GreenGoat

Kite, The Realm Within One's Heart (High All-Around Fantasy RP)

Odd... She thought these military types liked to be the one in command, barking out orders simply because they can.

"Fire?" Juno looked behind her, at the plumes of smoke too close for comfort. "And the three men... No, we get to the village, for all we know those were the very same persons who set off the fire, and that monkey thing may be in league with them. Forest fires move very quickly, or so I heard, so let us not stand around here, lest we be engulfed in flames ourselves."

Then again, there was no real guarantee the village would be friendly to them at all. At best, the villagers will be very uncooperative. At worse... well, she could at least try to hold them back long enough for the young people to escape.

A strange feeling of dread came over her as she anticipates being met with hostile villagers, that feeling growing stronger the closer they got to the village. Oni weren't usually regarded well by the general people who believed in them after all.

Mobile Suit Gundam - Those Who Correct - Crossover

Clarifying on what I'm getting an all clear on, them grunts or that MA?

Mobile Suit Gundam - Those Who Correct - Crossover

So... I get an all clear on that newly arrived MA?

Fate/Red Winter

Alright, for Ferdiad. His personal skills alone make him very powerful, with the ability to use 18 original runes to buff himself, use damaging spells against the enemy, or whatever support he needs, combined with battle continuation and warrior of the ford, he would be very hard to take down.

Also, there is quite a lot of rank ups.

The noble phantasm thus serve to make him rather over powered. Trom is borderline acceptable, but that static rank up is kinda iffy. Does it simply rank up his strength to A, or does it add a + to the rank?

Duel of the desperate seems to be simply a souped up Ath n Gabla but the problem I'm seeing here is the rank up and the defense piercing. The rank up combined with the Warrior of the Ford, using the 18 runes to buff yourself plus the sword's rank up gives a very nasty combination that allows you to steamroll through most conventional heroes. The rank down is alright imo. The defence piercing is highly unnecessary considering the skill of Ferdiad as a warrior.

The skin is mostly alright except for that it reflects damage back to the attacker. 75% of damage reflected back is very high. This alone would allow him to simply facetank most everything and kill them while they kill themselves. Combined with the others, he could very much end the war by himself in the first day. Also, I doubt most people know about conceptual weapons or know about the realm of authorities.lol

The character concept is quite good actually, but all the rank ups are very iffy, especially since Warrior of the Ford plus his runes would already make him powerful in close combat. He is more suited to be in a game as an antagonist, where the protagonist at least has the story to back them up and perhaps some deus ex machina to be able to defeat him. My suggestion would be to tone Ferdiad down, especially all those rank up, fix up that Skin some, and leave warrior of the ford.

A Certain Academic City

DOUBLE POST!

Anyone else haven't posted? If not, I'm going to write up a post soon

Fate/Red Winter

Im getting some shuteye now.

I'll have a look over all the cses when I wake up. ^^;

Fate/Red Winter

Hmm... I need you to explain more on what your noble phantasm does. Does it just take people into a snow world?

Also, I do hope you realize making a reality marble, essentially another plane, require a lot of prana. Like... a lot of prana. An amount non magus don't usually have. That may mean you self destructing with your Master.

Fate/Red Winter

I should probably clarify that A+ to A+++ are extremely exceptional and rare. It requires being justified in his legends. Also, the Assassin class are routinely weaker than the others, hence the presence concealment. As it is now, Assassin is incredibly overpowered. Even Heracles reached only A+ on his strength stat.

Also, I forgot to put the description part for the noble phantasm. Please describe what your noble phantasm is and how they work so I can judge how they work.

P.S Master CS is alright.

P.P.S Don't be afraid to ask should you have any questions. ^^;

Fate/Red Winter

The Archer Class is reserved for now, but all the other classes are open.

Fate/Red Winter (Casual Int Check)

And here is OOC.