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Naruto : The Rise of The New Generations

Satoshi Jun
Kumogakure Specialized Jounin | Team 3

Watching Kato's walking back and said that Satoshi should take care of the earth wall, the young man cocked his head a bit to the right. His conclussion was simple about Kato. He managed to it nicely. There was some big flaws, but like every genin, he would be trained to lessen that. His flaws were that he was too direct. Satoshi had been suppressing a smirk when he had noticed Kato had prepared his turn, with his jutsu. It was however a big flaw that the boy had charged. He had little idea of Satoshi's abilities and if it had been a real battle, the boy would've not been able to get through the wall. However, it was just a little test on what they could do. Making another shadow clone, Satoshi spoke. ''I will do. Take it easy now.'' Satoshi politely instructed. The shadow clone took out a kunai. The weapon glanced with a strange glint. A blueish one.

Suddenly the wall was crumbling as the clone had lashed out with the kunai. The blueish glint around the kunai had spread out a wave of pure chakra, slicing through the earth wall. Then it faded away as the clone stored the kunai away, turning his attention to the last member of the team. The real Satoshi nodded. ''Shizuka Nadra. Your turn.''

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Hiron Hon,
Konohagakure Jounin | Team 9

So they were working together now? This was better than just coordinate their attacks and revealing to each other what they were doing. Hiron noticed that they were talking to each other, but he would train them later in use of tactics. It would be safer and much better if they had learned pre-set tactics and would use simple words to signal what tactic would be of better use. Of course, what they were doing now was covering it. With Shikaroku holding the turtle in place with his shadow technique, Hiron then noticed that Mai was requesting Masami to make some distance as she and her ninken launched their attack. It was in basic terms a good decision and attack. Holding and pin pointing your enemy was always a good manner to take them out. If you had neutralized their defenses as well. Hiron narrowed his eyes.

The turtle made some annoyed grunts as he noticed that he was being hold back. His tail made some slow and rather strange movements, likely trying to break free from Shikaroku's shadow technique. ''You...'' The turtle's deep voice rumbled from out of the shell as his head came out and frowned. He had heard some noises and then noticed Mia's ninken and her attack. Instantly the head moved back in as the tail also moved in. Spikes then moved out of the shell, at the top.

Hiron had saw this coming as they had forgotten to check the defenses. However..
His gaze went to Masami, as he had suspected that she would likely alarm that the turtle had little defenses on his flanks now. The spikes could only erupt from the top. Hiron did wonder if Mia had forgotten about that. Last time, he had made this mission too with the previous Team 9. They had worked together in order to beat the turtle, which ended in success. This team had some more potential as Shikaroku wasn't as silent and distant as Xinsai, nor did they had a loudmouthed troublemaker as the Bull. For now it was waiting what they would do in order to prevent the creature from entering the lake.

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@Nytefall

Think I know you?
At any rate, my review :

1. ) We don't use the chakra or any kind of pills. They are a bit of broken in fights as they prolong it and thus are deemed to be something we shouldn't use.
2. ) The traits are off. Starting genins are fresh genins from the Academy. Its also not possible to make them start with above average chakra reserves and a good chakra control. For an experienced chuunin that would be possible, but not for a genin.
3. ) Am not sure about the Kekkei Genkei. Think that hardening and using blood can be interesting, but I will remain neutral over that for now.
4.) I would like to suggest to read the rules. The rank of a genin is that they can start with Two C ranked Jutsu and four D ranked jutsu. I shall review the jutsu once you have made the changes in that section.

- Gero.

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Satoshi Jun,
Kumogakure Specialized Jounin | Team 3

Satoshi watched how Tahekiko first stepped up. Simply nodding as the genin went to attack the clone, Satoshi was wondering about several things. It was clear the boy was focused on taijutsu and close combat, seeing he hadn't take the decision to attack the clone from a distance with a jutsu or a weapon. His speed was good enough for a genin, as Satoshi noticed that his reflexes were good enough to catch and use the attack of the clone. Even while the shadow clone hadn't even try it best, it was something that Satoshi made a mental note of. When Tahekiko said he should take him out quicker, Satoshi showed no sign of what his thoughts were about that. In his own opinion he would form that the boy would be a decent close ranged fighter. Only he would need to keep his ego and surrounding in check. Maybe something with weapons or such training would go well with the boy's skills.

