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Ryo Katsu
Konohagakure Chuunin | Team 4

Member of the Ghost ANBU.


Ryo was biting his lower lip. This situation wasn't to his liking, but he had seen no way out of it. Besides, he wouldn't chicken out if there was a way to. His muscles trembled due the pain as he leaned a bit forward. Yet, he felt little regret at the moment. He had done this to safe not only his life, but to continue his duty. Thinking about it, he would die anyways. If it was now or later. With Yumi first leaving and then Katsuko, Ryo wanted to say something. Only to be silent when Katsuko said what he was going to do. He was going to spend his last day with his family. Ryo lowered his head, like he had just been defeated.

Family?

He hadn't worried about it for a long time. He had experienced so many things that he had forgotten about his situation. How strange it sounded, he only realized it now. He had none. Sure, he had friends that stood at his side and were always ready. But in these situations, he had nobody to rely on. Everybody had their family. Though he saw Katsuko and Kensuke as brothers and to some extent even Tsubasa as an older sister, Ryo could now see the illussion he had held up for himself. They had their families and loved ones. Who was there for him?

Midori.

The memories of Midori brought briefly a smile on his lips. The time that they had spent together were memories he truly cherished. Only then to remember a detail. She was in Kumogakure. Thus he wouldn't even be able to spend a day with her. His last day alive. He would be alone. If it wasn't depressing enough that he had no family, it was now like it was somehow slammed into his face. Not crying, he felt like he would. Simply, he would leave for his own apartment. First over the rooftops, but after some distance, he would take it to the streets. Landing on the ground without any trouble, Ryo looked around him. People were minding their own business. Like nobody looked after him. It made Ryo stand still, in the midst of the street. Nobody that called out to him or wanted to spend a day with him. It was just like those years back.

He had worked hard for the bonds he had now. Today would be the last day he would have most of them. But even while he had worked all these years for them, tomorrow they would mean nothing. Ryo stuffed his hands into the pockets of his pants as his head was lowered. It troubled the mind of the young man. Strange. Like his efforts for a better life and such goals were nothing worth. They had been taken away, just like that. Or they would be. Confused, Ryo felt something on his cheek. Rubbing his left hand over his cheek, he didn't care about it anymore. Or at least, that was what he tried to tell himself. He didn't want to care about everybody. Nobody cared for him. If they did, where were they now?

No, they were with families and people they wanted to spend the day with.

Not with him.


Continueing to walk towards his home, Ryo thought about what he had been through. Training for the chuunin exams, missions with team Sayomi and getting placed into another mission. Losing contact with Katsuko for quite a long time and the war with Sunagakure. The Elders taking over Konohagakure, the march from Keishi to the Rice capital. The fight there and everything. Was it all for nothing? Ryo wondered about it. He had always lost something, but gained so much in return. Kensuke, Tsubasa, Sayomi, Katsuko and Midori. Of course, there were more people he had became friends with. But it was just that it seemed so pointless.

Opening the door of his appartement, Ryo looked around. Closing the door, he went to his own room. He knew what he was going to do. First he would arrange something. Ryo wouldn't sever his bonds just like that. No, he would try to give them one more memento of him. Two people he really cared for. Sitting down on his bed, Ryo sighed. A glance to his right and he noticed the photo frame he really loved. It had the picture of Team Sayomi. Slowly, his hand went towards it. And then turned it around, not wanting to see it anymore.

''So this is it. Guess I should arrange this first.'' Ryo picked up a kunai. He looked at the weapon that he had pulled out of the holster. Pricking his thumb, he would set the first step of his ''goodbye''. Already he felt something warm moving over his cheeks. Without anybody around, he felt no shame in crying.
Zakito Hon,
Konohagakure Jounin Commander,
Hon Clan Leader.


