Green

Jedi Bounty

Name: Jaskan Voth
Age- 20
Gender- Male
Species- Human
Build - Obese
Rank- Padawan
Lightsaber- Double edged green light-saber that can detach into two separate light-sabers.
Combat style: Form IV: Ataru
Appearance:


Power/Abilities: Jaskan Voth is heavily specialized at light-saber combat. The Ataru form, to be specific. To this extent, every ounce of his force potential has been pushed into mastering this one style, to the extreme degree that he is able to pull of acrobatic moves of a level of finesse and grace others would deem impossible, especially for a man of his overweight stature and physical condition, by using the force to assist his every movement. He is highly proficient at wielding one, or two light-sabers, as well as the double edged one, and combines all three into a single modified way of fighting that consists of rapidly switching between them all. He is completely incapable of affecting the world around him with the force, as every moment of training has been focused on pushing his fighting potential to the limit. On the battlefield, he is a blur of swift strikes and flips that would put even Yoda to shame. His physique is far from perfect, however, and he tires out very quickly.

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Oh yes, that one is pretty neat.

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LeeRoy said
Anyone ever sit down and watch short films? That shit's high quality yo.

All the time. Did I tell you that I study film?

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Schradinger said
Overweight and Ataru? I'm gonna love seeing how you pull that one off... Lol.

Heh. Well, Ataru is all about using the force to move around all acrobatic-like, so it´s a lot less complicated than it sounds.

His endurance, however..

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Schradinger said
Morning, Green. How's that Jedi coming? I'm itching to fight something that can actually fight back. Ever since I got here it's been nothing but nameless NPC's. Lol.

I´m trying to find my old sketchbook. I kept the character sheet of an overweight ataru-style jedi in it. Once I find him I´ll get him up :)

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On that note, morning Schradinger.

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Beta said
Well, first I mention that it's not your character or your fightThen I mention how anyone who reads my CS can likely think of just as many things to do that can fuck that dome over as I can.It was intended to be. Your grasp of the obvious has been noted.

Then -do- those things, and stop ranting.

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Hokay. Don´t feel like watching this turn into a shitfest along the lines of what happened last time, so we´re going to clear this up real quick;

- "Flying together" can in no way be interpreted as "Flying at the same time." - Especially as the spell is describing how the caster turns into a flock of birds (as in, a swarm creature), not that it matters, since the dome is going to stop them anyway, but it´s worth mentioning. If the writers of the book wanted to say "flying at the same time", they would have used that wording, and not something different entirely.

- Yes, Erde can create a massive stone dome like that, poof, super fast. As a high-tiered single-element focused character, that is actually well-below the worst he could have done. He is not auto-hitting you at all.

In short; There´s a dome around you, trapping you inside with Erde. What do you do?

Edit: What Vordak said.

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@Boerd - Since LeeRoy went to sleep; For now, sort out the formatting. Make the ship itself a clear part of the profile, as right now it´s hard to tell what´s part of the ship, and what is not. I don´t know if you´ve described the physical appearance of the ship (which sounds more like a fighter, if I understood things correctly), but if you haven´t, please do. Remember to note where each weapon and utility is located on the craft, as that will without doubt come into play if the ship is used in a fight. Also, how fast can it fly? Does it maneouver in the same way as other aerial/space crafts? More detail on most of the ships weapons would be prefered as well, as most of them does not mention the destructive capacity they carry. Describe the extent of which they affect their potential targets.

The character himself seems fine, as long as you note him as a low-tier. You might consider adding a bit more detail on his physical appearance; What colour is his uniform? What does it look like? Does he have any visible weapons or armor on him? Etc.

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Well, I´m at work, so it´s a god damn miracle I´m even saying anything at all.