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@HHShetlandliked the references to you in my post? xD
I was thinking of creating a fighting pit after this myself, but feel free to beat me to it ^^
There we go, a small additional post to link him more to the rest of the story
Krenn Prong
Stranded smuggler
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‘3030 Thats a lot of levels down’
Krenn was thinking as he spit out a glob of black phlegm he just coughed up.

“Raah”

He rasped his throat, spitting out some more of the smoke-tainted phlegm. He looked around dazed, the high pitched noise slightly clearing from his ears to make room for sounds that this level had to offer. Krenn decided it was time for some fresh air, and for the purpose he produced a cigar from one of the inner pockets of his long leather coat he wore over his greasy wife-beater. His four hands were just patting down the numerous pockets for matches when he could make a voice out from the background noises:

“I'm not a rreal doctorr, but I'm definitely here to ease yourr pain.”

Krenn looked around lazily, looking for the creature that was uttering the odd sentence. He turned to look around lazily, half expecting a Trandoshan prostitute, and the thought produced a wide grin, interrupted by the cigar clenched between his teeth. When he saw nothing of the sort he traced it down to a group of beings standing near a corner with a small radio. Subconsciously one of his hands had found a set of matches and Krenn lit his cigar, inhaling deep. The fuzziness in his mind started clearing and it was about time to make up inventory. He methodically went over all pockets with his hands to note he still had all four of his blasters, a commlink, some reloads, his lovingly called twin batons; Poker and Clubber, around 6 sets of matches, a flask-

Krenn took a pause from taking inventory to take a good swig, the radio was going over the news about a duracrete worm investation. Judging by the news portrayed so far he was in an environment rich with gangs if the brutal incident described was all the DJ would report. He didn’t know if Imperials would be coming after him. His ship was probably fully disintegrated somewhere on the bottom of that vent, if they hadn’t seen him jump the investigation of the wreckage wouldn’t yield much inspiration to go looking. Getting deeper into town was a good idea any way. Krenn was making a mental note of the now probably deserted 103rd quarter when the owners of the radio were noticing Krenn’s unrelenting stare of deep thought.

“Hey, what are you looking at, listening in is 5 credits mate.”

Said a Twi’lek male that was now approaching, his friends, a Dugg, a Nikto and another Twi’lek grinning after him. Krenn blinked out of his stare, fixing on the Twi’lek.

“S-sorry friend. Rough day, you know how it is. Lost in thoughts.”

Krenn added a small chuckle after it, exhaling his smoke while he started putting back the matches and drinking flask with his upper hands, his lower two slightly hidden behind his coat.

“Oh yes, I know how it is. Try Zam’s, might help clearing your head.”

The Twi’lek chuckled, encouraging smirks to appear on his mates faces. While he pointed deeper into town. Krenn thought hitting up a cantina wouldn’t be such a bad idea at all, get some info, maybe a ride out of here.

“Zam’s huh? Good place? I am fresh of the shuttle.”

Krenn added a polite grin with him, trying to find his mannerisms again even though his chest was still hurting.

“Yes, a very good place. My niece works there. Don’t forget to tip big.”

The second Twi’lek spoke out.
Krenn nodded as he followed the finger pointing him in the direction of what he presumed to be Zam’s cantina.

“Aye, aye. I will if the misses allows it.”

He slapped the pocket of his coat he had a few credits in, and for some reason that sparked a few laughs amongst the small group. Krenn started walking and added with a smile:

“Best of days to you all. That’s even half a decent song you are listening to.”

The Twi’lek waved and called after him.

“Dj Dino mate, he’s the best! Send my regards to Ayalana!”

Krenn held up a thumb as he walked on. To Zam’s cantina it was.
xD almost have a second post ready if no one approaches me.
@SuperTacticalDerp GM said he was open to one or so jedi Characters, and we already have one, so I don't know. Good luck either way ^^
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I'm definitely a fan. I got weirdly emotional when Krenn said goodbye to his ship.


Thanks! one of the first times I write such a thing!
Posted, let me know what you think!
Krenn


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Krenn’s four hands where in motion constantly. Two worked the ship’s controlls while a third was working the power distributer. The fourth was just relieving Krenn from a terrible itch on his lower back as the ash of the cigar protruding from his mouth was calling to be disposed, giving rise to the thought that one can just not have enough hands.

“Come on shields, you can make it.”

Krenn muttered to himself as he made a barrel roll in the hope of evading the pursuing laser cannons. The sentence made the ash of his cigar drop on his smudged white wife-beater. A few flashy manoeuvres got him clear for a moment, relieving him of one alarm in the orchestra of beeps and sirens. A sudden dive followed as his two right hands moved away from the navi-computer and one tapped off his cigar in a small ashtray on the freighters dashboard. The other runs a small diagnostic on the ship’s systems console.

“You got to be kidding me, already overheating!?”

