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TurboTuber said
I seriously considered using a picture of Braum from League of Legends, but that just seemed a liiiittle too well known.Also I added a line to his equipment section adding an enchantment to his hammer. Am I supposed to deposit this thing in the codex?


Yup.
You can't make someone into a demon.

Well, you can, but only into the 'I can punch the whole world to death in one hit' kind, but that's an antagonist thing.
Well, I can imagine just how difficult it would be to find an eight foot tall red-skinned demon that uses guns. Which is why pictures are optional.
Asura's are born, not made. They are not the product of gene-splicing they are just another species. I'm not against an Asura I'm against a sentient being made out of other murdered sentient beings.
*bashes head against wall ineffectually*
Lucius Cypher said
Most humans dont know how to walk when they first get their legs either, Free. She had to learn, and took the time to do so. I can't say if they knew this would anger the gods, but I also imagine they wouldnt care. Just because they exist, doesn't mean everyone is inclined to put their faith into them. And in this instance, enough if these atheists gathered to more or less try their hands at the whole "manipulating life" thing themselves. Why should the gods be the only ones to decide what can become what


Worshipping them is less of a faith thing here and more of a devotion thing. Seeing as how they wander around siring children and killing things all the time their existence is undeniable.

It's not a learning thing, they literally cannot manipulate more than two arms at once.
Alaira Taenn

Oblivion, there was nothing. Just an endless dark void that Alaira's consciousness was relegated to. There was no dreams or thoughts, only the void.

But it did not last. She had soon awoken... somewhere. She knew not how to describe where she was, or if anybody could. Wait, no. It was gray. But that's it. This strange landscape didn't seem to play by any of the natural laws, and any time she thought she understood it, it would shift into some new indecipherable form. So, she walked. and walked. and walked.

As she walked, the land remained as formless as ever, as if it didn't want to allow her to identify it. While she walked, direction didn't really seem to matter, the laws of physics were functionally useless. That is until she arrived at what could only be referred to as the center. It was clearly a structure, similar in shape to a small colosseum, composed of bricks of stone the same color as the rest of the world. There were what looked like luminescent shards of glass suspended in the air, though what they actually were was a mystery.

She approached ones, and as she snatched it out of the air, she noticed something. Inside the shard, she could see... memories, as if she was looking through a window into the past. She sat there in silence (not that she had much choice, she found she couldn't speak here for whatever reason) as she watched herself walk Coco through the basics of spear-fighting. Letting go of the shard, she found that it drifted, unaffected by gravity.

There were thousands of these shards, each wordlessly playing fragments of memories. She couldn't even begin to describe what the hell any of this meant, but she was reasonable enough to know that going around breaking shit in frustration was not a great idea. And just like that, it was gone. All of it, everything was black again. But there was... noise. A sort of wailing...

Alaira suddenly shot awake, and the first thing she noticed was Lidda. The first reaction was of course to strangle the thing that looked like a demon, but instead of the lightning quick lunge to the throat, her movements were sluggish and unresponsive. Good thing too, she wouldn't have come to the realization that that was probably Lidda if she had been as fast as she was last night. The sudden (kinda) movement made her head hurt, so she put her hand to her head as she groaned and leaned back in the cot. "Ugh... I can't be dead, this hurts too much..." she complained. and there was still that noise burrowing into her head.

She took a moment to inspect herself, and found herself covered in bandages up to the neck. She tried removing some of the ones on her arm, but it took a while as her hand didn't seem to want to obey her, as if her fingers were made of lead. She eventually unwrapped her arm and found that it was fully healed. The tons of extra scars however, remained. Hundreds of tiny lacerations up and down her arms, however there were no extra scars on her shoulder. She imagined that the gashes were much larger, but the healers couldn't fully fix the wounds on her arms which must have been a lot worse because she hadn't worn anything on her arms that night.

She had definitely felt her head getting torn apart and her hair being pulled out, but she didn't feel any new scars and her hair seemed to be intact, if a little shorter. "Even went to the trouble of growing my hair back..." she mumbled to herself. She was still dimly aware of the wailing (well, dimly was how she perceived everything at the moment, she was still quite groggy), and right now she just wanted it to stop. At that point she suddenly remembered. Lyn! she looked around, slightly panicked, only to find Lyn was perfectly safe, and the source of said wailing. Mar was trying to calm her down, but to no avail.

Alaira tried to leave the cot, but once again her body was disobeying her. She felt heavy, as if her body didn't actually belong to her or the parts weren't receiving the signals. She got out, but fell to the floor. Wordlessly, she rose (it took a while) as she tried to approach. Luckily, they weren't very far away and there was plenty of stuff around she could hold for support.

After about a minute, she arrived, and sat on the cot aside Athalus'. "Hush... you don't need to cry, you're safe..." Alaira said softly, almost a whisper as she caressed Lyn's forehead.
Lucius Cypher said
That implies that this character was spliced to a living person. She only has extra arms, unless limbs carries the souls of people too. And note, in the backstory I have written in mind, these were fairly normal humans; no one of any particular unique ability was chosen, just anyone willing or available was experimented on. Those willing wasn't put through a mad science experiment so much as a rather mild-manner experiment operating on a very mad idea. It was free game on those simply taken, who were usually vagrants or wanders.


One human soul cannot operate extra limbs, only the things they were born with. You could graft additional limbs to a human without the other soul but they wouldn't be able to operate all four (or more) of their arms, just two at a time. Imagine if you suddenly grew two more arms. Would you be able to use all of them? you wouldn't have the instincts for them. In any event, you'd have to kill two humans to get their parts as nobody has figured out how to vat grow parts, and magically created ones don't... look right. Never mind that these kinds of things tends to royally piss off the gods.
I would be careful with magic weaknesses, as magic is extremely common.

Splicing a sentient with a non-sentient results in people like Alice, distrusted mutants with some kind of physical advantage coupled with a poor magical resistance. However psychological effects are nil. It is also frowned upon to do so, which means it isn't very common.

Splicing two sentients, is very, very bad. The two (or more) souls often mix improperly seeing as how even people with the same element have very different souls. The consequence is a constant war for dominance that tears the mind apart. This doesn't result in multiple personality disorder so much as violent incoherent insanity, and while the subjects usually mutate into absolute physical powerhouses or conduits of magical power a common result is loss of fine motor control and a sense of self.

Tl;dr They devolve into mindless (though powerful) beasts.
Lucius Cypher said
She's an Asura, where do you think those other arms are going to be? If anything, this is a fairly "realistic" depiction of what a six armed person is going to look like.


Not the horrible, veiny, obviously spliced/grafted parts where the joints intersect

TurboTuber said
Tavel Mardrum


Looks good man. if you wish (and I wholeheartedly recommend it) you can have a stronger weapon to start with, maybe a basic elemental enchantment on that hammer. Weaker stuff's dirt cheap and commonly available, so it's not exactly unreasonable for him to have such a thing, and considering the things on this planet he would definitely need it.

Other than that, I really admire the whole utility character thing you got going on. good job, potato.
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