Finally, Hisoka had made clear who had to do what. Zakito waited for a brief moment before he would give the next command to the jounin. The most important thing that they had to do was to keep the peace. It was very disturbing and frightening that the Host of the Kyuubi had been kidnapped. It would be bad if the word would spread, both for political as for civil rest. ''Listen up. I want every jounin to keep doing what they had done before. Those who have moved out, just go on a regular patrol. Keep your eyes and ears open for anything, but don't act right away without permission. Our main task will be guarding the peace in the Leaf for now.''

With that, Zakito would head back to the Konohagakure Office. Walking, instead over the rooftops running and jumping. He was thinking about what they could do. Chang would hopefully be able to learn more about the rather brutal and effective assault soon enough. If he would have that information he could order the troops better around. But he would also need to form a team or such. It would be a wrong signal if they would do nothing to recover the host of the Kyuubi, who was also a nephew of him. It troubled Zakito a bit that he wasn't able to do more for Miharu, but he was also responsible for a huge group of people. Sending shinobi all over the place would do no good and could result in unrest or worse.

''I want Team 2 and 7 to rest out and then to meet me at the Jounin comandder office. This must happen within two days.'' Zakito ordered through the earphone communicators. He had a special reason for listing those two teams and why they had to be ready within two days. Hopefully by then they could pin point where Miharu was. That and those two teams were not just regarded by Zakito as two good teams, but for their abilities. At least, the captains of the teams as both were trained by him. Hopefully he could place his faith and trust once more in those two. Approaching the Hokage Office building, Zakito sighed.
Gyuki,
The Hachibi | Midori's Tummy Monster


Hearing Midori's reply through their bond, the beast snorted. A loud and clear sound that was a signal. One that Midori knew. Gyuki wasn't agreeing. ''Listen up. He is a drag. Mine chakra can reduce the time of the poison, but even chakra can't neutralize poison fully. It will just adapt to the change of chakra and then you will have to do it without my help.''[ Gyuki responded with a stern voice. He wasn't angry, but she didn't see what was going to become a problem. And there were some already rising. ''That boy is going to cause our downfall. Drop him.'' Gyuki further said. Chasing the bird? The beast wasn't even aware if they could make it that far. Like it would be easy to capture the sparrow. That would mean she had split up some chakra to go to waste.

''If I go after the bird, I will not last longer than three minutes. Now we can maybe just barely reach that place of yours. Alone. The more we try to do something, the sooner the poison spread. The punch was to drive him back as we can't have him with us. That and don't get comfortable with me, Midori.'' The stern voice that held no aggression or anger started to shift to a more growling one. It wasn't a topic Gyuki liked at all. ''You're borrowing my chakra to sustain yourself. Don't even try to transfer chakra to that miserable pest.'' The idea alone made him grow angry, something that if she could sense with ease due their training. Midori was so far the only one he would grant his chakra without much of a hassle. Everybody else, no matter the situation or condition wasn't an option. Both for his personal reasons as for safety. Bijuu chakra wasn't something that everybody could endure!
Hiron Hon,
Konohagakure Jounin | Team 9

Rallying the team.


Hiron had heard the news of Miharu's capture. Then it went a bit wrong. But he kept himself calm and cool. There was no need for him to also command people around. All he did was to rally his team. Indirectly he would keep his team together as well trying to aid to the situation. Only problem was that he already had gained a reply back. Masami was kept back at the Hyuuga Compound. Of course, the Hyuuga clan had just to irk him. Grumbling, Hiron's mood was already dropping.

Now he was waiting in front of the main gate, for his other two students. It wasn't a meeting he had set up, but he was sure that he had made sure it was needed for them to gather up as soon as possible. Thinking about what they are going to do, Hiron realized that he would have to watch out what he was going to say. Revealing too much information wouldn't be good for either him or them. Placing his right hand on the hilt of his tanto, Hiron briefly checked if he could draw the weapon quickly. Putting it back, he wondered again if his students would show up soon. Time was of the essence now.
Gyuki,
The Eight Tails, Hachibi.