A few additional taps rerouted some cooling fluids to the rear deflector shields as the itch was finally gone. It left Krenn with a small moment for a reflective fuzzing of the hairs as his lower left arm takes over from his upper left arm on the controls to do so. Spread before him was the cityscape of Coruscant, it’s soft edged towers rising in the distance. Unfortunately they also came up right before Krenn as he set out another zig-zag around one to shake the pursuing TIEs.

“Persistent fuckers….”

A glance at his navi-computer showed him that a massive ventilation shaft was just coming up, he knew it was a dead end, but up was no option, he would come into range of the planetary lasers and the Star Destroyers in Orbit. Running a chase in the upper levels of Coruscant could keep the Imps busy for a while, but eventually he would be boxed in, and he knew the penalty for the things he pulled. So down it was.

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An hour earlier:

“This is Coruscant Traffic control, continue your path to marker Y-2790, than slave your ship to frequency 7201XF, Any deviation will be handled appropriately.”
Krenn’s ship had just jumped out of hyperspace in Coruscant’s orbit. He had to travel there via a security station in the Deep Core, where his ship was checked and luckily his secret cargo remained undiscovered. Things would be easy from here on out, but still Krenn was tense.
“Will do Control, Marker Y-2790, than frequency 7201XF.”
He let go of the comms button, rolled his eyes and added an:
“Or else you will blacken my ship and fry my corpse with lasers. No wonder this pays well.”
Coruscant was still a majestic sight, he had seen it on Holos but never up close like this. Were it under more relaxed circumstances Krenn might have enjoyed it.
As planned the ship was slaved to the agreed upon unloading dock, an open air facility where the storage would be stowed under the platform. Though the exchange began uneventful they were thoroughly disturbed when their business was interrupted by an imperial patrol. A quick search would have yielded nothing out of order, had the Chagrian buyer not insisted upon sampling the spice. Scanners indicated a small traces of Thyssel Bark on one of the crates and the whole party was apprehended. Krenn had positioned himself near his ship just for such an event and while the patrol was apprehending the buyers, Krenn made a run for it.
The folly of that soon became clear.

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As the edge of the vent came up beneath Krenn’s customized TD-23 Mantis, a ship that boasted 3 arm-mounted engines in addition to the on board hyperspace engine. The co-ordination of 3 of Krenn’s hands was required to have his lower engine reverse direction while the upper two kept propelling, steering him sharply down, than boosting all three engines forward. He shot into the vent as the two TIE’s were taken by surprise, and had to make larger turns to pursue.

“Get out of the way!”

Krenn shouted as his ship narrowly missed a passenger craft just coming up, a few sharp turns set him clear of some more traffic, but
Laser cannon bolts where already raining down on his rear-deflector, and he noticed that they had short-circuited.

“No, no no no! Not now!”

He was quickly descending level after level, but the TIE’s were way more manoeuvrable trough the traffic of the vent and systems went down in quick succession as shots rained down upon the ship. Krenn pulled the ship up to become level, all, three engines turning to maintain upward propulsion. The ship shrieked in protest that was followed by a loud crash of the ship bumping into something, Krenn hoped it was a TIE. Sparks flew out of one of the panels overhead while clicked off his seatbelt and pushed out of his already turning seat.

“Sorry old buddy, time to let you go.”

A few steps over the upper deck of the Mantis (mere grated steel over his cargo hold) showed him the damage his ship had sustained. Tears welled up, but his determination set him to pull the large lever of his upper cargo-hatch. Air rushed through the opening with deafening force.

3036

3035

3034

Read the holo-signs he passed, accompanied by the access platforms. The secondary propulsion controls, meant for docking the ship with the upper hatch responded slowly, he added propulsion to bring him closer to the platforms in this fall and the drop steadied.

3033

3032


He near missed the platform with his arm-mounted engine, steering to get into position to jump on the next one, but a flash of green rocked the ship and left Krenn with all four hands grasping the hatch.

3031


“FUCK!”

A second shot of the volley hit the ship and Krenn let go, flailing to keep a semblance of balance in mid-air as a platform sped up beneath him.

He hit it with a loud smack, black smoke completely blinding him when he bothered to open his eyes wide while grasping for air. Krenn lay there for a while, half-chocking on the smoke, but desperately trying to breathe. How he willed himself up is still unknown, but as the smoke started to clear there was it before him. Sprawling like a huge underground cavern filled with towers, speeders and holo-commercials. Krenn steadied himself on a nearby edge, eying some bystanders come and look for the origins of the smoke. A Weequay came up to him, asking what was happening and Krenn looked at him after a good rub in his eyes.

“I-“

A coughing fit prevented him from uttering more, while he pointed shakily over the railing.

“Don’t know, - probably a ship-“

He coughed up ‘crash’ but the weequay was already looking over the railing, his face suddenly lighting up orange, and heat surged passed moments later.

“Yeah, that’s a crash alright.”

When the weequay looked over his shoulder Krenn was already stumbling into the underworld. One hand on the railing, the others hanging by his side helplessly as his eyes steadied on a holo-sign by the platform.

3030.


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