feeling. She catches the blueprint in her hands and upon inspecting it her eyes widen. "Reed. This looks like some sort of temporal rift device....is this what your dad was working on??" She asks him with shock.  

"What?  Let me see..."  Reed gently took the blueprint from her hands and after blowing away and wiping dust off of a nearby old large piece of luggage laid the blueprint out.  He looked at it stunned for a moment, what was this?  Did his dad not tell him about it?  "Oh my God it is!"  Reed glanced around at all the scribbles and notes on it point out various parts.  "The main module here looks like a main power source, runs off of a pretty hefty amount too."  Reed examined some of the smaller notes more carefully.  "Negative zone?  Whats a negative zone?"  Reed's mind started to get working as too the phrase, but most importantly where he heard it before.  Suddenly it clicked, and Reed frantically started looking through the old documents and notes he was looking at earlier.

Sue watches him with concern as she gets up from the floor. "Reed..." She didn't know what to do, she'd never seen him this frantic before. "Reed...Reed.......REED!" She finally puts her foot down and grabs both his hands. "Calm. Down." She looked right into his eyes, her nose almost touching his. "Breathe." 

Reed was in his own little world trying to find the right thing he was looking for.  Not as much frantic as much focused as he finally found the small notebook.  "Yeah no I'm..."  Suddenly though he felt himself close to Susan, almost unbearably close as Susan was telling him to calm down.  Every word she said left a little bit of heat just grazing his cheek.  Reed felt strongly some kind of feeling he couldn't quite put into words.  But he just quietly nodded to Susan before letting himself be out of her grips.  Almost needing a moment before he regained his thought pattern.  "Right uh..."  Reed just muttered before seeing the book.  "Oh, right!  No I recognized the phrase 'negative zone' but just didn't realize what it meant."  Picking the book back up he placed it onto the blueprint and flipped it open to a particular part. 

 "He talked about a negative zone but without the proper context I didn't get what he was talking about."  Reed started into, his mind scrambling together all the pieces of the puzzle.  It was something he liked to think he inherited from both of his parents, as he could just solve anything seemingly with just focus and time.  "The negative zone is a possible temporal dimension.  Almost a counter reality to ours, what this though talks about is the idea of creating something that uses this counter reality to seemingly teleport something or someone at a speed beyond light.  Essentially creating teleportation as its known conceptually."  Reed's voice and expression were turning to joy with each word as he turned to Susan.  "Sue!  We should take this to your father and work on it!  Could you imagine the possibilities if it worked?"

Susan wasn't so sure about it as Reed was though. "I don't know about this Reed. Imagine if it all went wrong..." She holds herself with her arms at her elbows and leans on one leg. "It sounds like something the government scientists would love to get hold of, and imagine if it got into the wrong hands!" She was the morality behind the science. "I'm all for scientific advancement but...I'm really scared, Reed." She tells him openly, she'd never lost confidence in science before, but that was when she KNEW what she was doing. She gazed glumly at the floor for a moment. 

Reed was still too deep into the project to even realize Susan's concerns until he looked over and saw her staring down at the floor in worry.  Reed paused for a moment before reaching over and gently placing a hand onto her shoulder.  "Hey hey if this does work I can put patents on it and not let anyone use the technology unless I say so.  Besides that can happen with any scientific advance."  Reed snuggled up closer to Susan and placed a hand of his onto one of her's.  "Being afraid is okay, but what if this does succeed?  Come on lets just get his advice and if any thing starts to go wrong with it we can call it off.  Lets just at least try okay?"  Reed asked giving her shoulder a soft rub.

Sue's eyes twinkled as she looks up at Reed. He somehow always knew how to convince her of anything. Or was that just because she had a soft spot for the brainiac. She relents and nods, smiling slightly, firmly holding onto his hand for reassurance. "Okay. Let's go see my Dad." 
"he was starting to believe he was losing his touch at genocide."

Yeah Loki! Get with the program!


LMAO, yeah that line was amazing. Seriously I can actually see Loki and Stark having an amazing friendship. We need to make this happen post sThor attack.
"Look all I'm going to say is its roughly the size and diameter of a tennis ball container... just going to leave it there."

Seriously though me and @angel vicky are going to start working on an opening for the Fantastic Four nowish.
Yeah sure thing man.

Edit: Done and done.


Tony glanced away for a moment from Pepper's response, giving an almost childish raspberry in the process. Before looking back at the surprised Pepper. “Please Pepper, you're one of the very few people I know who can tolerate me for long periods of time. That seems like a perfectly good place to start in your qualifications.” Tony noted as he went back to dancing with Pepper since that was as good a thing to do on a dance floor as much else. “Heck I even talked to my college James Rhodes about it and even he likes the idea, just come in tomorrow and we can start ironing out details.”

Tony Stark had glanced over just as Pepper Potts also saw that Doom went to Victoria and was speaking to her. Tony shook his head silently to himself, especially after Doom nodded back to them. “Doom, come on man there's better ways to talk to women then making them bodyguards.” Tony muttered to himself, he felt like there shouldn't be a question wither or not there was an ulterior motive to what was happening. Doom just happens to want to be 'bodyguarded' by the hero who has incredible powers? How convenient.

Before Tony though could continue the metal clad attention magnet came up to Stark. Offering his hand in a proper greetings which even threw Tony off a little. Still with people all around seeing this and with full attention on it Tony couldn't use his hate as a crutch and slipped in his hand. It was firm, the kind of handshake you make when you want to show your worth without saying a word. Still Tony kept his cool even as he felt like he might as well be shaking the hand of Satan himself. “Yes thank you, I'm quite proud of what we have going and I think financially speaking its working out well so far.” Thankfully despite some public opinion to the contrary the stock for Stark Tech has gone up since the big press conference and conference presentation. So at least Tony even in the face of someone he despised, could talk about his favorite topic, himself and his awesomeness. “Still I suppose I should apologize for the earlier comment. Certainly could of worded myself better and I'm sorry for the personal insult.

'Also, if you don't want to be called little green riding hood. Take off the stupid hood ya brain dead dictator.' Tony's mind snapped out as he made the professional move outwardly.

Tony for a moment thought back to when he caught Doom speaking to someone he of course recognized. Obadiah Stane, he had barely seen the guy after taking the company CEO title out from under him. He knew Stane was mad about it but figured by now he man would've calmed down. He didn't know officially yet, the guy's hard to pin down for meetings since he does a lot of travel for the company. Still Stark had his curiosity peaked. “So, if you don't mind me asking, I saw you were speaking to Mr. Stane my associate. Now I'm not trying to play nosey susie here but what exactly was he talking to you about? Something good about me I hope.” Tony beamed a smile and shrugged as he asked. Getting laughs from the small crowd around them as he readied himself to gauge Doom's reaction and answer.
So totes in, I have a character who is a student of Max Thunder formulating in my brain.
Yeah I was kind of wanting an answer on the Fantastic Four... two... sort of.
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