With that thought out, Satoshi formed another Shadow clone, who took the same position and stance of where the last one had begun. ''You did it well enough, Tahekiko. Please stand back as somebody else now may take their turn.'' Satoshi politely instructed, waiting for which of his other students would now step up. He wondered about if he should pay extra attentiont to make sure Kato wouldn't get in another silly rush of state, but the young man decided to not over think the situation. So far, it seemed that everything was fine and in order.

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The first one. Satoshi is going to create a clone and then examines the way how the students take it down. If you're eager to write, I could propose your genin also thinks or ponders on how their team mate has taken down the clone or how they will do it. Thoughts like that. ;)

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@Gamer
I know, but often its easy to adapt it more easily.

@Asura
Well, starting genins are only allowed to start with small summonings. And am not sure about a Panda with Wood Release. Think that we might discuss it later, but for now its a no from me.

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Gamer, please. I appreciate your input and all, but its WIP. Its a reason why none of the GM's reacted on it. Its a work in progress and we have the capable people who can help out newcomers. Please keep that in mind.

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Hiron Hon,
Konohagakure Jounin | Team 9

Hiron watched as his team operated. The turtle was not enjoying the fact that his students were slowly working together. It was still lacking, but it seemed the base was there. Mia was holding back and Hiron frowned. She wasn't going easy to let the others work harder? That was not only against the policy of the team, of giving it your all and no mercy, but also quite foolish. He had briefed them that the opponent had tricked a whole team of chuunins. Sighing, Hiron stayed quiet. For now he would just take mental notes and would lecture his students after this mission.

The big turtle noticed the fact that his foes were on more than one side. He scoffed as he seemed to prepare himself. Suddenly he withdraw himself in his shell. The only limb that wasn't out was the tail. It started to sweep around, causing mud to be swept up in the air. But it also started to push the turtle towards the water, as well making it harder to get near it. It caused a smirk on the lips of the jounin.

Lets see how they cover that....

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Satoshi Jun,
Kumogakure Specialized Jounin | Team 3

Satoshi didn't buy the lies of Kato, but neither did he showed any reaction or spoke against him. As it seemed the boy had regained his senses, the young man saw no further need to talk abut it. He would write a letter and request that some particular things would be wiped out of Kato's mind. Seemed that he had gained something that wasn't quite healthy. However, Kato spoke again, telling that the fighting introduction were stupid and what not. Satoshi frowned.

''If you would be on time, you would have been part of the introduction we had earlier. There was no fighting, but simply some talk. Maybe less exciting than a fighting introduction. Then again, you seem to find those dull and dumb, so not sure if you would've like the talk either.'' Satoshi replied with a polite tone. He wasn't bending on being too sarcastic as it may seemed, but he would likely make a point. His students were free to ask him things or request, as he was simply their sensei. It was his job after all to try to keep them safe and guide them at his best. However, he didn't see it as his job to hearing what they preferred. But Satoshi wouldn't dwell or bring that up. Would be a waste of breath and effort.

''Though you may find this dull, Kato, I still need to be sure what each of you is capable. Your profiles already told me a great deal, but I need to see you all in action. That said, I want you to perform this training. Each of you has to show me your best.'' Satoshi instructed themm. Making a shadow clone, who started to create some distance, Satoshi nodded to his clone. ''You need to show me how you would take out the clone. See it as a real opponent. However, don't rush it. My shadow clone will take it easy. One by one... So... who is willing to go first?'' He asked, eyeing his students with a curious look while his shadow clone prepares a defensive stance.

(Permission to control the shadow control is allowed.)

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Glitch, it was said on the OOC and spread around for several times. That if you want to learn something in the timeskip, let us know it and then we'll discuss it. It has been said before the December crash and several times in the insanity of the group chat. Also some members spread it. Like Gamer said, its a bit annoying, but that is how it is. If you want your character to learn something in two years, you have to write trainings etc. We have opened a whole time skip board for it, but still need to know what and how. For now we won't accept anything new as the deadline has already passed. Some still need to write down trainings and such in order to get what they asked for fully approved, but that is it.

I am not always on skype and the policy is indeed that we don't chase after inactive people anymore. You said that you disappeared without mention and I have it fairly busy myself. Like you, I can say it wasn't that hard to pm me yourself. But that is something we can drag out a long time. Best thing is just to plan some trainings in the IC with Gamer and that would be it. Next time, please watch the OOC or ask me on occasion if there is something new or such. That way we can avoid these kinds of things. :)