The ink clone of Midori, threw a glare towards Deidara. He said nothing back. He had nothing to say against such an inferior live form. He just wanted Deidara to stay away from Midori. Noticing that the boy made a water clone, Gyuki felt the need to scoff. The fact he could move better in a clone body was due the quantity and quality of his chakra. It empowered the technique, to the point that he could move a bit better. To see Deidara trying the same made Gyuki think even lower of the boy. Midori. We need to get out of this mist. That and your friend needs to shut up. We're in a situation that we aren't aware who or what is around us. Neither of us are sensors, remember? Gyuki spoke in Midori's mind. He had no intention to co-operate with other humans, nobody else than Midori. That and the poison is going to become annoying. Even my chakra can't withhold it for that long. We need to get back to that place of yours. Gyuki advised her. The only part he left out was that Deidara couldn't get any help of his chakra.

Probably they would have to find a way to drag him over there, though Gyuki wouldn't mind if they would leave him. It wasn't like he was of any value to Gyuki.
@Eklispe

The CS looks good, save for it from the custom technique.

''Covers the body of the user in water which slows down any impact before it can reach the skin, This technique lowers the speed of the user but essential enables then to react to any attack before it lands.''

Before any attack lands? That sounds quite odd. It lowers the speed, but yet enables to react on any attack? You should likely take that out. As for weakness, I think you need to say that it lowers the speed and lightning. Fire is actually the thing that a water armor would be useful against, but would be suicide against a lightning release user.
It looks good, but you should remove the Beast Wave Palm technique. Seeing it can cut through anything, that is a bit too much. The Blade of Wind Technique is already a better technique than the Beast Wave.

As for the custom techniques, I am pondering on the first custom technique. It is saying it pulls the victim/target into striking distance. But how is that limited? With the target having less strength, so that it will become kind of pulling between the user and target? Is sight on the target required? It does remind me of some auto-hit, as I would like to know how it is one custom technique while it has two kind of techniques : The push and pull and then the lightning.

I also think you need to look at this :
J8's review
Gyuki,
The Eight tails,

Midori's Tummy Monster.


Midori would hear a scoff. The beast was laying on his stomach, his head resting on his arms as he conversed with her. ''Let me take over the clone.'' He told her. It sounded more like an order than an actuall suggestion or proposal. But he had his own reasons for that. Slowly opening his eyes, Gyuki spoke once more. ''Though with this sad state you are in, the clone will not be anything better. But I can do.. some satisfying actions.'' The Tailed Beast waited for Midori's reaction.

The clone that was created with ink flawlessly formed into Midori. Making use of the action as well that Midori would likely not prevent him, Gyuki quickly took over control. The clone seemed to be a bit confused. The touch of the air outside always felt like a relieve. Only for the thought to come up later. He wasn't free. With her back turned to Deidara and Midori, the ink clone of Midori didn't move at first. The poison was annoying. But Gyuki had anticipated that it would make it less easy to move around. The area suddenly felt like there was some heavy pressure leaning on everybody. Turning around, the ink clone rammed a fist towards Deidara. Due his state, he wouldn't be able to dodge the sudden attack, combined with the brief amount of killing intent that would take everybody by surprise. But the ink clone wasn't aiming to hurt Deidara. That was just something Gyuki would enjoy. It was to drive Deidara away from Midori.

Speaking, the ink clone had the same voice as Midori. ''First we need to find a way to help Reyna.'' Then Midori would hear Gyuki's voice. That and I realized something.... We need to talk later, Midori. For now the clone would provide some back up. But Gyuki was aware that the poison wouldn't allow him to control the clone without some empowering chakra. However, it was a risk worth it. Else he could always make Midori spin some lie.

Or else...

Take over and tell it himself.~
I will have a post up today as well. ;)
The bonding training of Hiron!
A new way to train!

A collab between Chromehound and Gerontis.


Summary :

Hiron have called for Shikaroku to train and meet him. However, considering him to be the newest and least experienced member of the team, Hiron decides to take the training into a way he has never done before. The start of the sensei-student bond of Hiron and Shikaroku!

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